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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#801

It sayss na words hurt more den actions

And the same has happend with maan..

Geet ka those words.. have hurt maan badly.

He only wanted geet to grow wings nd fly..bt in all.this he never thought ..she could fly so high..dat it can at one point become impossible.for him.to.catch hold of her

Nd her flying high has made him.realize his insecurities..what if she left him...nd dat made him.to behave badly or say wit such possessiveness..nd authority..

Nd geet showed him.d mirror

Dat he is not important as she is to him

Poor maan..

Nd geet..she is not knowing wat she is doin..

Common yaar..see the brighter side

.now lookin at Raj ..she is knowing.she doesn't harbour dat same feeling..

Bt den she is missing dat embrace nd poor soul doesn't even know wat dose feelings are..

She has all the rights wen it comes to.maan.

Nd it was always like that..

Usey laga hoga maan hai..yeh..how can he be rude to her friends..

Nd keh diya

In the spur of moments.. unknown abt maan ka feeling..

Nd now wen maan is avoiding her calls she is feeling bad yet not knowing y tho...

Lovly updt..

Very well explained both realizations nd feeling nd insecurities..

Wanna see if maan pics the call nd talk to his little tornado who is all.disturbed..

Waise he is also out..hope dey meet soon..nd sort der mu..

I jus love d pace of this story.. der silence..

Care..love..emotions.. authority..every thing..

Cont soon Ashuu.

Nd he congrats for new job..nd responsibilitiess..

Waise wats ur field..i.mean..graphics..engineering..?? Whch one..

Sorry hadn't commented earlier

But...had read it...nd had loved every updtatesss..

Waitinh for next

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tammana

@tammana.m

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#802

Fabulous n emotional one again..
Man ignoring Geet
N Geet to understand she did wrong
She came to meet puja uncle who ask her to go to see a boy
She only want maan his sothing voice
Waiting for nxt

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hermosoanu123

@hermosoanu123

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#803

Fantabulous update aishu ..
How tym changes ,how relationship takes different turns ..kal tak Jo sabse important the shayad samay ke raftaar Mein kho Gaye...Maan is standing in that point only...and watching flying Geet ..its his undying care for her which is quite natural him to outburst ...nd geet's irrational behaviour is expected nd quite natural as of young blood flying soaring in greater heights

Irony ,she realised much later nd now circumstances brought her to next junction where she has to take descion for herself again .on pressure of Loved ones...nd kahi na kahi Maan is needed for her ...soulfully she is dependent on maan ...

I loved the scene where u explained snowfall aishu that was so beautifully written I could imagine how it might b falling ..jaisa jaise ek ek katra barf dheere barf Ki parath jamti hai waise hi dheere dard itna gehrata jaa raha hai ...uski garmahat shayad dono ko shool Ki tarah choobhe ...the warmness of snow will toake tym to seep in for both

Itna aasan kahan ishq Ki manzil ,
Har mazhar ko paar kar jaana ,
Khoon ke aasun bhi nikalthe hai ,
Dard ka dariya bhi behtha hai ,
Bas pyaar Ki dor ko pakad kar
Chalna hai ,uske saath thoda vishwaas karna hai ...waqt lagega par nazar aayegi manzil ..
Hum us chor kadhe rahenge ,aur us aur tum , bas waqt Ki taqallat ,tum meri baahon Mein hogi aur Mein tumhare bahoon Mein

Ishq ki manzil ko paana itna aasan kaha