Mortal Promises!#T2!UPDATED CH35@pg141*Now[Note at page 148]28 oct - Page 98

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Posted: 7 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE
FINALLY GEET BECOME NORMAL N TALK WITH MAAN
MAAN SAID HE WILL DIE IF SHE DINT TALK TO HIM N DISTANCE FROM HIM
GEET TOOK PROMISE FROM MAAN THAT HE NEVER LEAVE HER
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Loved Maan's manaofying his Misty
Loved their confession and their togetherness
But specially the rose wala part
Beautifully written

Edited by manjeet6 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Thank you for pm..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Just loved it finally Geet ne maan KO maf kar hi Diya nice update waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
kiss janam mein unres hogi ye?? 😉😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopa_1

Wow ... Didu amazing update ... Awesome one ...loved it ... No words to express how i felt ... Their love ... 😳 Didu you have expressed so beautifully ... I cant say how beautiful it is .. You have expressed each and every word with depth ... Its is very beautiful .. Didu .. I have loved each and every word ... 😳 Maan manofying geet ... Maans care is the thing which i love more than anything .. Indeed maans love and care melted her ... Maan was soo much worries abt her ... He can understand her unsaid words ... He is worried abt her pain. . How sweet 😳 lol maan asking her such questions ... Geet is all shy shy and maan himself embarassed as he thought that he went too far 😆 I can imagine their faces lol ... Omgg i loved his confession. . He seemed soo vulnerable without her .. Msk is not unlnerable but he is vulnerable infront of his love 😳 Even though geet is hell angry on him she cant see him broken ... She immediately left all her anger and went to console him ... Both missed each other crazily and four days of distance made them soo emotional. ... Geet is very angry as he left with sameera 😡 i loved geets punishment .. More than anyone maan will love her punishment more 😆 Geet is becoming bold day by day didu .. Even she have become possessive for him 😳 Maan is loving this geet more ... 😳 14 roses 7 red for their love and 7 white for their frndhsip ... Wow didu i loved this one ... 😳 They are remembering their childhood ... Lekin kya hain 26th july ?? Is it the day when they got married ?? Or it the day when they confessed each other ??? But geet is saying that he used to believe this on his bday date na ... arey jaldi kaho .. Loved this one didu ... Didu firse my lovable flashback scenes ... Wow .. But y maan is saying not to talk to dev ??? Interesting .. Waiting for next update ...update soon. .. Love you didu for this fantastic update ... Its soo heart touching ❤️

Hi baby, ok so finally got your forst res after a long gap!!!
So glad that you are much happy with this update!!! Even for a change I seem to enjoy my own writing for a change and I read this one quite attentively !! Can you believe this!! 🤣

The roses- well that's why they are on the gif as well as the precap na baby!! When I was writing it suddenly popped in like all other stuff I write but then after writing the whole chunk and diving into the planned part which is their past when I skimmed through the rose part it cam out beautifully!!! The GIF I made just today after coloring the update in my mind i was searching for such scene and since i am an avid Geet fan it didn't take my mind long to find that specific GIF.

Since it's MP and i guess here readers expectation is lot more than my other 4 so putting something especial with each update is a tough job... I hope and trying I am not repeating the scenes anywhere... The flavor can be repeated, i don't mind with that!!😳😃

Underlines - red> well, you know how he loves her... I guess I have already pulled it in previous chapters... And this the beauty na one invincible man whose everything exist into someone so adorably fragile like Geet!! Waah kiya dialoge mari hain1!! isko bhi dalne wali hoon next chapters mein 😆😉🤣

Pink >july 26th is the day where they confessed officially Pagal... And something else is on Maan's bday!!! Which is just a few days pending from this chapter!!!

Blue >> Next chapter mein pata chaal hi jana hain!!

Thanks a lot baby for such heart warming response!! God!! I have missed your response too much!!! ❤️🤗
Love you too baccha!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hi baby, ok so finally got your forst res after a long gap!!!
So glad that you are much happy with this update!!! Even for a change I seem to enjoy my own writing for a change and I read this one quite attentively !! Can you believe this!! 🤣

The roses- well that's why they are on the gif as well as the precap na baby!! When I was writing it suddenly popped in like all other stuff I write but then after writing the whole chunk and diving into the planned part which is their past when I skimmed through the rose part it cam out beautifully!!! The GIF I made just today after coloring the update in my mind i was searching for such scene and since i am an avid Geet fan it didn't take my mind long to find that specific GIF.

Since it's MP and i guess here readers expectation is lot more than my other 4 so putting something especial with each update is a tough job... I hope and trying I am not repeating the scenes anywhere... The flavor can be repeated, i don't mind with that!!😳😃

Underlines - red> well, you know how he loves her... I guess I have already pulled it in previous chapters... And this the beauty na one invincible man whose everything exist into someone so adorably fragile like Geet!! Waah kiya dialoge mari hain1!! isko bhi dalne wali hoon next chapters mein 😆😉🤣

Pink >july 26th is the day where they confessed officially Pagal... And something else is on Maan's bday!!! Which is just a few days pending from this chapter!!!

Blue >> Next chapter mein pata chaal hi jana hain!!

Thanks a lot baby for such heart warming response!! God!! I have missed your response too much!!! ❤️🤗
Love you too baccha!!!

thanks for reply didu lekin ab intezaar karna bahuth mushkil hain 😳 Kya maan bday aug 15 hain kya 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow another amazing update. Maan melted geet by his touches and made geet understand. And maan is so caring . He is worried of geet cramps. Haayeee so much care is needed at this time for sure. And geet passion😉. Finally they are together of 4 days separation.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous update. Love their relation and how they understand each other so well. Geet can't see him vulnerable and he can't see her sad. Beautiful relation.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow baby so cute and beautiful update 👏 ❤️
With each update of ur's i keep falling in love with ur writing and the way u project every minute detail with perfection 😉
Such an heartwarming update i am overwhelmed after reading it 😳
I am totally flat after seeing maan's care for geet.
This is the very quality which takes my heart away 😳
He was so concerned for her at the same time very vulnerable
And our cute doll being so soft at heart couldn't take it and poured everything to him
Loved this possessive and demanding geet which is very rare in this story 😉
So it was their anniversary and they once again made promises and confessed their heart 😃
I always love their childhood part lets see why all of a sudden he asked her to avoid dev.
Love u baby 🤗

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