Till death do us apart - SS - Chapter 5 pg 1 (28/05/2020)

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hottyangel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

interesting concept... eagerly waiting for update...

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Congrats for the new story

Interesting prologue and cs

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: hottyangel
interesting concept... eagerly waiting for update...

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri
Congrats for the new story
Interesting prologue and cs

Thank you dearies. Updated Chapteer 1

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Interesting prologue and CS. Maan lied to Dadima that he got married to inherit KC. As Dadima wants to see her DIL Maan is in a fix, has to arrange a girl who would be his wife. Geet is a widow, has a 4yr old daughter, suffering from a tumour, wants to secure her daughter's life, agreed to marry Maan on a contract basis. Nice plot. Maan wants to get accustomed to Geet's daughter Payal but she refused to accept him as her Papa. Fabulous start. Loved it. Will wait for next.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

terrific update! superbly written! feeling sad 4 Geet! she is dying n worried abt her daughter! She makes a deal with Maan who needs a wife for a month! its a contract marriage! Maan and Adi share a great bond! Maan meets Payal who is not ready 2 accept him! update soon

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Intersting start

but i wonder what will happen in one month.. its too short time for maan and geet and also for us readers🤔

kate make it one year na plz😳
then u can convert this into FF😃

see the story has lot of scope..

maan has to impress payal
geet has to impress dadi
payal has to accept both maan and Dadi

then geet and maan have to get comfotable with eachother

Phew!!

it can be a looonggg Story😉

Waiting for the next

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Intersting start

but i wonder what will happen in one month.. its too short time for maan and geet and also for us readers🤔

kate make it one year na plz😳
then u can convert this into FF😃

see the story has lot of scope..

maan has to impress payal
geet has to impress dadi
payal has to accept both maan and Dadi

then geet and maan have to get comfotable with eachother

Phew!!

it can be a looonggg Story😉

Waiting for the next

Long stories and me😆

Are you kidding me ? 😆

You know how long you have to wait for my update. I want to finish my stories before I get busy again. There is a reason why I made one month. You will get to know it soon.😉

Falling in love can happen at any time. Maybe within a moment to after a year.

I ' m trying to finish this story also soon. I cannot write long ones too.

Thanks for the suggestion dear.

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avnii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Dude an new 2 ur ff

D prolouge is superbbb

So maan lied 2 his dadi

Wat is he gonna do now

Gosh geet is not well

Now wat will happen

How will maaneet meet

Plzz dont make it a sad story

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Lovely update geet was in a fix she needed to find a way to arrange some way to make her daughter future secure geet heard maan talking to adi that he needed a girl to act his wife for a month and he will pay any amount of money geet told maan she is ready to be his wife for a month but only if he gives enough money to secure payal future maan agreed but paysl refuses to accept maan as her dad