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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
Congratz on new thread.. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey, this is the first time I'm commenting on this story. I have always been a silent reader but your note above broke my silence.

The beauty of this story is the maturity of Maan and Geet's love and their bonding. The natural progression in their love is what that has kept me hooked to this story.

Well, its realistic. If they were to act like horny teenagers then there's no point of this whole beautiful story anymore as it would lose its essence.

Maan in Someone Like You is someone who I someday wish to find. The pace of the story is perfect that at times I feel like this is not fiction, its real.

Geet in here is someone that I can really relate too. If Mujhse Dosti Karogi was to continue, I feel that Kareena would have gone through the same insecurity and heart break.

Plus what I feel that some readers fail to realise is that there is so much passion between Maaneet that is waiting to be unleashed, which would leash but at its own time and pace.

Passion dies one day. but love, companion and understanding shall always remain.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
Love doesn't happen between legs,with his hands on breasts or her nails in his skin, LOVE happens in eyes, when the eyelashes meet and the breath melts away your skin, one breath at a time. LOVE happens in the depth of your SOUL... Aish just keep writing in ur way...u knw where to put a comma or a full stop...so go on...i love ur each word where there is so much love ,care and understanding... 👏 and u even know where to stop 😕 so that we can think of so many situations...but everytime u suprise us with something that we didn't think about...
Edited by kansya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Beautiful update as always n as per ur note, in our story the two individuals r twisted in their own way who can't express dem selves easily to other so v can't expect dem to b more romantic suddenly I want dem to grow in their love slowly romantic. The best in d whole story is v cant guess wat vl reaction of other vich make us to wait eagerly for d next update. Pls don't make it soo fast.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
lovely update...
Har bat ka ehsas sirf chukar jata nahi skte...
Maaan ke liye kuch lufz hi kafi hai... jo geet ke dil choo gaye..
Hay ! ! ! !
so Romsntic .
Pyar me zindgi kitni khubsurt bn jati. Ye ehsas hi to hai jo geet ko maan ke pass leke aaya hai.
Its beautiful feeling.
Aapke hr eak update ko jb bhi mai padhti hu to lgta hai mai sabhi charectrs ke sath wo lmha fir se jee rahi hu. aur is wajhse next update ka injar krna mushkil ho jata hai.
Any way...
Lekin intjar ka fal mitha hi milta hai
I m very very happy today...
I read ur important note... and i realise what u want to say ..now i m totally agree with u.i wont mention those things again. U r writer. i respect ur writing skill. I love every word of tje story.I will read ur story silently. But i will mention best part Of the story as well as shere my feelings .
So...finally Geet is back... kabir and ana are so happy...
Yes...NYC is her home.
She came for maan...
How sweet ! !
I m super excited after rading precap.
One of my favorite song.
eagerly waiting for next update.
Take care...
Bye...


Edited by pallavimn - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Marvellous update. Loved the conversation Maaneet had and how indirectly told her that the study room makes him nostalgic putting Geet in thinking mode. Geet is back to NYC giving sweet surprises to Kabir, Ana and rest of the family . But the one person for whom everyone is excited about is not at home. Where is Maan? Hope he didn't go far away. Couldn't believe that you stopped at this place. Now the curiosity is doubled.
Coming back to the story, the way it is progressing is perfect and natural. When I read this story I don't feel it as a fiction but it's like somewhere it's happening for real. The way you described the scenes , the emotions each character portrays is so natural and realistic. Let Maaneet have enough time to grow in their love, romance and passion will follow automatically. So anything to destroy it's essence and beauty is strictly no from me. To be frank with you I don't want this story to end at all. Love everything about this story.
Edited by payal.gupta177 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
Beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful update.. the way Maan wAs trying to hide his feelings
the way geet insist to know
the way Maan open his heart that the place remind him her presence the way geet realise his longing in his one sentence the way Pooja understand Geets heart and advice her..the way u show Kabeer and Geets bonding Anas excitement joy and happiness was so so so beautiful.. perfect Homecoming...but where is Maan???


And I don't know what other thinks but for me there is a thin line between love and lust or say passion .. we all conceive in the movement of lust..so making out hugs kisses are not at all bad things for lovers...par har kahaani alag hai kahaani k kirdaar alag hote hain har kirdaar ki soch aur approach dono alag hote hain...aur un kirdaaro ko zindagi writer deta hai...agar vo har love story k har character ko repulsive aur har story plot ko extreme bna k story ko Jet speed se kahani ko aage lekar jaayega to na characters ki situation smjh aayegi naa emotions feel honge naa writer satisfied hoga naa reader ko variety milegi...


Sorry jyada ho gyaa 😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Beautiful update dear ...trio's friendship missing each other their love for each other all of the awesome. ...plz show some maaneet soft moments too nd thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
Aww loved this maan in each update in your writing skills
Maan told y he is not working in study
Geet realize her stupidity
Loved Pooja also knocked sense in geet brain even though she s crazy pregnant women
Loved kabir went airport pickup geet
Surprise for Ana
Where is maan now

Please continue as you wish the story to be
I love the way you write for each character
Someone like you Will be my all time favourite
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
Awww.
How he conveyed that he miss her so much.
It affected her so much that she planned the trip. How would Maan react?
Love this lyrical romance.

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