Mortal Promises!#T2!UPDATED CH35@pg141*Now[Note at page 148]28 oct

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#621

Originally posted by: dazzlingnikki
Thanku for the update lpti..🤗
Well finally yeh sam tho pagal ho chuki hain.. itna bada misconception ..not even trying to clarify always blaming maan and accusing him ..that he was close to her.. maan toh apne mishty se itna beintehaan pyaar karthe hain ki.. albeit the other females who try to push themselves on him..he feels others touch as disgusting i mean those girls..
Hope sam hosh mein jaldi aajaye.. uski misconceptions clear hojaye. Aur maan and geet ke life mein problem create na ho
Hehe what is that maan frgt ..
Well eagerly waiting for next

Thanks a lot nikki. Wow... Such a beautiful comment baby.
Loved it.🤗
Hahaha Sam has lost it aisa laag raha hain na sabko??
Abhi toh aur jhatke aane baki hain... 😆

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
4 more likes needed...still waiting 4 ur unres on chap 30 on page 70

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
thanks 4 da pm! sorry 4 late likes n comments! intense update! superbly written! Geet starts talking abt NT and Dev! she is getting to why she is helping Dev bt Maan annoyed n stops her! Maan was rude! he reveals he was there! Maan taunts her! Maaneet argue! Maan reveals his insecurities and fears! Geet hits back stating how she feels seeing him with Sameera! seems like both are insecure and possessive! Maan mentions abt Dev n Geet's history! hmm now I am curious! Did Sam's dad have 2 call then?😡he interrupts Maaneet! Geet leaves n Maan irritated! Maan upset as well! thank God it was his dream! Geet sad! she left 2 gave space 2 Maan! bt was this right? Dadi notices something is wrong with Maan! She brushes it off! ahh dadi shld have spoken 2 Maan! perhpas she cld have advised Maan! Pari and Meera manage 2 distract her! Geet misses Maan so much! loved how u described her feelings! Maan left left 2 London without telling her! why did he do that? she gets his text! Oh no Maan off 2 Australia to Sameera's house! what will happen now?? what will this trip 2 Australia bring? hope no more problems! why are Maaneet not telling anyone they love each other?? Maaneet need 2 talk abt this properly! update soon👏⭐️😊

Hi sweety, 😳

History...Aha- So you have indeed the eyes of an eagle and glad that it attracted you. The history is a very mere trivial incident however to the very possessive Maan it's kinda unbearable as he loves his doll a little too much!

Geet- Geet was a lil immature to leave Maan alone like that she should have talked it ouit but she didn't. hence now she is in pain as well.

Her feelings- Aww thanks dearie for liking my narration

Why are Maaneet not telling - Because they thought it's not necessary, by everyone you meant dev annie vicky sam i guess but Maaneet were in a long break of five years if you have forgot. Now they were just enjoying their relations and they were seeking permissions from the elders... Moreover it was Maan's plan which made Geet study here hence he doesn't want some sort of teasing forwarded towards Geet right now as they live under the same house. He has an intention to directly marrying her. That's why he told savitri right away when Geet got sick. However it's also a part of my plot as in why their relation is still not revealed. Plus to add more on that- Maan and Geet have been extremely good friends from two liberal families hence they never needed some sort of validation until that hot water incident. Other than that Maan has always been implementing his rights on Geet. Like ye maat karo, waha maat jao.. Isse maat bat karo. Vice versa with Geet. So everyone is used to their tom and jerry-ish cute bonding. i hope this explains it. Phew! 🤣

Thanks a lot for your fantastic comment! Sorry for late!

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#623

thanks for reply 2 comments! much appreciative! 🤗can we get an update soon?

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#624

2 more likes needed for an update!!

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#625

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
2 more likes needed for an update!!

damn... I am thinking to update PD 🤣

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
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Khushibloom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#627

OMG! So this was the reason why maan is so stressed during australia trip and even after coming from there 😲
Bechari humari cutie pie doll she is feeling so sad and angry.
I wonder how would she react after knowing about what sam is upto
And i think maan don't wanna stress his wifey with all this mess but he has to do it.
Can't believe sam has started seducing maan with her cheap antics.
But he is a man of true value he won't fell for her trap.
Loved how well u potrayed maan's feelings ipti 👏
He so politely tried to make sam understand but she is out of her mind.
Aww how caring dadi is yaar she loves geet so much.
Ab maan ko kya ho gaya aur wo kya bhool gaya jo aise bhaga 😆

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Khushibloom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#628

Sorry for being late and would soon comment on all ur other stories 😳

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Khushibloom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#629

Aur ha precap bohot hi cute hai can't wait for the next part 😉
Continue soon dear

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#630

Originally posted by: Iptida

hi sweety hope you are well,😳

Sam- Basicallt=y she wants Maan to spill the beans of Geet so that she can provoke him against Geet but Maan didn't confess about geet that is the reason why she kept pestering with the same question over and over again!

The important issue- You are quite close, except it's not their marriage anniversary.

I can't thank you enough for showering me with you strong support and beautiful comments!
As always I freaking have loved your awesome feedback, Thanks!!!🤗

Iam fine dear . Hope ur fine as well.

Thank you !!

Sam- If Maaneet didn't come clean about Dev and Sameera's fiasco then their might be chances that Sam might create havoc in Maaneet's life vowing to her unrequited love and her presumed thoughts. Sam is definitely playing safe game over here without spilling truth of her knowing about Maaneet relationship. Hope before she create s scene Maaneet would take required steps .

So, is it Geet's parents wedding anniversary r his parents!!?

Looking forward to the update to know what special occasion did he forget !?

😊

Thanks for you reply dear !!😃

Edited by anu5 - 7 years ago