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Posted: 7 years ago
I Had just gone to wish you but had written more than half an hour 😆
Marium is really crazy for you of course 😉 😳
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Beautiful update
Loved it
Geet s seeing the ring again thinking about the past event and crying bitterly and she wann maan forever in her life ... Geet s giving cold shoulder to maan and he s not able to take it and feeling immerse hurt ... Kabir ana and geet r enjoying der christmas evening ...
Maan s trying to speak with geet but she s avoiding him ... Maan s asking geet what is problem and geet broken down ... Maan confession was awesome waiting for geet reply and who is ayat ...
Continue soon
Waiting
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Here am I again today planning to finish two chapters keeping comment short that would be wise if I want to catch up all before weekend so now it starts...

Chapter 71.And She Had Given Up...

Kanha and Radha their instalment on this story always has been on perfect timing and always I get to know somehow maybe this chapter will have their Part and whenever I read them a pure feel of love essence I feel... Their Part complete this story so beautifully in right way and always they carry answer hidden of turmoil of this story that is what I feel... And as you mentioned this will be the last installment I'm feeling so upset that it's making me realize this story is really near to end cause whatever they Had to do it's done now Part of Kanha and Radha now no more role of them needed... It's giving a complete feeling but Still honestly I'll miss them much cause you have portrayed everything so beautifully that they looked very serene to me ...it was a wonderful decision to add them to this story and you write it very well and presented to us this story in such good way that it amazed me...

I always say maybe someone out there can write more well or beautifully than you but I don't want to know them I wanna be captured into your spell only...

Isn't this thought is so romantic enough 😆

Kanha's this line is really beautiful from That first day when he uttered "You are me and I am
you"

I'm really gonna Miss this... what will I do when This story will end?? it will be like almost my breath will be leaving me...I stay in hope I'll read sly today or tomorrow but when it will end my hope also Will die...

One year has gone with it and I'm so attached to it... The ending time will be really hard to bear...

Isn't it was me who Had mentioned to keep it short see this is how I get lost and you don't even help to remind me I had a comment to finish still now didn't started when we will reach end... this girl Marium is impossible crazyhead...

Now be quite don't distract me anywhere okay and we will finish it Early 😃

Ahh From where the update started Ohh yea Maan vanished... from there 😛

Ohh My I was literally in shock seeing geet like this I've thought I've just travel back to 1st chapter of this story only there She was this broken and unsettle... though I know how much she had endures I've just felt all things happening in front of my eyes I've felt like running There and taking her in my embrace and make her quite she really feels like a baby to me... she's just breaking into pieces and Whenever she cries I feel my heart is breaking into single piece... when In chapter 44 she cried What was the tittle yeah "Suna hain log useh ankh bhar dekhte Hain" Even there I cried Along with her...

And whenever Sumaisha cries I feel the same upersay she will cry and pout awww etna bura lagta Hain like koi dil chirke le ja raha ho...

So this was her reasons she's so depressed so broken from inside she was always like this even after Dadima's demise she confessed how days and night has been to her and how even She felt to never face a new day Again... Actually we failed to see her reasons despite of knowing her from beginning I can't even myself in her place life without mother then father that heart break and falling in love again when she has so much within her to fight and this much insecurities and wrong thought about herself...in this no world should blame themselves or consider wrong for anything like that...

More than Maan being vanished I was worried for Geet seeing her so devastated it was so upsetting to read this chapter for me but when Maan was there in door it was like life coming back to my body again this moment was like I know now everything will fall into place cause he will make everything right again for both of them for us only he can handle her This State and give her assurance ...

Aww despite being such emotional chapter I've to say this chapter is written so so beautifully so Wonderfully... this gonna be on my fav list of "Someone like you" chapters...

Love you So so much Miss.Kawaii don't need my love you back cause yesterday reply is more than anything you could reply with just one love you 🤗
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Chapter 72.But Then There He Was, At Her Doorstep, Like An Answer...

It was a wonderful chapter Miss.Kawaii You have given us moment to Cherish they roaming Shimla together the place from where this story started 1st chapter of this story... it was a special chapter to me... I need to catch up all chapters so don't want to make it big but just know I am loving every chapter and just not showing on every comment cause I've less time..😛😆

Okay so let's start with it...

Maan never thought her reasons would be like this and I've never believed it was Raj cause she has come a long way not just stuck on that point but heart it's still bearing Those scar from past ...

Her insecurities I'm well aware of them I've also met person like this who scared to add person in life cause past experience of people leaving still haunt her and now she's afraid to meet people and get hurt again...So clearly understand what Geet must be going through Even if I was in her place no doubt even I would have broken from inside infact she's still living if it was me and my parents was not with me I would have died each day ... I never want to be on that place either never...

