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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopa_1

sry for my late comment...

ITS OK DI..

Was busy with anni thread..😆

Awesome update... Okay again you kept this one as suspence.. Not fair

HEHEHE..

What project abt maan talking about?

MEHRA PROJECT NEAR UNIVERSITY

he is searching someone?

SOMEONE OR GROUP OF PEOPLE

And is it related to his mom ? Why he doesnt like his mom ?

ITS LITTLE COMPLICATED

Omg too many questions .. Haha ... Geet and her gang are enjoying ... Geet ko lagta hain ki maan baath hi nahin kartha ... Lekin maan apni misty se bak bak karthe haina😆He is jealous as he saw geet hugging someone... Poor maan he will be disturbed till he come to know that she hugged her bro ... So varun also know abt annie arjun relation ship ...

YEAH HE KNOWS

Missing aliya and balwants talk ..

IN NEXT UPDATE

Adi lost in pinky chubby cheeks ..😳

HEHEHE

Even geet didnt like when annie discusses abt maans marriage .. She is clearly affected by maan and his presence ...

WHICH GIRL WONT BE AFFECTED WITH MSK'S PRESENCE

maan ko kiss milgaya and hug bhi ...😳Now he can sleep peacefully ...

HMMM...

Maan bhi kush mein bhi kush ... Now waiting for next update ... Njoy the marriage ..😃



THANKYOU ROOPA DI
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sagorika93

nice update ...
what mission maan was talking about ?
maan saw someone hug his mishty..and was feeling j ..aww how cute ..possessive MSK !!
geet fell on maan and accidentally kissed his check ...but MSK's heart wants some more 😛
thanks for the pm dear..



THANKYOU dear, keep reading and keep supporting...

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

lovely update
now new entry varun her brother but maan so scared thinking what if its her bf or something
thnx for pm



THANKYOU dear , keep reading keep supporting
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Posted: 7 years ago
PART 10


BANNER BY LOVELYUMANG


BANNER BY MAANEETFAVO




KHURANA CONSTRUCTION (6.30PM)

Annie adi and pinky are waiting near lift for past 10minitues but no trace of geet, they were discussing about college project and upcoming exams and all... Annie's phone buzz with a video call from dadi... annie attend the call

Annie: hi dadi how are you?

Dadi: Am fine annie bete are you are in kc?

Annie: haan dadi came to meet adi bhai to ask about internship vacancy

Dadi: ohh ok annie are you alone going to join kc.

Pinky: no dadi we all are going to join kc... she started to explain what all happened from they reach kc to now starding near lift waiting for geet nonstop. Without knowing someone is looking shocked at her for her ability to talk this much.

Adi: pinkyji take a breathe

Annie and dadi chuckle knowing geet and pinky's nonstop bhak bhaks once started it dont end untill they finish off their topic

Annie: dont worry bhai both hustinapur express are like this only...

Dadi: haan Annie bete when you are going to start your exam preparations?

Annie: Day after tomorrow dadi first we have to submit this internship appointment letter we have only 1week time.

Dadi: ohh ok bete, waise where is geet?

Pinky: she has forgotten her phone in adi sirs cabin so went to get it.

Suddenly all hear a shouting of geet and runs in the direction.

MAAN'S POV:

i decided to follow her and ask the questions that are troubling me from afternoon... i opened the door and stepped out to see her back facing me walking a few steps before me in a slow steps..

MAAN: geet

She stops for a second without turning i was about to take a step towards her when i saw her speeding up her steps..

MAAN: Geet wait,

i called but this time she didn't even stop but keep going towards the lift, the way she is moving away from me is creating a uncomfortable feeling within me. I want her close to me not walking away from me . That question of her hugging someone is also added to it which is triggering the fire of jealousy and ego within me

i increased my pace and reached near her griping her hand i pulled her towards me within a fraction of second making her collide with me again making her scream with fear of sudden pull.

GEET: AAA

I was shocked to see her scream like she has fallen from himalayas, i want to stop her screaming or else adi who is out somewhere would come.. i can't afford it untill i got my answers. Without second thought i pushed her beside a pillar pinning her to wall i closed her mouth with my hand to stop her scream.




MAAN: chup bilkul chup..

She opened her eyes and looked at me wide eyed then her hazel eyes moved down a little and again looked at me... am confused of her this action. She again did the same action. I was looking at her confused this time i followed her eye movements to get to know that am palming her soft petals that teased my cheeks few minutes before...

I removed my hands not before warning her not to shout again and moved an little away standing straight before her.

I want to ask who it was with her in college but looking straight at her eyes. Those eyes that are haunting me nonstop. Do i have that rights and authority to ask about her personal life will she answer me even if i ask? My restlessness is increasing tenfold thinking what would be her reply for my question about her relation with that guy? I cant lose her. Am determined to ask her whatever may come.

I looked at her eyes that are downcasted and asked

MAAN: who was that...
before i complete my question i heard a chorus of people calling geets name and their footsteps are approaching us...

I diverted my eyes from her angelic face to look at the persons standing and gasping at our close posture immediately i moved few steps away after a second from my corner of eyes i saw her taking slow steps going towards her friends.

Still the three are standing in same position and now gasping only at me it gives me a conscious feeling and i felt to check myself once before i put it into action i heard a famous laughing sound.

