Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: solaceMG
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Thanks a lot baby! Checking! 😃

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: solaceMG
Yeee you updated [:D/]
N i am first 😃
Fantastic ud as always
Eloquently written 👏
All the emotions are so well portrayed
As always i can see everything happening before my eyes
Maan is just awesome
He is witty, intelligent, passionate
He just yet 2 realise his love for geet since they r still very young so it is totally justified
Moreovr there is none 2 make them understand as well
Teenage me jaise chote chote issues ka yr masla ho jata hai this stoty is portraying that beautifully
So maan loves her smell bt since ab wo thodi badi hui hai he is getting attracted 2 her 😉 loving it
Oops he wants 2 kiss her wow, maan kafi jyada geet k lips ko dekhta rehta hai aur hamari geet hai hi itni cute kiss karne ka mann 2 hoga hi
Geet is very hurt n in her deep subconsious she fears that maan will leave her again n that is why she is hell bent on avoiding him
Bt she seems 2 b in love with him as well kyu ki when he hugged her she froze n 1 tarf she wants him 2 leave
Lekin 2re tarf she is delibrtly fighting with him tkey ladai hoti rahe aur maan uske 7 jyda se jyda waqt rahe
She misses him so much bt is trying 2 make him bliv that there is no hopr left
Whereas maan is a very bold n strong character
From chapter 1 he has been straight, sarcastic. Doesnt beat around the bush n precise about ehat he wants
So now he wants her diary n rahuls infamous recording i feel geet should give him
Kyu ki she keeps accusing him par aisa kia hai us recording me jo wo iss had tak galat samnj rahi hai maan ko
Par geet ne diary dene se inkar kar dia by lyinh 😕
Then again Maan proved he knows her a little 2 well n he confiscated that diary he he he good maan
Awee so cute rule of the diary. This is just so heart touching n pure how cute r these 2
Maan ne jo geet ko yaad dilana chaha bachpan ki their cute bonding that whole part is beyond anything
Cant describe how much i loved his dialoges 👏

Maan leaves n geet misses him. She wakes up in the middle of night n flashback starts
Much awaited flashback but u devil 😡just stopped at the right moment

Maans dialoge of her being his elixir is just EPIC
Also she feels the same he is her elixir as well. May be thts why she is so angry
Loved the chapter name ipti
Waiting 2 know what happened n the reason behind maan's absense
Thnx a lot 4 updating n the pm
Waiting 4 next eagerly 👏 😉

Awww... Another heart warming comment from you!
I so much love these long comments from you solace! Thanks a lot for being the constant support that you have been!

Your analysis is perfect! 👏

Maan- well makes me happy that you are liking how his character has been shaping up.
He is going to be more attracted towards here little by little... I still don't know how i am gonna pull that off!!
Hahaha yeah,, I love to see this devil reaction from you and hence only stopped at the right moment!!
😉

Shall update real soon!
Thank you so much for this awesome comment baby!🤗❤️ Love you so much!

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: solaceMG
Fanstastic GIF!
I am in dreamland already
And yes you always stop at the cliffhanger!
Am reading now, jaldi unres karungi
Thank u so much 4 updating yar

I am so happy that you liked the GIFs baby!
Yes got your res, and replied you as well!

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Tris

@astrisa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#654

Thanks for reply ipti
Waiting 4 next

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Tris

@astrisa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: Iptida

<font color="#009999">Awww... Another heart warming comment from you!
I so much love these long comments from you solace! Thanks a lot for being the constant support that you have been!

Your analysis is perfect!👏

Maan- well makes me happy that you are liking how his character has been shaping up.
He is going to be more attracted towards here little by little... I still don't know how i am gonna pull that off!!
Hahaha yeah,, I love to see this devil reaction from you and hence only stopped at the right moment!!
😉

Shall update real soon!
Thank you so much for this awesome comment baby!🤗❤️Love you so much!</font>

Love you 2 baby ❤️

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#656

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

well you updated so wanted to read and comment asap! sometimes when u delay u dnt get time to read and comment! thanks for the quick response! appreciate it😊 I love how this story is progressing! pls do no loose interest! if u do not continue here... then pls continue on the blog... ❤️🤗 love all ur stories... 😃 eager to know y Maan's dad took him abroad and if Maan manages 2 manofy Geet! 😃

Yes, I totally understand sweets!! And I love it cause I know you never rush to give me response rather take time and give me these beautiful comments of yours.

