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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#121

nice ud

geet need to shifft bz of pinky snd hr bf she got that sickness

maan daadi encounter and geet maan on road

was gud

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#122

Hi
I like this Romeo Casanova Maan, he really is very witty and smart...dadima's reaction at his affairs is funny she is not able to digest the fact of maans one night stands...loved her words "back in the day we were not stray dogs... we waited for that one person...that was cute...and his great encounter with Geet on the road was funny... her cursing him and showing her finger was such a shock for him although it was nice when he told her that he would rather hear her swearing and cursing instead of the timid village girl...although do not know Geet's pregnancy story and background
Looking forward to more updates...
Thnx

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#123

What a twist yaar! Geet is expecting? What happened? He saved her back then...And then? Was she forcefully married by her family? If yes then what happened to that marriage? So she conceived out of that forceful marriage? Was she cheated in that marriage? Is that why she was running away wounded? Hunted after by her Veerji that time? What was her family trying to do? And he saved her again & filed a police report...Super anxious for the story to unfold...And for Maan to understand Geet for herself and what she has undergone & is going through all alone...

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#124

nice partt is geet pragent the morning sickness
ow loved dai called maan one night stands her spoilt grandson
i love geet point her finger on maan she is so funny 😊

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#125

I'M JUST LOVING THIS ONE was laughing literary ...

Oh oh geet is pregnant 😲

I didn't thought this will happen...

Maans family is interesting and he's into one night stand type 🤔😔 But His Dadima is funny I have liked her a lot 😎

Feeling bad for geet Maan is full of attitude but geet flipping her middle finger 🤣 ohh Allah it was like hilarious Ryan is cute... Geets behavior was unexpected did not think her this way and her reasons which she thought for saying it to Maan was really Funny...

what this Man is asking her directly if she's on period or not 🤣

I just love how they both are with each other love their each encounter... you write it very well waiting for next eagerly...

Edited by MariumChoudhary - 7 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#126

thanks...shall b waiting 😃

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#127

Oh Geet is pregnant. That's why she had to leave India and come here. Does her parents know. I would like to read how she is in this situation.

Dadi doesn't approve of Maan's or youngsters lifestyle. They are always not on the same page about things.

Geet little misadventure on road was funny. She is sure a feisty girl and not shy types as I thought in the beginning.

At the end I think she will end sharing an apartment. Maan and Geet both have attitude. Their conversation will never be straight, always twisted.

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maneetarsh

@maneetarsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#128

Lovely story, read all parts together and simply fell in love with your version of GHSP. I really liked the Casonova MSK and confident geet. Geet is pregnant and she is looking to Stay on her on. But I feel something would happen that geet will end up staying with maan. Eager to read more.