Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec

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mayashri

@mayashrisawant7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#841

read both part , so intimate yar just loved it lot , feeling very sad for maan he is trying to make things normal but geet is not ready to listen anything , how can she believe what rahul say, their friendship is so weak that someone came between them and break it. even maan explain his heart out still she is in her own world omg when will their distance come to end , wanna c them together

thanks for update and pm dear

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: cutical
will read n commebt sorry i was little busy these day so didnt read but once read n comment dont mind di

No problem!
Comment when you read!

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#843

Originally posted by: hira2010
Fanstastic awesome mind dhoing update
Raghav ko din Mei. Tarey dikha Diya maan nai
But he confidently say he loves geet and no problem with maaneet relationship
Ohh ya let see how msk break his confidence
Or yeh geet akhir gussa q Hai

Hahaha your comment is also mind dhoing awesome!!
Aur bhi tarey chand suraj dikhna baki hain raghav ka!!
Will MSK break his confidence?

Thanks a lot for your reply!

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#844

Originally posted by: love2_soma
why maan...u love her...accept it...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

he is not going to accept it!!
Thanks for your feedback!😳

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#845

Chapter 12

Beautiful and so Feisty too

Geet is angry on Maan while he is all confused as to why and what he did that has made her angry but when she speaks about Rahul proposing her Maan does get angry and according to Rahul Maan will portray his anger and Geet tells Maan the same and further when she is about to declare her hatred for him he stops her by placing his lips on hers if only Geet realizes that fact later that both of them are inexperience as it maybe their very first intimate type of kiss she'll know Rahul has just used Maan's name .

clearly Maan is possessive but Geet too is also possessive I think both hold love in their hearts for each other though its very early to actually realize that

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#846

Chapter 13

Both Maan and Geet realized they have crossed that line of friendship but Maan in his stubborness does not realize that now they are teens are perhaps for girls the closeness , kissing would be something very delicate and sensitive which Maan brushes off saying they kissed when they were younger so now if they doing the same it makes no difference but the problem is firstly Rahul's words that Maan has been with other girls and secondly Geet feels that Maan might be using their friendship to his benefit

Geet really got messed up trying to prove her point telling him its fine they can also get intimate as they are besties but that has to be all because of Rahul

Maan does not see why 16 months apart should change their bond but he is unaware of the entire truth

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#847

Originally posted by: taahir004
Chapter 13

Both Maan and Geet realized they have crossed that line of friendship but Maan in his stubborness does not realize that now they are teens are perhaps for girls the closeness , kissing would be something very delicate and sensitive which Maan brushes off saying they kissed when they were younger so now if they doing the same it makes no difference but the problem is firstly Rahul's words that Maan has been with other girls and secondly Geet feels that Maan might be using their friendship to his benefit
Geet really got messed up trying to prove her point telling him its fine they can also get intimate as they are besties but that has to be all because of Rahul
Maan does not see why 16 months apart should change their bond but he is unaware of the entire truth

Maan brushed off his thoughts and tried to portray that it doesn't matter because he feared that Geet will be broken if he too considers that kiss as some mistake!!

He knew at some extent that it was not a normal peck but as he considers her as his own that's why he was not that much bothered and felt happy that Geet has showed her rights on him!!

He has a complex mindset!! Anyway, next update shall clear a lot of things up about hos pov!!

Thanks a lot for your feedback!!😳

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#848

FYI commented on chapter 12 on page 128 and Chap 13 on page 129~!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 7 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hi,
Well!! That's one extremely amazing comment!!
Loved every bot of your lovely analysis!!

Maan and his sarcasm - I am extremely happy that you liked his sarcastic side!!
He is continuing to be like this!!!😉

Hahaha Did I make you laugh?? Then My mission is accomplished with this chapter.. Personally It's one of my favorite chapters!!

Thanks a lot for your excellent feedback!! Made my day!! Thanks!!🤗