Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec - Page 86

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update kab milega
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Originally posted by: Rosmitha

superb update

Geet want to show Raghva how maan possessive about her but her plan backfired...
She feel so helpless infront of Maan...
Why Maan dont want to accept that he loves her...
waiting for next update...


Thank you very much dear for your comment!!
Maan will not accept his love for Geet!!
He is a complex character!
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Next thread pe!!
And 70 likes hona hain kamse kaam
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Next thread pe!!

And 70 likes hona hain kamse kaam

Ohh ... Rahul kab aayega ? 😆
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Ohh ... Rahul kab aayega ? 😆


bohot updates ke baad!! 😆
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bohot updates ke baad!! 😆

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Tumko rahul se kiya mohabbat hain baby??
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Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

awesome update..

OMG.. Geet wanted to show Raghav possissiveness of Maan but game ulta ho gaya.. Maan is uncontrollable & warned Raghav.. also told them his feeling about Geet.. which means clear indication that he never ever let go geet from him.. & won;t allow anyone to come near her.. she is his & only his.. actually i love his possessiveness

Indeed Geet is lucky she is having Maan & good friend like Raghav.. now Geet too know What Maan is for her.. I was literally laughing when Maan said Raghav that if he is BF of Geet then Even Maan would be his BF 😆 OMG🤣 & in bachpan Maan Geet played chupa- chippi.. now both will play Pyar-Pyar😳😉

thnx for pm..waiting for next update




heheh thanks a lot dear for your stunning reply!!
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Originally posted by: anu5

Profound update dear

Loved it!! Articulate and crisp writing.
Loved Maan's fiery and possessive shades for Geet. An absolute treat !!
Loved Maan's retaliation to Geet's statement and his proprietorship over her. Maan was irked with Geet's statement about emotions but his retort to Geet was worldly-wise and impressive. Loved his line regarding heart and emotions ka Kya connection!?. Maan was on blaze and brilliance to show Geet and Raghav who has upper hand on Geet and claims on Geet. Seeing Maan's intensity of attitude and eccentric banter Raghav choose to leave the place but alas he couldn't apropos to Maan's demeanor. Loved the way Maan mellowed down seeing Geet in tears and wanted to kiss her in intense situation. Geet's words made Maan pounce on her and her statement about Raghav being her boyfriend made ambiance more grave and sarcastic. Maan being a good observant didn't fail to notice Geet's restlessness whilst stating her words and could understand Geet better than her. Geet wanted to show Raghav glimpse of Maan's possessiveness for her owing to their previous convo before Maan's entry and Raghav's demand for explaination but alas Maan showed Raghav the whole picture of his possessiveness for Geet with his witticism and sarcastic digs. Loved the way Maan tried to convey depth of his relationship with Geet and value of the extra "f" in their relationship. If Raghav accepts Geet's proposal he has to accept him as well as he is comes with Geet. Loved Maan's do and don't list for Raghav on being in relationship with Geet.He wants them to understand if Geet wants to leave him , he wont let her go or leave her I his entire lifeline. Maan mentions Raghav about their kiss and level of intimacy they share. Loved his endearments for Raghav with sarcastic best. He wants Raghav to understand how important and special Geet is to him.Geet was flabbergasted with Maan's demeanor and asks if he is drunk!? Guess Maan is drunk in Geet's love but not willing to show his emotions out and was best in masking his feelings for her. Inspite of his sarcasm and forewarns, Maan was surprised to see Raghav unwavered and clam with his retaliation whilst Raghav was bothered and distrubed about Maan's words but didn't make it obvious and noticeable on his face and did show that he wasnt affected by Maans words. Maan came to Geet's place as he wants Rahul's recording to solve the problem and Geet's diary. why does he need Geet's diary !? Geet was affected by Maans closeness.
Loved Maan's witticism and sarcastic demeanor. Maan stoled the whole limelight with the every shades he protrayed. He definitely wants his kitten back in his life as his best friend.
Thanks for the pm !
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Wow!!👏
i am kind of Speechless Anu with this excellent feedback of yours!!
I loved it!!
I don't know what else to say!
I just loved your comment, every bit of it!!

Underline - Red - Absolutely!! He is totally drunk in her love!! But that he is not going to accept!!

In this story the lovey dovey track is not going to come so soon!! This is a feisty story!!

I am very much happy that you loved Maan's sarcastic demeanor!! 😳

Needless to say Thank you so much baby!! Love your for such immense support!!❤️🤗
Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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