Adi: hehehe he he he he

Very soon accompanied by other 2, i looked at her to find if she knows why suddenly i was turned into a laughing stock for her friends but she is also looking confused at them...

MAAN: have you all gone mad or am looking like a clown for you all...

I roared like a lion making the whole corridor echo with my voice and all turned silent. I looked at the three being silent even then the slight smile haven't left...

MAAN: ADI what happened? Can i also know the joke that made you all laugh out so loud

All stayed silent before the shout at them again i heard someone else voice who is not present here,

Dadi: MAAN beta...

MAAN: DADI????
I looked around to locate where is she,

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Annie pointed her phone to maan showing the video call where dadi is also smiling he frown a little

Dadi: Maan what happened to your cheeks?

MAAN: my cheeks what happened Dadiii.

He said touching his left cheek to find something inappropriate but nothing was there.. [/COLOR]

DADI: something red on your cheeks, now you have to say what happened Maan beta.. she said with a tone of tease

Hearing this maan opens his phone selfie camera and first checks his left side and casually turns to check his right side face when his eyes stops on some red mark on his... its not just a simple mark but a red lipstick mark of his misty.. the symbol of their first kiss.



His eyes pops open and without his knowledge automatically moves towards the honourable creative artist who made this art on his cheeks non other than his misty... the crowd also follow his eyes landing on geet who is standing beside annie equally eyes popped like some cartoon characters... seeing her expression he knows now she remembered everything happened in cabin so his lips automatically curves into a light smile.

Adi: Hehehe...he he, maan glares at adi

MAAN: wo Nothing Dadi maybe some paints or sketch mark

Crowd(adi dadi pinky and annie): ohhh oh...

both maan and geet felt embrassing... to avoid it maan excused himself to get it cleaned and meet them in a minute and also will drop them to hostel

Maan clean's the mark and comes out of his cabin and joins them..

MAAN: annie Suddenly you have came to KC, anything important.

Annie: Haan bhai, i came to meet adi bhai for internship vacancies for our final semester project.

MAAN: SO YOU THREE GOING TO JOIN KC ??

ANNIE: 5 bhai, me geetu pinky shasha and tasha its a group project brother. We need our appointment order copies submitted to HOD by coming Tuesday..

MAAN: ohh ok but i can't give you any privilege of being my sister or friends here.

GEET: Mr.Khurana we dont need any privileges. You can just treat us as any other interns in kc.

MAAN: OHH OK THEN, ADI HAVE YOU INFORMED THEM ABOUT PROCEDURE FOR APPLYING FOR INTERNSHIP IN KC.

Annie.: Internship procedures? What procedures bhai.

MAAN: ADI you dint inform them, ok then i will do it, first we need permission certificate or identification certificate from your college.

GEET: IDENTIFY CERTIFICATE?

MAAN: HAAN GEETU, its a normal internship procedure.

GEET: ITS GEET FOR YOU MR.KHURANA U.U

MAAN: ok MISS GEET... second you need to fill a form third you will take up a test for intership

[COLOR=RED]GEET: test for Internship?


MAAN: haan, Kc never compromise on its quality. So test to check your aptitude and subject knowledge

GEET: thats all are anymore procedures

MAAN: haan last but not least face to face interview.

GEET: annie dont you know anyother companies for internship?

MAAN: someone was eager to be treated as normal intern and now trying to run away

GEET: no one is running away MR.KHURANA, WE WILL DO ALL PROCIDINGS TOMORROW AFTERNOON ITSELF.

MAAN: you are always welcome, so can we all leave now.

Annie: haan bhai its already 7pm.

They all reach ground floor and settle up in maan's car.

PRECAP: MAAN GETTING HIS ANSWERS, BALWANT AND ALIYA PHONE CONVERSATION, MAAN'S REALITY, Geet and gang arrives at Kc for proceedings





NOTE: FRIENDS MOSTLY I WONT BE ABLE TO SEND PM FOR THIS UPDATE...

SORRY FOR SHORT UPDATE FRIENDS.. I THOUGHT OF GIVING AN UPDATE BEFORE LEAVING FOR BROTHERS MARRIAGE,

FROM NOW ON THE STORY WILL TAKE LITTLE SPEED.. MAAN'S PAST IN AUSTRALIA WILL START AFTER 2 OR 3 UPDATES.

hope am not boring you all with my story.. enjoy and takecare my dear friends will come back soon..


Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
waiting for next part dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karamjeet

waiting for next part dear...



THANKYOU dear will update tomorrow evening.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: janumkrk



hi dear anu, how are you


Iam fine. Thank you !!
Waiting for your updates
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5



Iam fine. Thank you !!
Waiting for your updates
:))



THANKYOU dear few more hours today evening i will update ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear Mann is desperate to know who is hugging Geet in college and came to know that Annie and her friends are joking KC for internship
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update... Loving the pace of the story.. Its becoming interesting day by day... 😳 Annie , pinky are searching for geet and maan was following geet for his answers.. Mr khurana is becoming desperate 😆 liked the way he was following geet to know abt the guy in the college... Annie adi and pinky gathered around maaneet listening the shriek of geet... 😆 Wondering y geet is being rude to maan.. Maan said that they will not be given any special treatment... geet asked maan not to call her geetu... 😲
Waiting for next update dear..
Njoy the marriage.. You are not at all making us bore... Infact my curiosity is increasing day by day ...
Update soon 😳

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