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seema saini

@HateMee

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.
par tumhaari No. of posts bata rahi hain ki tum comment dene me bahut kanjoos ho😆

Hehehe isliye to muje koi password nai deta😭

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sillyseema

Hehehe isliye to muje koi password nai deta😭

obviously..

kaun dega agar comment nahin milega to

but the writers deserve the comment😃

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

I have read a very few ffs because I can't keep my focus on something for long if it's not interesting or attracts me to some great level. I am very very bad reader! 😔

And I despise the taste of sobbing helpless Geet and never read those stories ever.
I think old ffs are good. Jitney bhi 8 se 10 ff maine padhi hain aab tak they had strong Geet or if not strong at least not frail. So i can just recommend them.

I can't suggest you my stories cause they are ongoing but one thing for sure in my plots she is not a weak one! Because to my perspective our show's Geet is a hell lot of an iron lady. She left everything to save her child and even survived! Also giving competition to Maan's volcanic anger she has to be a lot more than some weak crying Geet! (crying is not a weakness however)

Yes, she used to cry a lot but that's not because she was weak but because she is expressive and has a soft heart which is prone to feel emotions. I love our Geet immensely! 😳❤️

Hope you get what you are looking for!😳

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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seema saini

@HateMee

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

lol...you urself crafted a plot 😆..why don't you start a new one...?

I have one recommendation but leave it...

Coincidentally I was thinking but have lots of pending ones ...readers are throwing juttas on me already...it may be like Jaalim Geet and sufferer Maan without any reason...no particular dark past but pleasant present for Maan is possible...jisko she makes it horrible..Sochti Hu...not sure...

Jalim Geet nahiii

Strong Geet se mera mtlb

Financially strong ho skta hsi

Mentally strong ho skta hai

Physicaly strong ho skta hai

Lekin

Cruel Geet ho skta hai

Nahiii

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sillyseema

Jalim Geet nahiii

Strong Geet se mera mtlb
Financially strong ho skta hsi
Mentally strong ho skta hai
Physicaly strong ho skta hai
Lekin
Cruel Geet ho skta hai
Nahiii

Financially strong hone ka matlab atleast she might be little bit rude, money minded and always wants other to follow her terms...

Even except one of mine ongoing works , I never portrayed a Rude Maan in beginning...

Edited by Sonia.KN - 7 years ago

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

By the way your post and the points u raised are really challenging for writers

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seema saini

@HateMee

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.

obviously..
kaun dega agar comment nahin milega to
but the writers deserve the comment😃

Ek to Writers demand long commentss..aua agar mujhe koi part acha na lge aur main long comment kr du...to vo mujhe bahar ka rasta dikha denge 😭 acha lge to padho warna story padhna chhod do mera work hai apne tarike se likhungi...ab ye padh k mera poor sensitive dil hurt ni ho jayega??? Isliye padh k chup chap like krti hun...mere like ki to kadar ee nii hai😭😭😭

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seema saini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Iptida
I have read a very few ffs because I can't keep my focus on something for long if it's not interesting or attracts me to some great level. I am very very bad reader! 😔
And I despise the taste of sobbing helpless Geet and never read those stories ever.
I think old ffs are good. Jitney bhi 8 se 10 ff maine padhi hain aab tak they had strong Geet or if not strong at least not frail. So i can just recommend them.

I can't suggest you my stories cause they are ongoing but one thing for sure in my plots she is not a weak one! Because to my perspective our show's Geet is a hell lot of an iron lady. She left everything to save her child and even survived! Also giving competition to Maan's volcanic anger she has to be a lot more than some weak crying Geet! (crying is not a weakness however)

Yes, she used to cry a lot but that's not because she was weak but because she is expressive and has a soft heart which is prone to feel emotions. I love our Geet immensely! 😳❤️

Hope you get what you are looking for!😳

Can you please give me your ongoing stories link and password if they are password protected...

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sillyseema

Ek to Writers demand long commentss..aua agar mujhe koi part acha na lge aur main long comment kr du...to vo mujhe bahar ka rasta dikha denge 😭 acha lge to padho warna story padhna chhod do mera work hai apne tarike se likhungi...ab ye padh k mera poor sensitive dil hurt ni ho jayega??? Isliye padh k chup chap like krti hun...mere like ki to kadar ee nii hai😭😭😭

Hahahaha

Na like ki bhi badi kadar hai sab ko.. warna kahenge ki likes bahut kam hain..

waise as a writer that person is right that it's her or his right tp decide how to develop the story but a s areader you too have full right to tell the writer what you liked or what no in update,, but the language should be decent..

writers should always be ready for praise as well as criticism.. both are the two sides of a coin.. every update can not be good...I agree