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Posted: 7 years ago

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Chapters 10-15:

Chapter 10 - > So finally both are getting on with eachother face to face and expressing their inner turmoil...Atlast hope she kicked some sense into Maan and vice versa. These 2 complement eachother and are made for eachother. Perfect words to express their love and emotions added by the touch of weather...u r Amazing

Chapter 11> So Maan's Mom and Daadi are already in the plans for the getting htem together...Daadi please use ur tricks faster and get them as one cant wait for those but first more maneet journey though.

Please don't bring Dev and Sam create rifts between them so early...make some other plans for them please.

Awesome romance between the both and our lowley innocent geet could get so bold WOW

Chapter 12> So Maan again saving Geet from falling...Hope he had saved her from those gundas too instead of Dev...

So finally Geet remembered the Adi call...But sure Adi would have got for this, poor punching bag.

So cute moments of them...Maan can be this cute and sweet only with his mishit...

The precap is scary...Hope this time Maan comes to her rescue.

Chapter13> So as my thoughts, Maan saved her and I wished Sam saw and heard all between them. But well the story needs twists and turns and here is one to add to the list. Maan cannot see his mishit in danger and sadness. We can get glimpses of his possessive self. Again the precap is giving me good clues for another happy session of maneet moments

Chapter14> Tom and jerry session again though to make the scene light and no to focus on them together, but was well written...We njoyed Maan getting stuck to talk and that too in front of the family...Geet is Geet, afterall who has the power to do this and none but her and only her.

Such a concerned Maan and the terrace scene was too good. So whom is Geet advising and to make whom jealous...

Chapter 15> Maan losing control everytime his innocent doll is around him. His love for her is madly insane or no words to express. Her is his only purpose and priority in life and perfectly written here.

Love all their moments. So Maan can talk so romantic also? I thought and felt only his actions could get cute and sweet with little sweet talks, but yahan to janab Geet pe latto ho gayae and become such a cutie pie. Really love this Maan...Hope you write a FF where there are no dark characters and Maan is really this sweet in nature with lots of such romance between them.

Naintara again...So are u planning a big battalion of Sam, Naintara, Dev and all dark shades in this story to get on my Maneet...No pls...pinky pls

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Thanks for the pw. Will be commenting now.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Chapter 10 to 13

Adorable updates. This is your first story but still you managed to write the perfect emotions. Geet was trying her best to manofy her rutha piya and maan demanding kiss from her was the master stroke. But geet finally decided to abandon all her shyness and do that one thing. She submitted to him. There is so much love between them. And pure love. He loves her so much and she is now nowhere less. thank god the misunderstanding between them has been solved. I was really worried for that seeing how maan reacted last.

Their romantic passionate moments are so much soothing and beautifully described. Totally heart melting. The love between them is blooming and getting profound. The best part is even maan's family planning to get them married. Awesome. Ooo madhu has knocked to geet's door. Lol I loved Geet's panic state and her dialogues are truly fab. Also loved how both dressed each other. Here is the acceptance came.

Geet is so much distracted with their morning passion that she slips but maan being the true beloved saves her. He is so much caring towards geet and treats her like a gentleman. But he gets angry and scolds her infront of everyone. Both enjoying their beautiful moment in the car. Maan is not leaving geet in the car too. So maan hates rain yet he is willing to change for geet. Amazing bonding.

Oh no that creep is back again. Maan is so much anxious about geet. Sameera is seeing everything but still she is being dense. Sameera please samjo maan tumse pyaar nahi karta. Dekho how he hugged her. He is so much protective of geet. This is not only because of friendship. Lekin sameera is living in some other world of misunderstanding. It's all because of that drunk moment of maan. Looks like this is going to create a huge twist and misunderstanding in the story. Is this why the name is mortal promises? I love the name.

Again maan her savior saved geet. She was so scared and maan pecked her lips. So much wished to sam see that. In the car too maan hugged geet in his arms phir bhi ye sameera ko lag raha hai maan bas fikarmand hai geet ke liye. Finally they have reached km and both sameera maan thinking it's all their fault. Liked how geet calmed them down. Also liked when sameera hugged geet in the car. I feel she is not a bad person but just a prey of misunderstanding. Afterall love is blind.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Chapter 14 - 15

Wow amazing. Maan is in volcanic mood. He even didn't spare his dadi. But how nicely geet turned the whole issue in a comedic situation and calmed maan down. She holds so much power over him. He just can't deny her. The more i am reading more i am loving their bond. Maan is tensed and geet as a good partner trying her best to sooth him. He has apointed bodygaurds for her. Ha ha. Geets reactions are really epic. Loved how she said gine chune two dost. Maaneet romance is always a treat. Maan is so much caring. If geet even fliches for a second he tenses up and checks. Outstanding moments under the moon. Both are truly lucky to get each other. So lovely

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Dev's relation with NT is not going well. Maan on the other side has turned full romeo and their phone conversation was so cute and funny.

Dev is worried about Nt and shares to geet who is giving her own piece of advice. I hope this is not some reason for maaneet relationship to have misunderstanding. Not having a nice feeling about it. Specially nt. She is giving negative vibes.

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Chapter 16

Beautiful update. Maan and geet are made for each other. I am praying nothing goes wrong. Maan gifted a necklace to geet. His note was so adorable. I just lovvve this maan. He is sensible caring and everything a girl needs in life. Geet is also full of life. A great balance. There moments are mesmerizing.

Excellent writing

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Chapter 17

Another outstanding update. The title confusion is appropriate. So much happened in this. Sameera is really a dumb or what? She is getting on my patience. I feel to shake her and tell ki akhe kholo aur dekho ke maan srif geet se pyar karta hai. Loved our tom and jerry. That scene where maan is snatching bowl from geet ha ha ha ha that is so funny and reminded me of geet episode where they were in outhouse and fighting over something. Truly tom & jerry. But everything got changed because sameera saw this awful thing omgg. Now what will happen? She will tell maan for sure. Omg no please.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1218

So mp turns 1 year hm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Chapter 18

Fabulous. Geet is so innocent. All she wants to do is help dev. But she doesn't know that stupid sameera is also seeing all. Now she will surely use it against geet. She is thinking so wrong about geet. Maan is really an awesome hubby. How cutely he ordered icecream for her. That pigalne wala dialogues are so cute. Loved how they don't even leave a chance to romance. Ir just melted my heart with the little maanet. That is too much adorable. I wanted to see more childhood connection. And here got it. This is serene. The relationship and love maaneet shares here is undivided. Maan used to papmer his billi so much. The nicknames are so nice. Please include more childhood scenes. Really enjoyed reading this.

Oustandingly written. Precise.