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Posted: 7 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: janumkrk
thank you so much for your comments and love my dear friends.. am happy to inform you all that am back...

so you all except a update this week.. stay tuned

i will post a short teaser by tomorrow...

love you all takecare ...

janu

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#472

ok am not completely full part but i will give a short update of 1500words then i will update other part.

hope you all wont mind.

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#473

PART 12

BANNER BY LOVELYUMANG

BANNER BY MAANEETFAVO

NOTE:
italian words are self talk or thoughts of the characters.
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sasha: Few workers, MD would be an 60yrs old who dont have any brand value. who want to do internship there, we will find some other companies

Geet: ok then, I will inform our professor about you both doing internship alone...

AND about your queries on company, its an MNC with branches all over the world and 5 branches in india, about MD he is rude and attitude king, but he is super handsome and his age must be within 26,

MAAN SINGH KHURANA AND KHURANA CONSTRUCTION IS ITSELF A BRAND WHICH SET'S THE VALUE FOR OTHERS.. then who cares for brand value.

annie: Geets lets leave we dont have to waste time on them... we have to reach Kc by 1.30pm ..

Pinky: haan geetu lets go..

Geet still stood there glaring at both sasha and tasha making them fear, Annie and pinky hold geets hand from both sides and start pulling her away from them when they all hear someone calling them.

Varun: A girls what is going on here. Am calling you all you dint hear.

Annie pinky sasha and tasha turn to see varun standing few steps away from them. But geet didn't turn immediately but turned after few seconds controlling her anger. She turned and smiles at him and moves towards him.

Varun immediately gives her a brotherly hug,

Sasha : ohh god he is handsome

Tasha: haan sasha, see his muscles

Sasha : am going to make him my boyfriend.

Varun: hi girls am varun and i dint see you two before, may i know your sweet names. Varun spoke in a flirting style

Sasha: hi handsome, am sasha and can we go out for lunch

Varun: hmm ok as you wish, ok girls come lets go anyways am free today.

He turned towards geet holding her hands he stepped forward.

Sasha: Varun why are you holding this behenji villagers hand. Am speaking about us only you and me.

Varun looks at annie and pinky he knows something is wrong so he turned towards geet he asked her.

Varun: who are they? R their your friends?

Sasha: what me and her friend noway, she is not upto my level handsome, she is afterall a poor villager, leave her lets go for lunch

Varun snaps the hands of sasha that is holding his right hand. "HELLO MISS MIND YOUR WORDS, SHE IS MY SISTER AND AM ALSO FROM THE SAME VILLAGE WHERE SHE CAME FROM THEN DONT YOU MIND GOING OUT WITH A VILLAGER, YOU SAID POOR WHO IS POOR SHE IS A MULTI MILLIONER." I dont have the habit of raising my hands on a female so you are saved, next time if i see you troubling my gudiya then you are gone for sure.

Sasha and tasha stood still shivering from top to bottom, Annie and pinky smiles at them and follow varun who is taking geet to parking lot where his new SUV car is parked.

Annie: geet stop varun varun wait.

Annie and pinky walking behind them in hurry to match their steps
Varun brings geet near his car and stops annie and pinky also reach them.

Varun: gudiya, y dint u say about them troubling you before itself. Wait am calling arjun.

Geet: Varun no need of it. I will handle them, dont say to bhai.. you know him na.

Annie: varun dont worry about them, we will take care of it.

Pinky: haan varun bhai mein hoon na geetu ki sath.

Varun: but if their is any problem you should say it to me. Did you all get that.

Trio: yes boss, they say it with a salute making him to smile

Varun: ok come now lets all go for lunch then you all show me around delhi and then i will drop you all back in hostel by evening. How about the plan

Geet: Varun, today we have little work but we will come for lunch

Varun: what work..

Pinky: project work varun bhai. So going to kc for internship procedures.

Varun: ok then after lunch i will drop u all to kc

Geet: ok bhai just wait for 5 minutes we have to collect our identity certificate from professor.

Varun: ok gudiya , i will wait here.

All three leave , varun made himself comfortable leaning back on his car and looking at the way his gudiya went until she disappeared from his eye sight, he turned around to take a good look at college permises when he say sasha and tasha coming out of canteen and going to class through parking he glared at them for talking like that with his geet, his glare made sasha and tasha take a run before he pounce on them like a hungry tiger. His anger again raises as geet is a princess for his family from day of her birth till now no one raised even their voice before her not even his dadaji. Then how dare this delhi half dressed monkeys make fun of geet that too before me.. suddenly he remembered why he is here so he called arjun who would be worried for gudiya.

after conforming no one is around he called arjun,

Arjun: hello varun, you reached there? Where is gudiya is she safe.