Morning brings always a new beginning and their morning together doing breakfast and I'm having my awww moment 😆

No coffee for Maan poor guy...😛
Last winter you always used to put up a status of needing coffee while updating but will this story survive till end of this winter too 🤔

Forget it...I take coffee duniya idhar ki udhaar ho jaye Marium never have tea... from childhood... and then 2 years before doctor ne sidha coffee tea few type of soft drinks pe bann laga diya 😆 Abhi Main sanyash ka jiban dharan karti phirti hoon 🤣

"There he was, at her doorstep, like an answer to her prayers. He was like that force that prevented her from drowning into an abyss that had no end."

Wowww had to add This here cause just Loved Loved these lines...

Cemetery it was geet's favorite place which she said being asked it was chapter 15 maybe don't remember clearly read almost a year before na...

They are going out yayyy... good moments coming... enjoyed reading Also because they are on same city
And it's the same place where they meet 1st not official meet though and he captured her... but deleted her pics and Same Person now clicking her pics how ironic 🤣


"Scandal Point? I wonder what clandestine scandalous affairs had taken place to ruin a name like this!" 😆 he's funny a lot...

They were just talking woman just started and you stopped 😡 why you always do that not just here in every story you have done this thing... this is so You...😔 bas comment khatam or bhi chapters baki hain abhi...
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My Miss.Kawaii said This is so Adorable awww... ****Me hiding face**** 🤣

Chapter 73.But The Time Was Hers To Choose...

Will keep this comment too short just few lines cause It was really really Amazing and if I sit to mention those each line it will reach the length of your update so the Shorter we keep the better for us ...

Starting Maan going away to Delhi quite painful moment it seem yet a hope is working for me That they are together not officially but they are we know...

When he was telling her things and asked to be strong and go back home safe... I was feeling it was a mentor ideal telling to someone like me and that mentor and ideal is you for me 😆😳 Marium blushing on her own thoughts...

Okay moving on After coming back everything seemingly fine... Woman what should I say how much I've enjoyed geet and Ana talk you have written this chapter sooo sooo well I'm just spellbound with your this quality of making a conversation so enjoyable and lively...

"Didn't you hear the phrase, what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas? So, what happens in London, stays in London!"

"Fine!!!! If that's so, then what happens in New York with Aarush stays in New York! Ha! Take that!"


Ohh my my I'm just laughing my Head off while reading this one...🤣

One huge Applause for you... cause you have written it too well I'm in love with this chapter loving it so much really... Their conversation was epic and I'm just so excited for Ana and Arush how could he propose Half sleepy 😆😛

Okay we have to do it fast I want to read another chapter so had to finish it quickly...

Maan and Geets conversation another love goes to you... Why did not IF have Any reaction like wow and love you deserve all of them lady cause you are so good... not mentioning their conversation cause you know what they talk cause you written it yourself 😛 so maybe know my reaction also I was just smiling throughout reading this one but I really really loved it I'm just rushing things but what to do I just want to read quickly...

Finding pooja and her antics argument find it really cute and funny pregnancy time is not a easy journey at all They Had to go through a lot so this small kind of reaction are Whole heartedly accepted...

Geet should go Back but Job is holding up but when will she go??? being in thread I know she had come though I never read anyone's comment but Tarana hain na uske Post mere sare suspense khatam kar deti hain though I really avoid reading if it had information from update but kabhi kabhi galti se shamne aa jaye toh ye innocent bacchi kya kar sakti hain 😛😳

BAD DAY on that note Monster Khurana not taking calls wohoo I have found this chapter so entraining Geet disconnecting calls of Maan yeah dude etni himmat bhi ye logo mein jo Monster ko ignore kar sake 😎😆

You must have got real good comments for this chapter cause it's really amazing wonderful marvellous full of entertaining update ...or kuch mujhe abhi yaad nahi aaraha 😛 but just know I've loved it...

And you know what sly ka writer is not Khadus at all she's too sweet and I love her so much but I just can't forgot your reply yaar "Your Khadus Writer" awww... Marium toh phirse apne Dreamland chali gayi re 😆🤣 Noo Marium come back and finish this comment...

These lines are my love from This chapter again...

"I hate my boss!"
"Tell me something new. Bosses are never nice."
"Yeah. I know. You set the perfect example."
"Do you like to bruise my ego all the time, eh Geet?"
"I take sadistic pleasure in it."
"You are getting pretty good at this huh!"
"learning from the master himself."


🤣 both are sooo good to talk no I'm wrong you are too good cause you are the creator of this Love you Miss.Kawaii...

Love you so much for the way you are...May Allah always bless you and bless this thing between us whatever we both had 😆

What's with This date in calendar that she stopped talking?? any ones birthday coming ya kuchor or it's something related to My Mr.Sensible

Your timing of finishing chapter ...clap clap 🤔 you are too good and so bad at same time...No sweetness cancel you are really Khadus but whatever you are sweet or not you are mine My Miss.Kawaii 😳😉

And I thought I was about to finish this comment with few lines and keep it too short 🤣 There's more than few lines I guess..😆
Edited by MariumChoudhary - 7 years ago
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Welcome Welcome This Page 110 even is wishing Happy Anniversary to us Marium is so happy today... Thanks to your adorable reply this Morning 😳
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Chapter 74.Out Of Everyone Else, He Chose Her...

