MAAN GEET SS MY TWISTED FATE COMPLETED - Page 11

Originally posted by: tammana.m

God Geet father 😡
How can he act like this..
Waiting for nxt 😊

Originally posted by: sanum23

geet father is so cruel he have no feelings fr hr daughter she's just deal fr him ig he hsve profit than he ok with alliance

he put condition to marry geet

Originally posted by: CRAZYCUTEE

superb update

Originally posted by: anu5

Congrats for new story didu

Interesting title :)

I know iam super duper late !! But can't help it. It's better to be late than never

@part1

Nice start didu

Loved it!!

Maan was reminiscing the day and the moment his life took over 360 of complete change .

Maan had to face the burn of life after his father's demise .

His father's demise made him face the reality of life and turned his life up side down within days time.

Vowing to his financial status his would be FIL to broke Maan's alliance with his daughter and the ladies of the house sell their jewelleries to meet their needs and to return their debts.

People show their true colors when bad times comes and tends to leave us in our thick times as well.

Adding up to his miseries, Maan turned out to be an event manager of his ex fiancee's wedding .

@part2

Nice update didu

Loved it !!

Maan was facing all the taunts and anger from Pari's family inspite of everything he was devoted towards his work . He came across Geet who was lively and aggressive . Their first meet was cute and maan being mischievous one spilled beans of geet's saree fiasco to the ladies. Maan had his time of fun seeing Geet scaring the poor guy in her feisty demeanor . Unlike Pari's dad Maan helped him in his thick times forgetting his insults . Which shows maan's selfless and true being . Geet introduced thyself to Maan but didn't say her surname .

Originally posted by: anu5

@part3

Nice update didu

Loved it!!

With time Maaneet fell for each other and Geet blended well with maan's family .

With things back to normal Maaneet wanted to take a step ahead in their relationship.

To maan's luck Mahi turned out to be geet's father and Mahi is a money grubbing person with unprincipled demeanor . Geet and her mother are shamefaced because of Mahi's frame of mind and as a person as well.

He made deal of geet in exchange to maan's company's share .No wonder why Geet didnt disclose her surname.

Well he gave choices for Maan to choose for getting Geet married to Maan .

Thanks for the pm

Will be waiting for the next update

:)

PART 4

SO IN A WEEK I HAD TO EITHER CONVINCE BRIJ R TO FIGHT HIM TO HAVE MY GEET WITH ME...

Why my life cant b pretictable for once...after taking my mom blessings ,lot of motivation from dev and meera I reached hoshiyarpur the place where mt fate willb decided...i felt soo cheap for a moment even agreeing to mahi ,playing with geet and my life but it was only way left to take my geet away from the hell..she was living in..how could it b to live with parents who doesn't even talk to themselves ..love was far fetched dream mayb for the family,..how much she might have endured seeing her parents...her mom who was always subjected to taunts..shaking my thoughts I stopped my car seeing a temple ..mayb I need god blessings too ,to win this so called deal,this mayb first tym I am entering in temple to ask something..until my father was alive I never ever asked anything ,even before I could ask my wish was fulfilled by my father,I smiled sadly how much my father protected our family until that cruel accident took him away leaving them shattered,after offering prayers ,i stopped as soon as i saw a group of people howering around ,there was nothing like this few minutes before when i entered confusingly I moved closer only to see a woman who was unconscious ,I waited few seconds to see anyone was with her..but all were talking in murmurs doing nothing leaving the lady.i gave a disgusting look to them and tried to wake her up,seeing nothing working I picked her up and placed in my car drizzling few drops of water atlast she came in conscious...

She blinked her eyes and slowly took in her surooundings before she panic and passed out again ,I introduced myself and explained briefly how I found her,she showed her gratitude for helping her,I offer her to drop at her place which she agreed reluctantly..on the way she inquired about me and I sim ply replied her that here I was to deal with a land which was occupied by someone,not much dwelling into the things about why and how well who too... ... hearing me she offered to take her husband help who deals with such things to help people...I was worried, with me they too can fell in trouble..i exactly don't know how much that guy , is capable of... but she shrugged my worries and took me with her.i too thought its better to take help of someone who knew this place and mayb he even knew about the man too and may help to deal with him.

i thought will first talk to that brij guy knowing mahi he may irked brij to his worst as he came with such weird option ,so it willb good once he have aclear talk with brij on why and how much he expects to release mahi land,and this woman pammi husband may even help him .still in my own thoughts we reached her house ,she went leaving me to seat in lavish living room get her husband,I had a good view now,from gate to house there were few guys guarding the house,even in living room 3-4 groups of 10 were waiting in different corner but were in deep discussion,it didn't took long to know that eshwar ... husband of pammi deals with not so good matters,but what made me confuse was why mahi didn't took eshwar help to tame brij..knowing mahi greed he may have fought tooth and nail to get his land..so why he didn't came to eshwar...was it he did come but eshwar was also helpless ..but seeing the men no one would say he was helpless,but if was!? Then how much this brij was stronger!?my thoughts were broken when somebody tapped my shoulder,I looked up to find a guy well new guy other than the group was looking at me..

the guy:aap koun!?

Maan:mein eshwar ji she milne aaya hoon..

Guy:par jiju toh..before he could answer a voice thundered in the wall making all the people chatting in groups stand straight.

YEH MUJHSE MILNE AAYE HAI ADI

Adi just nodded and step away while his jiju demanded for yash,soon a guy fearing came forward only to b slapped by eshwar

Esh:maine kaha tha yash pammi kah dyan rakna,kitni baar kaha uss she akele jaane math doh bahar..aaj who mandir mein behosh hokar gir gayi,who toh bhala ho iss admi kah..agar kuch hojatha toh...

Adi:kya!!?di.. di teek hai!!

Eshwar just nodded and the yash guy went after asking apolozise and promosing never to repeat the mistake again.the guys were again engaged leaving me,eshwar and adi.

Esh:pammi bol rahi thi,aap koh kuch madath chahiye..boliye mein kuch madath karsaktha hoon.

Maan:ji who,kisi neh meri...meri uncle kah land illegally occupy kiya hua hai..muje who land wapas chahiye.

Esh seems confused :kisne!!?

Maan:brij,,,, meri uncle bolrahe they who yeha khi don typs hai

Suddenly I felt all eyes on me ,on looking indeed all were looking at me strangly and adi was scared of something I concentrated on eshwar his expressions turned from soft to stren...he uttered gritting his teeth.

Eshwar:aap khi uncle kah naam

Maan:mahi..mohinder handa

Esh:uss koh maine acche she samjaya apni land koh bhooljaane koh par nahi uss she shayad apni jaan pyari nahi hai..issi liye tumhe phir yeha bheyja

Maan:ji..i was utterly confused if eshwar was unable to get the land ..so mahi tried him too,I was about to ask him who actually this brij was,when pammi came down smilingly,well just like that everything changed,the eyes watching me averted,brij turned soft and smiling and adi busied himself in news.i was more confused now...

Pammi:ji mein aap khey liye chai lehkar aathi hoon..

Even before she turned eshwar asked her to tell his full name if she met any strangers from on and smilingly well shyly what she uttered made my head spin.

Pammi:BRIJESHWAR SINGH

SO I LET MYSELF ENTERED LION DEN UNKNOWINGLY ALL THANKS TO MY CURSED LUCK