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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: taahir004

Welcome Back
Chapter was just Superb

Naintara now back to Delhi and this time she has a plan to separate both Maan and Geet she wants Miya and Geet out of Maan's life and she knows this time he will not be able to handle the separation
Maan and Geet are now only finding their solace each other its now that they find their togetherness filled with love and both are trying to heal from the past pains but with Naintara returning surely there will be lots of problems now
Arjun too is back and Annie seeing him after years


Thanks for the comments. I knw this FF had been hard becuase Maaneet suffered for most of it and then is discontinued the FF. So now I am trying to make up for that but in the end the basic story has to be there 😳 nd this one is mostly a painful romance.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: impoojaverma

Part-52

CAN'T BELIEVE YOU GIVE US AN UPDATE!
It has been really long for me too to visit IF now & then, busy life, but what a surprise it's that after so long i open up IF & saw a message from you for this one's update! A diwali gift for us. Please now don't go vanish for another year.😆

Coming to update, we finally get to see the passionate Maan-geet back to us.
Yaar ye NT kya karegi ab!😲 ABhi toh woh dono khush hone lag gye the ye phir se aa gyi. I just hope maan will counter-back her move this time rather than being unaware of her movements. He can't let her win again like the last time.
Annie & Arjun ka angle finally aa hi gya. Can understand annie's thought for geet. Anyone would have think like that concerning to the things happened with them. I hope arjun this time will see annie's love for him.
Can i just say Amiya is now ruling the KM😆. She keep maan on her toes from whom everyone is scared off.

AB next update next year matt dena. Please😃


Now that you say may be I should post the next update next diwali 😆 😆

Even after all these years it is a joy to read your comments 🤗

Like I said before I have lost plot of many of the sub characters like Arjun and Annie. Trying to catch up. I am trying to be present and continue writing the FF and if possiblle start new ones 😛


It was by accident I found GHSP on hotstar and saw some Maaneet scenes and missed them like hell and came back right here.


And finally a biggg thank you for taking precious time from your busy schedule.I know how hard it is ti keep up with the forum. WHen we started social media was not so prevelant and forum was our main platform for fandom. Now it is a struggle to put your phone down. So the point is I know the effort and time each and everyone of you take to read these stories.

Thank you and all the readers for that!! 🤗
Edited by madhubala123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Here is the next update. Hope you like it 😳

Thank you for the amazing support. 🤗
Your comments motivate me a lot. SO please try to make it as long as possible. Even if I don't reply to each and everyone of them I read and re-read everyone of them and that is the only reward that makes it all feel worth it.

PART 53


When Amiya woke up from her sleep, she didn't know where she was. But as she looked around she liked what she saw. She was in suite for sure and the room was designed especially for her.

Amy's room






The view outside her window was beautiful with birds chirping and beautiful flowers dancing in the wind. She was so curious as if Alice in the wonderland that she forgot her walking stick. But it was only a mere support now for she can walk for most of the part only it would tire her quickly. So she sat on the cushion seat next to the window and looked at the beautiful sky and the flowers and the fluttering butterflies around her. Only when the initial excitement washed away was she worried about the place or time or any of it. This is not a dream and she is in a strange land. Fears from the past made her toes curl and her lips quiver but before she could panic she saw a familiar and the most reassuring face looking at her lovingly with a smile on his face and his hand folded across his chest that the kid knew there was nothing dangerous in the world that could terrify her when he was around, her super-dad. She got up and tried to run but her legs gave up. Maan was about to run to her but she stopped him with a gesture and gathered her balance and walked up to him. No father could have been ever so proud as Maan in that moment and no mother ever so fulfilled as Geet as she watched from the baby cam in the adjacent room whent he father and daughter hugged each other. She couldn't just sit there and she burst into the next room breaking their little moment.

Geet : Acha, to Ami ab ap papa se naraz nhi he?

The kid didn't even remember that she was supposed to be angry.
Ami: mmm...nhi...thoda naraz?

Maan looked at faking a wounded expression and tickled her,"jhoota bacha...Mia superdad se kabhi naraz nhi he..."

Mia struggled between laughing and talking and trying to stop her dad's attack. She playfully punched his chest. "Nhi papa...me apse jhoot nhi bolti.."

Maan stopped tickling her, "arey par ap to humse naraaz nhi he na..to phir jhut hi kaha na.."
Mia thought for a moment as Maan took her in his arms and sat on the cute little bed. Geet snuggled closer to them. Maan put Amy on his lap his right hand protectively over her and other hand around Geet. His world was complete now.


Geet tucked Amy's pajamas,"kya soch rha he mera bacha.."

Amy, "yehi mumma ki hum kaha he aur ye papa bata hi nhi rhe...tabhi to me naraz hu.."

Geet rolled her eyes, "uffoo..princess ye na apke papa ki purani aadat he..jisko khush karana he usey bina bataye kahi bhi le ao.."

Maan looked at them both, "acha ab dono milke papa ki chugli karoge?"
Geet and Amy together, "bilkul"

Maan smiled more radiantly than ever and kissed simlutaneously on the tip of both of their noses. "We are in Ireland.."
"I know that", Geet said almost immediately and Maan eyed her.