Title is so romantic that he chooses her out of everyone else ❤️

Starting with their talking what could be more better than this...

Maan not working in Study I knew he can't be there cause it has so many memories of them awww...I love study room so much.. Is there anyway you can send me into that room ??😛 I want to be there other than imagination... Just reading it feels so amazing... Really Miss.Kawaii this story should be out as a novel or book cause we don't get to see this kind of romance everywhere...

Study room contents Many precious amazing wonderful moment's but the most heart touching connection moment of my choice you want to know which it was???

I love all of them no doubt but That moment I'm in Just love with your thoughts where Geet was in London Maybe nearly chapter 27 or 28 don't remember clearly Maan had read that book which she has read half and he read that book from where she stopped and again geet after coming back had started reading from where Maan had stopped... It's just wow this kind of connection I've never read anywhere till now the thought itself is really touchy to me... You just did a marvelous job with this story...I never feel these feelings which I feel reading this one... This story is so so special...

Okay tarif bandh karte hain or comment pe dhayan do abhi jaldi khatam karte hain more 3 chapter are remaining okay...

Though I know his reason already not working in Study but when I read it has made me feel good yet upset thinking of his situation which he has gone through in those past 3 months ... its painful yea Marium was getting emotional but I had put full stop to it saying don't get into crying mood cause they are together now and only happiness laying ahead...

I missed kabir so much not only him Ana arush everyone but kabir a lot we don't get to see him much now but so glad he's here...

Who is this girl 😲 I'm already so curious can she be love interest of kabir??? please please... And I'm liking her from now only their meeting is so dreamy rain accident giving lift loving it yaar... You know what till now every character you introduce in this story I've loved all except Arjun pardon me for that... Okay moving on...

Oh my My geet in NYC 😲 I'm just so so happy and surprised wowww I was feeling like I've got this surprise and I'm present there geet being here in states give me the feeling of being home...

This was really an amazing chapter beautifully written by My Miss.Kawaii now will be reading next one waiting to see how he will react you know about whom I'm talking 😉 Dekha even I can give short comment see it's short 🤣😎
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Chapter 75.Abhi Na Jao Chod Kar Ke Dil Abhi Bhara Nahin...

You asked at end of this chapter that How many of us love you more now? And I wanna Say I don't love you more now After this Sweet Soulful update but I love you the most I'm failing at words now to express how beautiful feeling it was to read this chapter I've just fallen in love with you All over again how beautifully you have write words are not enough right now to describe it to you how much I've loved this chapter ...

This is not just the 1st love story I've read but what you are portraying reading all this just one thought is coming to my mind maybe no body has not been in love this much deep and never any Love story touched my heart in this way like this one working on my heart... Whatever you are doing to my heart I don't know how but surely you have done some spell on me that each chapter makes me fall in love with you and this story more... You are amazing my dear Khadus Writer You are too sweet to be Khadus ever but seems like I'm in love with this Khadus word after you have written yours Khadus writer to me 😳😆 I just can't forgot it ...

May Allah always bless you always... I'm overwhelmed actually with this chapter I really don't know what to say from where to start They met that to on study... seeing them together that peace that belongings and coming home feeling whatever you have written I'm experiencing all of it like it's me there feeling both of their emotions on that note this song is my favorite one I keep singing this... Really Thanks a ton to you for writing such beautiful Chapter...

This chapter is one of yours best written chapter ever It's not others are not good 😛 all are but as I've read it just now maybe feeling it's best among all as still those feels are lingering in my heart reading them being in each other arm's.. okay I've love each written line of this chapter and what word I should use that will convince you I've loved it so much 😉 You are really sweet and cute to write a chapter like this and gift it to us and I love you so much you know that...

AAJ MUJHE KUCH ZAYADA HI PYAAR AARAHA HAIN on you maybe cause one year before I've read "It takes two" in this same date today and tomorrow was the day when I've send you 1st msg and you replied I was surprised and shocked cause I thought you were inactive Writer cause after Parineeta and Love me not I've not read you like a year so I thought you don't write anymore... but in Google after coming across "It takes two" got you back again... You replied after that there is no stopping cause woh silsila abhi bhi chalo hain till now 😆

And thank you so much Miss.Kawaii for making my life beautiful with your presence And you Means A lot to me... More than I could make you feel with my mere words..

So among my all favorite lines from This chapter I would like to choose this one...

"And then she slipped into his arms like beads of pearls slipping into the thread, wrapping themselves around it to make their existence potent."

YOU were magnificent Excellent perfect and sooo romantic in this chapter...

Love you it was a best feeling to read you...We will be completing one year ... Alhamdulillah 🤗

I'm really glad to have you In my life 🥺❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
More 2 chapters comment are pending to paste... Later okay... now Marium is tired 😛
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I honestly was really mad at Geet to begin with but after their confrontation it got better =D
[DIV]What goes about in her brain is really irritating!
Why doesn't she think logically? If Maan happens to love her then why would he marry someone else???
Edited by anmirza - 7 years ago

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