my Conclusion and a humble request

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am a reader I am suffering from unsatisfied hunger😕 & never ending search for something to read regarding My Maaneet😳😳😳.itni saari stories padhi k meri sensitive Eyes pe glasses lag gyy😭😭😭.koi naa 😆 😆😆😆
MY Conclusion= i loved all stories and i appreciate all respected writers for there excellent work.par par 85% se jyada stories main pehle Maan ko Heartless Monster portrait kiya jata hai vo Geet ko pain deta hai Geet k saath inhuman behave krta hai, extramarital affairs womanizer what not...par climex main koi dark past ko Maan k inhuman behave ki wjaah bna k Geet ko kindness ki Goddess bna k happy Maan aur blushy blushy Geet k sath story khatam kr di jati hai...😡😡 i want something new i want u to portrait her as a strong lady not grey shade but strong blushy blushy type ek touch main melt hone waali Geet nai..please aur agar Maan grey lil negetive portrait kr rha hai to uski wjah koi stupid sa dark emotional past na ho..
MY humble request=mujhe esi story chahiye jhan Geet ek strong character ho.aur Maan k saath koi dark past na juda ho & I am fed up with red cheeks and pouty sensitive Geet...please please do something for my hunger satisfaction😭😭😭

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Posted: 7 years ago
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😆

I usually do not go for the stories with some dark past , because such stories need altogether a different execution and thought process, and if it is not there it looks like what you have said already

Read these ones, if these are of your liking


Falling For My Wife..by Mahi

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4096450/ss-falling-for-my-wife-last-part-updtd



Serendipity by Rockbarbie/Sookie

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1958670/ff-serendipity-completed



if you are interested in humorous ones, you can check following thread

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4750605/maaneet-stories-light-hearted-romcom-humorous-comedy-genre-aug19


and take care of your eyes dear!!

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I agree and disagree with you altogether
Because I think there is need of some good storytelling then its gripping but the problem with most writers are that their execution is poor. Writing is not just some bunch of dialoge likh di ho gaya. Agar executn achi hai to concept jaisa bhi ho insan padke khush hota hai
Some are only writing sad sobbing stories
Another thing is constructive criticism is also lacking here which is why I appretiate your post but let's not be so blunt
The writers are doing their best job I feel. As a reader we need 2 keep this forum positive and active but like you I am also bit fed up with a few common story lines specially sobbing geet n grey msk
Fed up. No logic found whatsoever par khair ab reader log bhi comment thik se karte nai toh kafi writer to ja chuke hai
If u find some good stories plz pm me
I only am follwin one new writer currently rest i have lost interest
Waise dark msk k dark hone k piche agar reason na hoga phir toh wo devil ban jayega thats illogical bt i get ur point u want new concepts
Edited by solaceMG - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: solaceMG

I agree and disagree with you altogether
Because I think there is need of some good storytelling then its gripping but the problem with most writers are that their execution is poor. Writing is not just some bunch of dialoge likh di ho gaya. Agar executn achi hai to concept jaisa bhi ho insan padke khush hota hai
Some are only writing sad sobbing stories
Another thing is constructive criticism is also lacking here which is why I appretiate your post but let's not be so blunt
The writers are doing their best job I feel. As a reader we need 2 keep this forum positive and active but like you I am also bit fed up with a few common story lines specially sobbing geet n grey msk
Fed up. No logic found whatsoever par khair ab reader log bhi comment thik se karte nai toh kafi writer to ja chuke hai
If u find some good stories plz pm me
I only am follwin one new writer currently rest i have lost interest
Waise dark msk k dark hone k piche agar reason na hoga phir toh wo devil ban jayega thats illogical bt i get ur point u want new concepts



lol...you urself crafted a plot 😆..why don't you start a new one...?

I have one recommendation but leave it...

Coincidentally I was thinking but have lots of pending ones ...readers are throwing juttas on me already...it may be like Jaalim Geet and sufferer Maan without any reason...no particular dark past but pleasant present for Maan is possible...jisko she makes it horrible..Sochti Hu...not sure...
Edited by Sonia.KN - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

😆

I usually do not go for the stories with some dark past , because such stories need altogether a different execution and thought process, and if it is not there it looks like what you have said already

Read these ones, if these are of your liking


Falling For My Wife..by Mahi

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4096450/ss-falling-for-my-wife-last-part-updtd



Serendipity by Rockbarbie/Sookie

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1958670/ff-serendipity-completed



if you are interested in humorous ones, you can check following thread

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4750605/maaneet-stories-light-hearted-romcom-humorous-comedy-genre-aug19


and take care of your eyes dear!!





Jiii



Thankuuu
Pkka padhungiii😊😊😊


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Posted: 7 years ago
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na meri stories ka Maan aisa bilkul nahin hai..
meri geet bhi strong hai and Maan bhi achha hai normal insaano jaisa😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.

na meri stories ka Maan aisa bilkul nahin hai..

meri geet bhi strong hai and Maan bhi achha hai normal insaano jaisa😆


Sachi???
Aapki stories password protected to ni hain naa
???
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sillyseema


Sachi???
Aapki stories password protected to ni hain naa
???

No
they are on Forum only
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Posted: 7 years ago
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par tumhaari No. of posts bata rahi hain ki tum comment dene me bahut kanjoos ho😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: solaceMG

I agree and disagree with you altogether
Because I think there is need of some good storytelling then its gripping but the problem with most writers are that their execution is poor. Writing is not just some bunch of dialoge likh di ho gaya. Agar executn achi hai to concept jaisa bhi ho insan padke khush hota hai
Some are only writing sad sobbing stories
Another thing is constructive criticism is also lacking here which is why I appretiate your post but let's not be so blunt
The writers are doing their best job I feel. As a reader we need 2 keep this forum positive and active but like you I am also bit fed up with a few common story lines specially sobbing geet n grey msk
Fed up. No logic found whatsoever par khair ab reader log bhi comment thik se karte nai toh kafi writer to ja chuke hai
If u find some good stories plz pm me
I only am follwin one new writer currently rest i have lost interest
Waise dark msk k dark hone k piche agar reason na hoga phir toh wo devil ban jayega thats illogical bt i get ur point u want new concepts



Yes been extremely straightforward blunt girl means no friends and always ready to get into a trouble hehe okkk jii bina past k v koi bura ho sakta hai aur time aur haalaat k saath sudhar bhii sakta hai..aur ji I have appreciate writers work in my post...writers bohot acha kaam kr rhe the\hain isliye to mg fanfiction k liye mai crazy hu...
Ji pkka btayungiii
Vese u, me,aur...? Love boloosm aur my beautyful wife padh rahi huu..


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