Before they could start their bickering Amy shreiked, "Ireland?"
Maan felt happy,"This is Bundoran..they have good beaches here.."

Amy looked confused "wo to Mumbai me bhi he.."
Geet couldn't help but snort. What did Mr. Khurana think? A posh vacation and beach was enough to impress a kid, esp a Khurana kid!
Maan felt much out of his game now. The little princess was just too tough for him.

But he can't fail. This is his daughter after all. "I know beta, but here your super dad will show how to fly in the sea!"
Amy let out shriek "fly in the sea? How would you do that?"

Maan now quite happy with himself, "Because this is your superdad.. He can do anything"

Maan and Amy were quite their happy selves but Geet realised what was coming. Her heart thumped as she kept talking to herslef, "oh no, he is going to surf! How am I supposed to keep calm..Does he even realise how hot he even looks when he does that! Now he is going to atrract other females and that too in front of our kid. I can't even be mad at him!"

Maan raised an eyebrow but Geet managed a nervous laugh. Amy pulled her to the bed and soon the trio were pillow fighting when Maan was sure that some of the blows by Geet were not just playful. It is as if she wanted to hurt him. He could only wonder why.

It was around 3pm and the sun was mellowing down. Maan was checking some mails in the living room still in his black vest and track pants when he saw Geet emerging out of the dressing room in a royal blue and yellow printed sarong. The apparel clung to her curves in every inviting way to entice Maan. He smiled to himself knowing the effect that she had on him even without so much as a glance at him. Geet stood next to the window admiring the seaside view. Maan closed his laptop and walked upto her and stood just behind her. Geet felt his presence and heart responded by beating faster. She blushed as if on autopilot. Maan moved closer and Geet could feel his warm breath on her nape. She closed her eyes as she felt his hand mildly brazing the small of her back. Maan's strong hands moved gently like a feather around her back and then to the narrow curve of her hips that tantalized his every senses.He gave her a gentle nudge bringing her body closer to him and hugged her from behind. Geet titled her head sideways giving him more access to devour her.




As Maan placed wet kisses on her nape Geet opened her eyes full of desire and at that moment she saw some wet hot guys in their boxer shorts walking towards the hotel with a surfer board in one hand. She quickly pulled herself away rudely waking Maan from his sensual riverie.
Maan couldn't figure out what just happened, "kya hua shona...tumhe...tumhe acha nhi laga kya.."
Geet looked at him even more angry and walked away. Maan followed her to the living room where she was sitting on the sofa.
Maan was really worried now,"Geet baat kya he?"

Geet : apko abhi tak nhi pata baat kya he..chaddoo

Maan : Geet mujhe sach me koi idea nhi he..tabhi to tumse puch rha hu

Geet : ae lo ab inhe ye bhi nhi pata!

Maan : Geet ab tum bataogi bhi ya nhi..

Geet : ek to chori upar se zeena zori..apne kaha ye vacation Amy ke liye he aur yeha to sab apke mutabiq he. Me na apko ache se janti hu. Apko har waqt sab kuch apke mutabiq hona he..


Maan : Geet? me Amy ko khush krna chahta tha..tabhi to ye vacation me aye..aur rhi baat mere mutabiq chalne ki..tumhe pata he na tumhari clothing line ke launch ka kitna sara kaam abhi baaki he..upar se US jaane k baad yeha jo follow ups he uske pending work bhi khatam nhi hue...mera bas chalta to me office me ghar bana leta.. par me yeha hu tum logo k saath.Kyu ki tum dono ki khushi se badkar is duniya me mere liye kuch bhi nhi

Geet softened a little bit, "Oh..matlab ap sirf Amy ki khushi ke liye surfing pe ja rhe ho?"
Maan : Of course Geet, tumne dekha nhi wo kitni tezi se recover kr rhi he. Me to Mia ko motivate krne ke liye yeha laya tha. Agar usey surfing pasand ayi aur seekhne ka mann kiya to wo aur jaldi theek ho jayegi. apne diet aur excercie pe focus kregi. Aur doctor ne ye bhi to kaha tha ki usko jin haalat se guzarna pada uske liye ek change of scenery vacation ki zarurat he..isi liye to hum yeha...

Maan stopped mid-sentence as he saw tears welling up in Geet's eyes. "ab kya hua Geet?"
Geet hugged him so tight that Maan couldn't even breath for a second.


Her held her gently in his arms and listened as she murmurmed into his chest softly, "I am sorry Maan. me bhi na..kitni jhalli hu! ap Amy ke liya itna kuch soch rhe he, usko motivate krne ke liye surfing pe leke ja rhe he aur me faltu me ap pe gussa dikha rhi hu.."
It was Maan who broke the hug now, "ek minute Geet..tum surfing ki wajah se gussa ho rhi thi? kyu tumhe kya laga?"
Geet looked at the floor. She couldn't face him and tell that even after all these years she couldn't stand other women looking at her man.
Maan : jawab do Geet. Isme gussa hone wali kya baat thi..

Geet : wo..mujhe laga..wo...


