Predestined!#T2!UPDATED CH36@pg 144*NOW[Thread 3 opened]12 oct

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#911

Pm would be sent later
Bear with the errors and commas for now as well

Humongous update for my dear sissy's comeback!
Welcome back Ruppu! 🤗

Thanks to all dearies who have commented and liked the previous chapters! ❤️

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#912

Wow didu ... Amazing didu .. Thankd didu for your love 😳

Hahah ... Ab geet maan ko tadpa rahi hain... Poor maan ... He is very aroused because of innocent acts by his wifey ...loved their cute nok jhok ... Maan wanted to clarify everything abt sam but geet is not in a mood to listen his talks as he called her chatter box and she wanted him to apologise her by writing a lettr 😆 msk and letter lol ... I loved the scene where maan msged her to come online ... Thats soo sweet .. Ek hi ghar mein rehkar chat karne se excitement badh jaathi hain ... Finally maan ne letter likh liya na 😆🤣 omgg i cant stop laughing after reading that letter didu ...he again called her chatterbox , chalthi disaster .. And top of it he himself called him dusht danav maan 🤣

Pyar ke liye maan ko kya kya karna padh raha hain 😆

Finally he confessed ... How can geet think that she dont deserve maan ??? They deserved each other 😳 i loved his confession wow ... He even said that he will remove all the pain he had given to geet ... 😳 his confession is great .. I loved it 😳 confessing itself is a special na ... Dono ek pal ke liye bhi door nahin reh paa rahe hain ...omgg teen din mein kithna change maan mein ?? 😲 i loved his change ... Maan singh khurana lover singh khurana ban gaya ... Geet making pasta for maan ... omgg kithna pyaar hain dono mein ... 😳 dono ki khushi ko kisi ki nazar na lage 😊😉...

Omggg kya hua maan ko didu aap aisa kyun kar rahe ho??? Maan ko kuch nahin hoga ... Its very scary didu ...

Ab aap jaldi update dijiye na cant wait for next one 😳

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#913

Originally posted by: Iptida
Pm would be sent later
Bear with the errors and commas for now as well

Humongous update for my dear sissy's comeback!
Welcome back Ruppu! 🤗

Thanks to all dearies who have commented and liked the previous chapters! ❤️

Ohhh wowwwewww ... Thank you ssooo much diduuu ... Love you didu ❤️

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jasika

@jasika08

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Posted: 7 years ago

#914

Lovely update

Waiting for next update

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Tris

@astrisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#915

Chapter 34
Awesome fantastic update
Geet bichari kitna dar gai hai ye soch k ki kahi maan ko kuch ho na gaya ho aur wo to halucinate bhi karne lagi
Then she saw maan is fine n she cries
Maan to apni innocent wife ke aankho me aansu nai dekh paya so he hugs her
Loved their hug it displays the comfort they share with each other
Then geet proposes maan the hightlight of the ud
So beautiful then maan gets a new phone and their banter is again on he calls her cute cute nicknames
I cant say ye wala part jayda acha hai kyu ki the whole ud is so so good. Oho ye geet jhalli toh khud hi khud ki musibat ki karan banegi she is unknowingly testing maans patience giving him a really hard time
Really sorry for the late comment. I read it again today. Very well written.
Thanks for updating.
Now reading the next chapter

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#916

Wholehearted update dear !!

Loved it!! Beautifully penned.

Maan's gestures were teasing Geet's sense but was snapped out of her thoughts when she realised that she was supposed to be angry on Maan. To the contrary Geet was in as good as one gets state of mind and was pulling Maan's leg in her playful and exuberant nature. Poor Maan was behaving like love sick puppy behind her. Loved Maan's cute little plead and the way he asked her to come online was so sweet. Loved Geet's retaliate to Maan's cute solicit and the way she was trying to be coquettish with her demeanor towards Maan . Lol !! Geet wanted him to apologise to her by writing an apology letter. Loved Maan's apology letter were he stated truth of his cute seductress. Finally Maan confessed his love for Geet with his simple and heartfelt words. Though he wanted to confess his endurance to Geet after revealing about Sameera the situation made him to confess his heart out . Geet was overwhelmed with his confession and felt cosy with his words and gestures that she was awaiting for his return from office and was anxious whole day.

Loved Maaneet's lovey dovey banter and repartee. This update was filled with many cute and sweet moments between Maaneet and their love for each other.

Listening to the news Geet's thoughts were filled with unpleasant thoughts and Maan not receiving her call made her feel more miserable and shaken.

Thanks for updating !!

:))

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Jasbir Kaur

@jasbirkaur85197

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Posted: 7 years ago

#917

Thanks for updating. This update is sooo beautiful. ..heart touchy. ...luvly nd I luv sooo much apology letter of maan for his geet

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#918

awesome update yr...just loved it...the first part of the update was so cute where Maan tried to manofy his cute wifey who was showing her fake anger as her hubby dear called her chatterbox and chalti phirti disaster and didn't even confessed his love to her and went on maun vrat teasing the poor hubby who was in a romantic mood and also wanted to disclose her about his past but wifey Jaan didn't detered so finally Maan had to give her a written apology which she demanded and that broke her maun vrat and fake gussa...Maan said sorry to her for his past behaviour and she stopped him and was going to say she isnt worthy of him and how could he hear that so leaving all thoughts of making it special he said I love u to her and what could me more special than him confessing his love so beautifully to her...he told her that he'll answer all her questions about him soon and told her to wait for the night where he is going to compensate for his past behaviour and all the distances between them will be removed which made her shy and nervous...their phone conversation was cute and now geet doing all sorts of things to pass her time as she is missing her hubby a lot but became anxious as it's very late and he is still not home and the news on TV shook her totally and she rushes out searching for her life madly on the streets and lastly went to the accident site and couldn't find him there too...hope nothing happened to Maan and I think he may have reached home and hope my guess is correct...very eagerly waiting for next part please update soon...