IF - Blog.. Well by IF I meant I am losing overall interest to update... I have told you earlier too...
However i shall overcome...
Thanks for loving all my stories!!

Yes shall update soon. We are only 18 likes away! 😳

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#657

Lovely GIFS dear ❤️

Wonderful update

Liked it !! Crisp writing.

Loved the way u have penned Maaneet's emotions and thoughts dear.

Maan is definitely in love with Geet but yet to realise it or wants to conceal his emotions from exhibiting or unveiling owing to his past. He is sharp eyed and attentive when it comes to his little kitten and notices her features & characteristic with scrutiny. Loved their intense hug and his enticed thoughts to kiss her profoundly. Maan tells her to give her dairy but Geet refused to give her dairy and stood on her grounds. Geet said him that she burnt her dairy but Maan refreshed her memory about their one of the rule and asked her not to break it. Love the way Maan addresses her as Mooh. Everytime he addresses her as Mooh can feel his warmth and serene feelings for her. Geet was flabbergasted when he left as giving up is never a trait he possessed. Geet's inner turmoil and confused state was well depicted. Loved their unique friendship and the rule , were both exchanged their diaries and reciprocated their friendship and thoughts. Geet is confused with her feelings and thoughts for Maan yet a part of her yearns for his warmth and other commands her to push him. Inspite of everything Geet is affected by his closeness and feels a sense of security and warmth being with him. The thought of her destroying her journal which held her deep secrets and key to unlock her emotions made her feel pain. Geet was rooted to ground due to sudden reappearance. He fooled her and understands her gesture well. Loved his heart felt words for her and him telling her about her being his elixir was heartwarming. Loved the way he assured her with his profound love and warmth. Definitely Maan is her elixir too that the reason she was hurt when Maan disappeared suddenly and wasn't being in touch with her after a year and so. Geet was reminiscing the moment when Maan was back in her life after is sudden disappearance. She demands to know answer from him but Maan wanted to dodged from answering her questions for time being. Guess he still didn't confide her about the reason of his sudden departure.

Thanks for the pm !

:))

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

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Posted: 8 years ago

#658

Awesome update
Geet Maan ko kitna bhi realize karwana chahe ki she is not affected by his proximity but Maan knows her very well
Geet phir se Maan ki nazdikio ki wajah se hurt nahi hona chahti iss liye she avoided him but real mai wo uss ke kareeb rehna chahti hai
Loved the way you discribed Maan's emotions
Beautifully written

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#659

awesome update ipti...Maan tried to ask geet about her diary very lovingly but geet didn't relent so Maan left from there and geet was going to destroy the diary with a heavy heart but before she can do so she was caught by Maan and took the diary from her and left kissing her forehead very tenderly and lovingly which invoked so many feelings in her and see in the truthfulness in his eyes she felt he is her old Maan but she isn't ready to give in to her emotions as she is really hurt...their ritual regarding their personal diary shows how deep and divine their friendship is that they share every single thing of theirs with each other...geet remembers the time when Maan returned from London she was happy and charged with all her pent up emotions that she wasn't able to express what she was feeling...I'm kind of confused about maan's feelings for geet I mean if he loves geet only as a friend then why he is so possessive for that he claims all rights which a lover has on his lady love and in this part too he wanted to kiss her on her lips when he knows a kiss on lips is for lovers his emotions are really complex to understand though I love this shade of his too...loved the update dear thnx for the pm hope u'll update soon...

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khwaishfan

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Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: Iptida

Yes, I totally understand sweets!! And I love it cause I know you never rush to give me response rather take time and give me these beautiful comments of yours.

IF - Blog.. Well by IF I meant I am losing overall interest to update... I have told you earlier too...
However i shall overcome...
Thanks for loving all my stories!!

Yes shall update soon. We are only 18 likes away! 😳

thanks...please do try... do not leave ur stories incomplete! now 16 more likes😃