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Posted: 8 years ago
TEASER


She was trembling badly.

Some encounters leave behind a deep imprint on the psyche and for all her bravado, Geet had not been able to forget the one with Vikram.

She tried to hold her fears back, tried to be brave but she felt fear enfold her, dark and bitter and earth shattering.

Maan was fighting the goons singlehandedly and she could do nothing but tremble in place.

Suddenly the knife glinted dangerously in the hands of one of them and he was ready to plunge it in Maan's back.

A shriek came forth from her, loud and shrill, "Maan".

Her feet flew in the direction of the assailant and with all her might she shoved the man to one side.

He was tall and heavy and angry to boot.

Shifting the knife to one hand, he used the other to hit her hard across her head making her tumble to the ground, landing on a large rock on the ground.

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A father usually knows his son best.

Raj watched Maan come in and sit beside him.

Kuch toh chuppa raha hai, he knew.

It was time to test the waters.

"Maan, beta, ek baat puchu tumse", he asked and continued when Maan nodded.

"Ye jo Geet hai", he said slowly and watched the sudden alertness in his son's body.

Maan was leaning forward with a slightly expectant face eager to hear what he had to say.

He purposely kept quiet until Maan prompted, "Dad, kuch keh rahe thay Geet ke baaremein".

Raj smiled as he looked away, " .. haan beta. You know I am her guardian now, right".

Maan kept on watching him expectantly, nodding, wondering what this was about.

"Ye Dr. Teji shayad usse pasand karta hai. Ladka toh hummein boht pasand hai, I mean handsome hai, well settled hai, nature bhi accha hai ..", Raj baited, glad to see the frown that Maan could not hide.

"Wo main aur tumhari Mom soch rahe thay, kya uske saath Geet ke rishtey ki baat chalaye? Tum Geet se kyu nahi puchte ki usse Dr. Teji pasand hai ya nahi"




A/N: So the wounded knight saves the warrior princess and Dad bete ko majboor kar rahe hai.

Har taraf se phas gaya hai, ya kuch aur likhegi aap ki devil writer?

Aaage kya hoga?

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Posted: 8 years ago
He is still living in the past which is dark that is why he is not able to open up
But he will be doing as her friendship with doc increases

Nice update waiting for more
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Posted: 8 years ago
Teaser
Maanna padega
Hamari devil writer ke dimagi ghode jyada hi tej daudate hai
Bechara maan
Kaise baya kare haaale dil
Chain se hamko kabhi aapne jeene na diyaaa
Waiting eagerly
Edited by maansi25 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aap ne kaha the teaser parhne ke baad I will kill you.. lekin teaser you ekdum mast tha 😉😆
Raj is doing a fabulous job lol .. I will surely love the roasting 😆😳
Wounded knight or Wounded damsel in distress 😲
Waiting eagerly for next chapter.. pretty please update soon 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sun Sun Sun Geet tere liye ek rishta aaya he...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi
Heart is atill fluttering... i feel i will be gone as when there will be more maan n geet lovey dovey... the geet realsatun through nature was beautiful... maan is so considerate... i really hated him in the beginning but now i am completely in love with him...
Dev is like pendulum fluctuation between tara n his brother... tara is right on her place... poor guy...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice teaser. Waiting for update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Sun Sun Sun Geet tere liye ek rishta aaya he...


😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maansi25

Teaser
Maanna padega
Hamari devil writer ke dimagi ghode jyada hi tej daudate hai
Bechara maan
Kaise baya kare haaale dil
Chain se hamko kabhi aapne jeene na diyaaa
Waiting eagerly


one of my fav songs 😆
roothne mein ekdum mast kaam aata hai 😆

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