Maan : ha wo kya?

Geet : ki ap ladkiyo ke samne impression banane ke liye..(nervously)..wo style maar rhe he..aur ye me jhel nhi skti!

Maan smirked. She was jealous. He felt proud. Even a slight approval on her part made his heart swell.
He held her closer. Geet looked at him nervously. She was worried if he was angry. Maan took that moment of confusion to make her sit on his lap and gently whispered in her ears "ye to tumne sahi socha.."
Geet opened her mouth agape in shock. Maan smiled and continued in his sensual hoarse voice,"impress krna he mujhe..lekin sirf ek hi ladki ko...aur usey impress krna meri puri zindagi ki maqsat ban gyi he ab.."

Geet blushed as he went on,"jo kuch bhi me krta hu sabse pehle yehi khayal aata he ab ki Geet ko kaise lagega..wo kya sochegi..even mere projects bhi..tumhe mind me rkh ke select krne laga hu..."
Geet "itni fiqar he apko mere rai ki?"
Maan :bilkul..kyu ki tum hamesha sahi rasta chunti ho Geet..
She looked at him affectionately.
Maan : tumhe pata he Geet ye aj nhi bachpan se hi meri aadat ho gyi thi jab se tum meri zindagi me ayi tabse.
Geet :acha..
Maan :hmm infact mene work out krna bhi tumhe impress krne ke liye hi kiya..
Geet :chee Maan...ap bhi na..
Maan : arey sach me..US se wapis atey taq me apne apko tumhare kaabil banana chahta tha..phir jo hua..
Geet quickly closed his mouth. She didn't want him to go back to that dark place.
Geet: to ap kya keh rhe the..ki apne ye handsome body mere liye banaya..
Maan pressed her closer,"bilkul...Agar me apne apko flaunt krna chahta hu to wo sirf tumhare liye..samjhi tum.."
Geet was beetroot red by now and unknowingly her hands went up and down tracing his stron muscled body.

Maan in a whispering hoarse voice, "Geet.."
Geet : ji..(closing her eyes)
Maan(smirking):chale..ye vacation to akhir Miya ke liye he na..
Geet opened her eyes flushed and nodded quietly.

Maan surfed and flaunted himself in front of his lady love and kid without giving a thought about anyone who watched and Geet was so lost in him this time that she didn't have the time to notice to take care of the eager lustful eyes of those around them and even if she did, Geet didn't care. She knew that Maan would turn the world upside down for her and their kid. She knew it by now. And little Mia Khurana was all hooting and jumping all excited at the way her superdad moved. She wanted to fly like her superdad in the sea. She promised to mumma that she would eat all the brocholi and carrots and would not cheat on her excercises. Geet smiled lovingly at her dear child and kissed on her forehead. At that moment she loved Maan even more and wanted him more than anything in the world.

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Hope you enjoyed this one 😳

PRECAP : Maan reveals the real surprise 😉

Edited by madhubala123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Too sleepy now...PMs later
😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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b4 i got ur pm itself i started reading it.Amy's bedroom is beautiful.Really a wonderland.maan amy scene was very cute.maan said they were in Ireland n amy's answer was very funny.maaneet romance was very passionate.geet thought maan is doing surfing to impress other girls.but maan telling her that he is doing this 4 amy n geet became emotional.it was lovely.Maan saying that he wants to impress only geet was romantic.loved maan doing surfing without bothering abt what others think n Geet not jealous as she trusts maan's luv 4 her n amy is so nice.u added pics this time.thx a lot.
plz update thattathil marayathu ff n Raja Rani ff.miss them badly
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Posted: 7 years ago
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magnificent update! well written! Amy;s room is beautiful! they r in Ireland! Maan teaching Amy how 2 smurf! Geet accuses him and he explains! she apologizes! nice Maaneet moments! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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beautiful update


wow maaneet n amy on vacation... love amy cutnesss...

hehehe... geet felt J thinking about maan flaunting his body

love the way maan made understand geet the real reason ... n what good for amy health...

maaneet moments were lovely
full maaneet amy update
love it very much


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

b4 i got ur pm itself i started reading it.Amy's bedroom is beautiful.Really a wonderland.maan amy scene was very cute.maan said they were in Ireland n amy's answer was very funny.maaneet romance was very passionate.geet thought maan is doing surfing to impress other girls.but maan telling her that he is doing this 4 amy n geet became emotional.it was lovely.Maan saying that he wants to impress only geet was romantic.loved maan doing surfing without bothering abt what others think n Geet not jealous as she trusts maan's luv 4 her n amy is so nice.u added pics this time.thx a lot.

plz update thattathil marayathu ff n Raja Rani ff.miss them badly


Thank you jas for the comments 😊
The other FFs I will try to resume. It's been a long time just need to connect back. 😳
Edited by madhubala123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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do not just try friend.u shud resume.I want our dear Madhubala back.U can

Originally posted by: madhubala123


Thank you jas for the comments 😊
The other FFs I will try to resume. It's been a long time just need to connect back. 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

do not just try friend.u shud resume.I want our dear Madhubala back.U can

Thanks for the support dear. I will continue soon 😊

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