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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
nice part
so maaneet's alliance is already fixed by their parents in their chilhood itself
but maan not ready to accept , poor soul geet she dearly loves him and is hurt with his bahaviour
her dad consoles her
ye last me kya twist dala yaar dara diya
it was really scary and painful
lets see what happens next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
thanks for the pm dear
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
wonderful update! well written! Geet loves Maan insanely but he is uninterested! his mom wants him 2 marry Geet! omg Geet jumped off the cliff!!! update soon! thanks 4 da pm!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
intriguing
She loved him crazily
but he sold her to d devil n betrayed her innocent trust

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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Part 4


"Maan : Kya meri saza abhi bhi puri nahi huyi Geet!!


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Her sleep broke with a jerk

"Saheb baby ji ko hosh agaya"

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...

Doctor came out after the check

"Dr: now she is all fine "

"Thank you dr"they all rushed at this room


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All gathered to her where she is looking too lost

Her papa sat beside her head,seeing her too lost he put his hand on her head that make her conscious

"Geet : papa" only whispering coming

"G.papa : Han bete "

"Geet : I feel like kisine mujhe awaz di"

"Papa : Yeha hamare alawa aur koi bhi nahi hai bete "

"Geet : Par" too confused

"G.papa : Bohat der ho gayi hai tumhe ab aram karna chahiye aur waise bhi tum abhi abhi thik huyi ho ,,,kaal raat se tumhe tez bukhar tha "he putted his palm on her head

"G.papa : Kya beet rahi thi mujhpe tumhe iss halat mein dekh k "a long tears fall from his eyes...
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Its now two days still she is thinking about someone who called her but who and why ? Sitting on the swing outside of her garden looking deeply

"Geet "she feels someone called with her name her eyes become restless then seeing everywhere none is here thinking at her illusion she left for her room

"Maid : Baby ji khana lagwa du "

"Geet : Hmm" she sat for breakfast lost ,maid served her and goes ,it's 10minutes already still she can't able to gulped one piece of food ,sudden her cell ringing make her conscious

"Geet : Haa Shruti ,,nahi abhi papa se baat nahi huyi ,,,hmm,,,Will talk to you later,,bye ."

She cut the call and left breakfast table without having anything

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"Papa" saw him getting ready for his work

"G.papa : Arey bete aoo betho "both are sat on the bed "did you have your breakfast "seeing her dipped head he got she haven't "ok mere sath karlo chalo ," he too join her in breakfast table she can't even feel hunger but she knows now its impossible to deny so silently having her meals

"G.papa : Kuch kehna tha na tumhe ? "He asked for her reason to coming in his room,hearing that she stopped and slowly started playing with her food with dipped head

"Geet : papa my college going for an camping and "

"G.papa : And ?" She gulped not looking at him

"Geet : Me too want to go" meekly she said

"G.papa : You are still not well "he pointed but saw her face turned small he agreed "ok "her face now glowing,don't know what to do,just feel to hugged him but seeing his strain face somehow stopped her anxiety and sat again but can't stopped her happiness

"Geet : Thank you papa" slowly not looking at him really

"G.papa : but iska yeh matlab nahi ki I will give you permission to gett ill again"she nodded slowly hearing his warning "Kaha pe hai camping?"

"Geet : Sundrapur"

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Bihar,Sundrapur


"Geett"he feels like geet is here

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They all beated him like crops...

One man entered in this jail where all monsters gathered one person that is binding with chains and water falling on this head they are beating him like an animal...there boss come and they're stopped torturing,he came really close and pulled his hair back,,,now there face glowing with sunlight that is coming through the ventilator...


All flashback started from maan handover that girl to Birat ,,,there (maan-geet)nok-jhok,,, geet fall from the cliff...


"Birat : kabtak ,,,haa,,,kabtak ushka intrzar karega ,,,hmm!! "A dirty smirk appears "mujhe abtak yeh samajh mein nahi ata,,, 40 k umro mein bhi tu itni maar kaise bardasht kar laita hai,,,mar kyu nahi jata ,,,haa"...then threw maan's head back leaving his hair but wonder to see his eyes that is glowing a beautiful smiling appears in his lips now

"Birat : hass kyu raha hai "slowly with weird mixed anger still maan didn't stopped his beautiful smile that made mad at birat he grabbed his neck just wants to finish him right now ,,,after sometime he leaves but maan started coughing badly ,,, "ajj rath ishe chuho k bich lita k rakhna,,,chalooo"orderd then left with birat all left him alone again

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"Maan : Agar marna hota toh tabhi mar jata "

Flashback before 20years

"Geettt,,,geettt"


He ran after seeing her jumped about to fall like geet in his craziness after losing geet but from back 2mens caught by his hands and dragged him with them where he is crying for his loss ,trying to lose their grips but feel himself so weak before them,he was wounded very badly still it's not paining much seeing her falling make him dying hundreds time,,,

"Maan : Leave me ,,,she will die ,,,leave me ,,,chodo ,,,woh mar jayegi "crying for her mercy or his but still those monsters didn't leave him ,can't bear anymore he fainted there on the ground,,,from now on he was prisoner of Birat Singh trying to soothe her pain his pain punishing himself he didn't even try to ran ,,,he thought he deserve more what he did ,,,he didn't sleep peacefully with this 20years,,, whenever he closed his eyes geet painful face came in his dream where she only took his name innocently " maan "that is enough to break him into pieces...



Finished part...
swapna.p thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Emotional update..
Thank you for pm..
Waiting for next update..
khwaishfan thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
wonderful update! well written! thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
super update
you update after long time
flashback part is painful for maan
want to know what happen next
thanx for pm
update next soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
kya hoga age...

nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
It's shocking part. Is it geet's new birth. Maan is in the prison of birat.hebhast been torturing her since long. Maan felt geet's presence. Waiting for next dear

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