With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141 - Page 82

Originally posted by: crazymaneetian

omg i am falling in love with this ff and your writing...so vivid that I could visualise the scenes...geet pointing at the phone was hilarious...white anarkali...hmm... i am already singing maahi...Gabbar na bano!!! was epic...sol lovely...eagerly waiting to read more and also let the mystery reveal

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thanks for noticing

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Hello madam ji😃

Finally blog open hogya and I read the update.. and it's Mind blowing as always❤️

Raj and Kiran, are example of perfect parents.. the way they support him and love him Is Incredibly Beautiful❤️

Maan asked geet out for Dinner plus Proposal.. so finally he's going to put his heart out infront of her

I don't know why but I'm getting not so good vibes by this arrangement.. Mana kardegi kiaanyway hope for the best..

On the other sides... Chandan and dev are now going to hunt down the culprit.. And Rasika is going to fall back on her face.. Ye Raj aur Maan ko halka le rahi hai.. medaan me aa beta.. hosh thikane ajayengy😆😡

Precap is LOVE❤️

Waiting for next update😉

Rasika is evil and one should not assume she will go away quietly 😆
but as you say Baap beta takkar ke hai and my sherni is no less 👍🏼

Originally posted by: mayyo

How I love the Raj Kiran duo and their ways of spying on and teasing their son! It is this joyfulness that keeps their family happy...

Maan and Geet's story, the way it is progressing feels so sweet and cute. Those feelings of first love, of love found and so close to being owned, the feelings are so well portrayed that it's a pleasure to read. And I figured out you love that white dress waali date. (Who doesn't!) But really, I have that date in my demand list for WH and it was put forward by you!

I'm not going to say anything about Dev Chandan and their enemies or Rasika. I want to wait and see how it all unfolds. I must add that I missed reading Points and Tara, as well as Dev Sona (surprisingly!)

Thanks so much for updating! Hope you feel better now. Also, belated happy Diwali!

Its Teji Sona here 😆 since Dev was taken by Tara
Yeah I am on Maaneet now
Its hard to think beyond the date at this point.
I am still not up to par yet.
Feeling very low as it is my Dads almost one year anniversary of his passing soon 😭
Diwali was pure torture without both of them now
I guess with not feeling well it is aggravating my feelings
Thanks for reading.
update de do na.
I need something to feel good

Sorry for late reply dear...
Superbbb update...
Maaneet moments r Beautiful like always...
someone behind Chandan ...Thank god Cat nay milk pee liya...
both brother r now looking who's that person...
Hope Rasika plan flop before began...
Looking forward for next part...

TEASER


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Slowly Geet made her way to the shore where a table had been set up.

From far she could see the red roses and heart shaped balloons and a huge chocolate heart shaped cake on a table.


"YE sab kya hai?" she said, surprised when a hand held hers from the back.

Her words dried on her lips as she saw who it was.

In all the moods and chameleon ways of his, he was totally different today.

Dressed in all white with half the buttons of his shirt open, he was like a person who had won the world.

Along with a glint of mischief, there was an ocean of love in his eyes.

She blinked and closed her mouth as he tugged her a microsecond at a time to him.

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"hello biwi .. ", he whispers over my hand as he presses a small kiss on it.

I want to hide my face in my hands.

Ye sab kya ho raha hai?

Kissing?

My cheeks I am sure are a flaming red already.

I pretend to be annoyed.

"Main biwi nahi hu", I say, scolding him with my finger pointed to his face, " .. aur saaf saaf batao, ye sab kya hai. And no "wo" anymore, understood".

I point to my fingers which he kissed.

He smirks at my threats, "wo?"

I blush even more making his small smirk magnify and a deep rumble of laughter come from his chest as he says "Wo" again.

I have had enough.

I take my fists and hit his chest with it.

My poor hands are bruised but the big lug is still laughing.

Suddenly he grabs both my fists and kisses them.

His stubble grazes my skin making a tingle go through me.

He lifts up his head after running his lips over my fingers several times.

I am squirming inside and dying too I think as my heartbeats go mad.

My legs are like jelly.

Maybe I will collapse if he keeps it up.

Enigmatically he raises his eyes to mine, " .. I am hoping there is a lot of "wo" before the night is over biwi".

Awww!

I stomp my foot angrily.

What is going on with me?

Why am I being like this now?

Maan is a friend, right? Only a friend, right?


A/N:
Please finish commenting quickly so I can update.

Thank you.

Lovely teaser. So can we hope for update as long as night last with "wo". Hahaha

Teasing teaser

Originally posted by: dqno1

Its Teji Sona here 😆 since Dev was taken by Tara
Yeah I am on Maaneet now
Its hard to think beyond the date at this point.
I am still not up to par yet.
Feeling very low as it is my Dads almost one year anniversary of his passing soon 😭
Diwali was pure torture without both of them now
I guess with not feeling well it is aggravating my feelings
Thanks for reading.
update de do na.
I need something to feel good

Can't wait for update.. kitna wo aanevala hai?

Loved the teaser, waiting for update after this.