Varun: haan bhai, i reached and meet geet also, she is safe as of now. Dont worry i will do as per our plan,

Arjun: ok don't forget to call me once you start from there.

Varun: bhai one small change, gudiya want to go to Kc for some procedures so we will take time,

Arjun: but

Varun: bhai am here na i will bring her before 5. She will be safe. And dont forget your part in plan. I message you once we start from Kc.

Arjun: ok i will see to it. Bye takecare of yourself and our gudiya, if you find anything suspicious you should call me dont forget.

Varun: sure bhai bye.

He cuts the call and sits in driver seat relaxing himself when his thoughts flow back to yesterday night event which made his presence around geet important today.

(Flashback arjun's flat )

after dropping trio in kc arjun and varun reached home and sit for causal chat varun teasing arjun taking annis name and to discuss further plan to safeguard geet.

When the landline rang arjun went to pick the call,

Arjun: hello

Dadaji: hello arjun beta

Arjun: Dadaji, how are you and others, there is no problem na? Hearing arjun's worried voice varun moves near him and put the call in speakers

Dadaji: Arjun beta everyone is fine here and how are you all? Where is varun am trying to reach you both from past 1 hour but you are not picking up.

Arjun: we all are fine dadaji, varun is here only standing next to me, sorry dada my phone got switched off .

Dadaji: ohh ok but one important thing

Arjun and varun: what dada

Dadaji: tomorrow is full moon night, please take extra care on geetu... she should not go out after moon raises on sky.

Varun: dadaji we will take care of her,

Dadaji: try to keep her with you, dont let her alone. We can't understand from where and when they will attack.

Arjun: Dadaji really do you think its all true? Even if it is true do you think we can stop them.

Dadaji: Arjun have you forgot what guruji told and what he made you see? Are you afraid of your responsibility or your life

Arjun: yes dadaji am afraid very much afraid but not for myself but for my gudiya and her safety.

Dadaji: nothing will happen to our gudiya just few more months. Then everything will be fine.

Varun: Dadaji you too takecare, tomorrow you have to meet guruji na

Dadaji: hmm.. yeah, Ok you all takecare if you need anything call me.

After cutting the call varun and arjun discussed and ended up framing a plan. As part of plan varun came to college to meet geet. He opened his eyes to see trio coming near the car. ...

KHURANA MANSION 8pm

Maan and adi came to km for breakfast, they all settled down in dining table,

Dadi's pov:

After serving us as per order all staffs left nakul who came from kitchen kept the remaing juice jar after filling our glass and was about to go. I was planning a way to start the marriage conversation again when i heard my grandson's voice stopping nakul

MAAN: NAKUL

NAKUL: ji sir

MAAN: luckages are in entrance of mansion place it in car and ask the driver to be ready. U..u

A fear took over me hearing about travel again but i signalled nakul to do as per told, who is looking at my face with same shocked expression like me

Nakul: ji sir. Saying this nakul moved out of the mansion.

Dadi: maan beta Any new project meetings, are you both going? When will you return.

MAAN: haan dadi, we are going out of station will return day after tomorrow in afternoon..

Dadi: ohh ok... may i know where

Maan who was sipping his juice listening my question placed the glass on table and looked at me i can see traces of restlessness in the eyes of maan singh khurana, my grandson whom i brought up from a very young age... i again looked at his eyes to confirm what i saw is right but before that adi interupt us.

Adi: mumbai dadimaa. Today afternoon we will go from kc directly

After his changed attitude after returning from Australia , i was very much peculiar and conscious about him not going to any foreign countries for longer periods. I myself know am too much concerned about him but the thought of losing my grandson again is not okay with me.

From past few weeks only am seeing a little bit of change in him and am having the hope to see my maan again. But again the trip is giving me bad vibes. But am okay that he is not going too far and will return soon. I thought of speaking about geet with him but i know its not right time now.

I saw both man before me having their food silently and laying their spoons away after completing breakfast. I saw nakul coming in after doing the work.

Nakul: maan sir, the car is ready.

maan:ok,

After delivering the message nakul left to kitchen not before looking at me with disappointed face for allowing maan to leave, Feeling a hand on my shoulder i turned back to see maan near me

maan: dadimaa i will return soon, takecare of yourself.

