With This Taveez (4) ch 29, p 134

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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#621

Ch 26
Pyara update
Maan ki jaan
Maan ka maan sammaan
Sab kuchh sirf Geet hi Geet
Beautifully narrated part
Both are missing each other
Though maan knows his haaale dil
Par geet is still not realising her haale dil
But husband and wife on paper
Behaving like husband and wife of saat fere
Hairan pareshaan
Tarasana tadapana
Aur
Ek dusre pe gussaa
Jaane anjaane maan ke mann ki baaat hothon pe aa hi gayee
Aur laal tamatar to gulaabjamun ho gayi
gussa to jaise pal me hawa ho gaya
Aur
Patni ban fatafat pati ko kaam pe bhej diya
Worried about chandan and Poonam
Who is the conspirator
Nice precap
Waiting for the special treatment of maan for geet
Ps
This part is showing their bonding and feeling very brilliantly
Dil ko chhoo gaya
Can feel their love
Visualise them as though we are just sitting in front of them and witnessing the whole scenario
Sooo lovely
Eagerly waiting for the next part please update soon
Daily I open my mail if you have updated or not
The ones that we read regularly

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: dqno1

cctv? 😆
aisse kaisse?
Avi kya likhegi phir 😲

Phir avi cctv ka description likhegi.😉😆😆

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893213

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Posted: 8 years ago

#623

Originally posted by: maansi25
Ch 26
Pyara update
Maan ki jaan
Maan ka maan sammaan
Sab kuchh sirf Geet hi Geet
Beautifully narrated part
Both are missing each other
Though maan knows his haaale dil
Par geet is still not realising her haale dil
But husband and wife on paper
Behaving like husband and wife of saat fere
Hairan pareshaan
Tarasana tadapana
Aur
Ek dusre pe gussaa
Jaane anjaane maan ke mann ki baaat hothon pe aa hi gayee
Aur laal tamatar to gulaabjamun ho gayi
gussa to jaise pal me hawa ho gaya
Aur
Patni ban fatafat pati ko kaam pe bhej diya
Worried about chandan and Poonam
Who is the conspirator
Nice precap
Waiting for the special treatment of maan for geet
Ps
This part is showing their bonding and feeling very brilliantly
Dil ko chhoo gaya
Can feel their love
Visualise them as though we are just sitting in front of them and witnessing the whole scenario
Sooo lovely
Eagerly waiting for the next part please update soon
Daily I open my mail if you have updated or not
The ones that we read regularly

aww! thanks

but with work 6 days a week and non stop summer guests, it is not quite possible to write more

glad that you are all liking it.

😃

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893213

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Posted: 8 years ago

#624

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Phir avi cctv ka description likhegi.😉😆😆

😆

ye kaun padhega?

hummein toh masti karne ki aadat hai😃

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#625

Nice update.

First maaneet fight and now sorted out by themselves.

Who is behind poonam is still mystery.

Precap is interesting.

Thanks for pm

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: dqno1

sleepless apple 😆
i am good awesome mindblowing etc etc 😆
WW i am not 😲
how is it with u?
getting caught up?

ofcourse only naturally lol, have you ever met a sleeping apple. I myself put snow white to sleep, remember!😆
WW you sure are, i haven't watched it yet though i've been making plans ever since it came out lol
caught up in whirlwind on marriage, we have like 20 wedding invites

I'VE GRADUATED😃 in the mist of life problems

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893213

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Posted: 8 years ago

#627

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

ofcourse only naturally lol, have you ever met a sleeping apple. I myself put snow white to sleep, remember!😆
WW you sure are, i haven't watched it yet though i've been making plans ever since it came out lol
caught up in whirlwind on marriage, we have like 20 wedding invites

I'VE GRADUATED😃 in the mist of life problems

Congrats!!!
That's awesome!
Sleepy apple?
Lets see 😃
i live in NY, the big apple but i have yet to see it sleepy 😆
I am not much of a movie watcher 😕
i usually fall asleep in the theater 😆

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#628

Thank you sooo much for the PM! ❤️

I didn't realise I was missing out on such a mind blowing chapter! But at least I read it and got down to comment on it before the teaser was posted. 😆

I especially liked the song you used and I searched for a reference, which you usually post at the end of the chapter but there is none today. Not that I'm complaining because there's a good precap which isn't usually there. 😃

So Maan and Geet figured things out finally. I'm surprised by the patience Maan showed when Geet was all out with anger. Maybe love did that to him, to listen out whatever she feels before cutting in with his own reactions. And this is something a little different from most of the Maans in the stories. I love him any way. 😳

Back to the topic. It's good they sorted it out. I was missing the jolly mood of the story. I want Geet to realise it herself that Maan has feelings for her. Her opinion of him will change faster if this happens instead of Maan spelling it out to her and her being biased or prejudiced or something.

As for Chandan, I feel sad for him. Someone close to him is responsible. We don't know his family so we can't make any guesses yet. But I don't understand why Tara would be angry at Chandan for not wanting to reveal Poonam's recovery.

Amazing update. Thank you so much! Eager more than ever, to know what happens next.

Edited by mayyo - 8 years ago