Maneet FF JOURNEY CALLED LIFE Tr 2 - NOTE ADDED PG 63

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T.Peru

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Now waiting for next update

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Eagerly waiting for next chapter😆

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IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Thanks for pm...
I had to revise previous chapters...
For to b on track...
Sry

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Srivalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Awesome update.

Loved it.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for d pm:)

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Jasmine

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

geet shouting at tasha as sasha was interesting. maan holding feet and blowing at her eyes was romantic. Dadi mu maan komal.funny.later seeing reality with wet eyes was lovely.maan komal scene was nice.oh tasha sashA locked geet in the room.luckily maan saved her.maan taking care of geet and carrying her in his arms was romantic. nice pics

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Jasmine

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

thank God.nt is only maan's cousin and not after him.shocking that nt was dev's best friend who fell for him later and got rejected by him.dev hoped her to return understanding that he can only be her best friend.but sad that before that dev died.dev sharing it with geet was nice.hope geet finds out soon that this nt is the same nt. thank God that unlike other ffs where nt is a vamp here she didn't turn evil but understood dev's words and wants to apologise to him.she feels that something wrong happened to dev.that's sad.how will she react knowing his death? nt sharing everything with maan was emotional. sad that her condition became pathetic when dev rejected her.neha's death scene and maan's trauma was painful.also dev's death.

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hira2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Reading three parts then comment

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arshifan04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Waiting for next update ...Update soon

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ETRIKA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

WOW What an update dear..loved it

Well what surprises are in stored for us...

Nayantara is maan cousin(thank god).

Geet thinking of the past where dev tells her about NT..that part was good

But maan thinking of the past when he heard dev name is so painful..geet standing in red saree and calling for dev is very painful..

Its just that maan and geet are destined to be one all this is happening

Maan meeting komal and started sharing a spl bond..dadi and vicky liking geet for maan...maan and geet concern for each other thru letters...and now NT

hoping that NT will be helping in getting them together..

Bas ek request hai ab yh jitni bhi cheeze ek dusre se linked unhe kholna shuru karo...like maan ko nhi pata that geet is komal's mother and geet doesn't know that its maaan jisse komal papa kehti hai...

Waiting for next to come

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chiki143

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Totally loved it. Dev had been a tremendous influence on Geet. I think he has shaped her up for the way she is now. Totally loved the way you explained a small thing as hug and how it should not always be mistaken . A very mature view .

And now to the story loved nt and Dev friendship. It's always fun to read Maan and his inner feelings. I could actually imagine how he was trying to find what Geet was thinking about the hug.

And I didn't expect maaneet had such a sad flashback.

At the end Maan'ss favourite dialogue" yeh ladki mujhe sach me pagal kar degi" is the highlight for me...