Once again i saw the small maan who has always cared and loved his family taking up all burdens on his shoulder after his parents accident. I rises my hands cupping his face between my both hands.

Dadi: hmm.. you both takecare, maan after your return i want to speak something important with you.

maan: sure dadimaa, bye.

Saying this both left km to reach kc.

KHURANA CONSTRUCTION (9am):

Maan and adi enter's the cabin but today seems to be a worst day for kc staffs... the distance between lift to maan's cabin is only 20feet which takes max 2min to cover within this short time he made a record of dismissing nearly 10 peoplez...

Maan sat on his chair when adi came to brief about the meeting that has to be held today for which maans presence in important. After adi left maan called his P.A to come in.

MAAN: postpond all the meeting of today afternoon and tomorrow to Saturday and Sunday.

P.A: yes sir

MAAN: you may leave now and tell to not connect any call to me.

P.A: yes sir.

After that maan and adi was busy in completing their works in their respective cabins.

Maan looked up hearing this cabin door bring knocked placing the filez in his hand away after complete 3 hours. Adi entered the cabin to let maan know about the clients arrival.

The whole meeting went smoothly after which maan and mr.mehra decided to start their work after mehra coming from his foreign trip after a month.

After completing meeting adi and maan was about to leave to site and from there to airport when maan's P.A enter's his cabin to inform about annie and friends being here to meet them.

Varun's car ( 12.45pm) :

Varun is on wheels, geet next to him annie and pinky on backseat...

Varun: so my dear ladies where can we go for lunch.

Annie and pinky: xyx restaurant, its our favourite restaurant.

Varun: so gudiya wat u say?

Geet who was looking out of window looked at varun and just nod her head for ok

Annie: geetu wat happened... are you still thinking about that sasha's words.

Geet: no nothing like that.

Varun: so what was the fight about.. are they always treating you all like this.

Pinky: haan bhai, from the day we joined her they always behave like this only

[COLOR=RED]Geet: haan varun they are always a headache.

Annie: geetu i want to ask one think you will never lose your cool what happened today that u started to shout at them..

Geet: it just today is not my day. I dont know what happened but am not feeling well today.

Varun self thoughts: maybe its something about that full moon day.

Pinky: bhai where are you lost we reached.

They all enter and take a corner seat and order the food.

Annie and pinky smiles at eachother which

Geet: y you both are smiling at me

pinky: Nothing we are thinking how did our dear geetu got dd fever.

Varun : dd fever? Is it somekind of viral fever. Geetu are you alright, do you see any symptoms..

Annie: haan varun, see her she is abnormally quite, pale...

Varun self thoughts: its not dd fever basic symptoms of fullmoon night.

Pinky: haan varun bhai, one more most important symptom is our geetu is always thinking about dd, even today she supported dd.

Geet: pinky i dint support him its just i said kc is best for internship.

Varun: i cant understand. Dd? Him? Kc what kc has to do with viral fever.

Geet annie and pinky broke out into laughter... for varun thinking dd as virus.

Annie: varun dd is geetu's boyfriend

Varun: what gudiya really? Do you have bf

Geet: varun they are just teasing me

Varun: ohh.. geetu do you like someone.

Geet: varun, i dont like anyone. If i do anyday i will first inform you only even before informing arjun bhai. You know well you are my best friend than bhai...

And you both stop creating my love story that too with that Dhust dhanav chi chi babaji.

After lunch all leaves to kc. Varun park the car and informed them that he will be waiting here for them..

MAAN'S CABIN:

After getting permission to let them in maan's P.a leaves his cabin.

Adi: Maan are you sure you want to meet them, its not right time, that too geet is here can u handle it.

maan: i guess but before we leave i want to meet her once.

Adi: but you verywell know what she is for you and at this time.

Before maan can declare his statement they hear someone knocking the door. Maan can feel a slight goosebumps as a reflex to the change in the vibration of the surrounding making everything happy and colourfull.

Annie: bhai

maan: come in

Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: janumkrk
ok am not completely full part but i will give a short update of 1500words then i will update other part.

hope you all wont mind.

Thank you appreciate it very much

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#475

Fabulous but also Mysterious Chapter

It seems like both Maan and Geet are suffering with something and its connected to the full moon

Sasha and Tasha now learns that Geet is a billionaire but I wonder will it ever make a difference to them or will they carry on been mean towards Geet .

Adi and Maan are leaving on a business trip and Daadima and Nakul too seems to get worried at that

there is a lot of mystery still hidden

waiting for the revelations