But when i saw dat dis s updated i couldnt stop myself from reading this as i remember ed dat maan was going to see geet in his home.
And d update was beautiful
Just beautiful datz d only thing to describe this
Ohh god u r such a talented writer n i really wish u to become a famous author n publish many books.
The way you express their emotions r just awesome.
Did u do ur graduation in literature? the way you play with words i felt as if u r a literature student.
Ur stories really make me emotional.
I had read all ur stories but i dont remember how many i had commented because i had everything after it was completed n some of d threads were closed.
My favourite ss is it takes two.
i just love d maan in dat. Whatever he did at the starting he loved and cares sooo much for his pumpkin. N 8 just d scene where he came to know about brij beating geet. Oh i loved d sentence u wrote their about maans feelings "in 3 years of marriage he had never hurt his pumpkin but brij..." it was something like this. I loved it.
Next d jasmine one .
With you
Dat was an emotional one. everytime i read dat i cant help the tears. d way he support geet when she went blind n how he hated it when he felt dat how his jasmine s getting adjusted to darkness. of course geet has also stood by maan when he lost his parents but wat touched me d most was how he took care of her . may b i had read dat portion of d ss too many times n datz y this portion had become my fav.
I really want to comment on all 0f your ffs
I know i should be commenting on this update but when i read this update i couldnt help comment8ng about all ur works
Reading this update at midnight made me soo emotional i think
But itz just beautiful
Their love . how they slept in d study room itself.
Oh god how r u able to convey the emotions with such perfection
N d song. hay me marjaawa
I loved d video n dat song s even my fav now.
N in most of ur ffs u g8ve special names for geet from maan l8ttle storm. pumpkin. jasmine. etz etz
N i love dat
Sanyeeka is there such a word actually. i never thought i will like fantasies much. N when i read this for the first time i liked it but after reading it the 2nd time i fell on love with this story also but not as much as it takes two .
Parineeta i hadnt read it for d second time till now. i couldnt . it s tooo much of emotions n i will not b able to stop crying.
Awesome update
Tooo beautiful
Waiting eagerly for next update n many more maneet ffs from you
Can u please write an ss on maneet about arranged marriage where two beautiful people gets married by families n their own will n will gradually fall in love . i would like to read such a version from u where their emotions will be beautifully depicted
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