Till death do us apart - SS - Chapter 5 pg 1 (28/05/2020)

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: payal.gupta177
Interesting prologue and CS. Maan lied to Dadima that he got married to inherit KC. As Dadima wants to see her DIL Maan is in a fix, has to arrange a girl who would be his wife. Geet is a widow, has a 4yr old daughter, suffering from a tumour, wants to secure her daughter's life, agreed to marry Maan on a contract basis. Nice plot. Maan wants to get accustomed to Geet's daughter Payal but she refused to accept him as her Papa. Fabulous start. Loved it. Will wait for next.

Thank you so much dear. Happy to hear that you liked it. Will update soon.

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: aparna3011
congrats for new story
superb

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
terrific update! superbly written! feeling sad 4 Geet! she is dying n worried abt her daughter! She makes a deal with Maan who needs a wife for a month! its a contract marriage! Maan and Adi share a great bond! Maan meets Payal who is not ready 2 accept him! update soon

Originally posted by: alekhika20
Nice update,cont soon

Thank you all of you.😳

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: avnii
Dude an new 2 ur ff
D prolouge is superbbb
So maan lied 2 his dadi
Wat is he gonna do now
Gosh geet is not well
Now wat will happen
How will maaneet meet

Plzz dont make it a sad story

welcome to my story world.🤗

This story will have combination of all emotions.

Fear of losing someone dear, fear of leaving, romance, happy, sad, emotional.

Just wait and watch.😉

Read Chapter 1 too. I think you have not read it. Maneet have already met.

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Lovely update geet was in a fix she needed to find a way to arrange some way to make her daughter future secure geet heard maan talking to adi that he needed a girl to act his wife for a month and he will pay any amount of money geet told maan she is ready to be his wife for a month but only if he gives enough money to secure payal future maan agreed but paysl refuses to accept maan as her dad

Originally posted by: angeldream14
intriguing

Originally posted by: fict
Interesting start. Geet's decision was expected when she has to think of securing Payal's future. Lets see how Payal comes around and accepts Maan.

Thank you all.😳

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DreamyMadhu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

nice start
geet is widow of dev & payal is their daughter
maan want a fake wife to show dadima
geet ready to becom his wife for payal
geet has a tumour
paayal denied to call maan papa
waitng fr nxt prt

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vasavi_sri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Nice update

It is confirmed that geet is having a tumor

She wants to do something for payal

When she heard Adi and Maan talking

She said to maan that she will be his

Wife for one month maan agreed and

Asked how much money she wants

In return

Geet wants payal enough money until

She can work she is worried for her kid

More then her health

Payal didn't accept maan

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Wow Kate that was just an Amazing start

Geet has tumor and now the reports have confirmed it but her biggest problem is Payal's future and she does not want Payal to suffer or be an orphan like she was

while Maan and Adi discuss about his one month wife Geet overhears and she suggest to Maan that she would like to be his wife for one month but she needs her daughter too live with them as she no bady and cannot just leave her child .

Maan agrees as he knows that his Daadima will like Geet because she has culture and respect and Maan also feels she is perfect as she never came after him unlike the other girls

Maan meets Payal and tells her he will be her papa and she rejects him making both Maan and Geet shocked

Geet needs to marry Maan so Payal's future is secured

I'm sure now she'll have to find a way to make Payal agree to call Maan as Papa

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kabslocks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Congratulations for new story.

Awesome start. Maan lied to Dadima that he got married. Dadima is coming to see his wife. Maan is in a fix and want a contract wife for one month. Geet has a tumer that has to be operated within 40 days. After listening Maan and Adi conversation Geet offered to play role of maan's wife for one month and want amount enough for her daughter's future.

Waiting for next part.

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: crazy-dd-fan
nice start
geet is widow of dev & payal is their daughter
maan want a fake wife to show dadima
geet ready to becom his wife for payal
geet has a tumour
paayal denied to call maan papa
waitng fr nxt prt

Thank you.😃