With This Taveez (3) .. MG New * ch 21 pg 138 * new thd link pg 1 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update. Maan is regretting his behaviour in the office. Dev tried to search Poonam but of no use. He could not find her. He decided to talk to Tara but was not sure if she will trust her. So emotional confession of love between Dev Tara. Geet heard their cpnfession and heart broken. She found solace in Maan's arms.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
chap 14 - marvellous update! superbly written! thanks 4 da pm! Geet's anger justified! she confronts Maan! he accuses her! he was wrong 2 do as! he shld at least have known her a little! Maan feels guilty! his turmoil well portrayed! glad he realised! wt happened in the past?? Geet gets 2 knw that Dev loves Tara! she is shattered n cries! she wants 2 be loved as well! Maan sees her crying n they hug! update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Nice update. Maan all lost lost. He is being so hard for bechara adi. Atlast geet comes to know about dev. Waiting for next updated.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
superb one loved the way geet stood up for herself n gave a reply to maan..ahh maan was feeling J n in all this gone a step ahead being a lil rude to her... poor geet felt soo bad for her she realised the truth of dev n naina's relation n feeling soo lonely n heartbroken while maan is planning ways to get back his control..
wondering where will all these lead to...
loved the update it was superb
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
TEASER


Reh gayi duniya mein naam ki khushiyaan
Tere mere kis kaam ki khushiyaan
Saari umar humko
Saari umar humko rehna hai yun udaas
Duur se dil ki bujhti rahe pyaas
Ankhiyon ko rehne de ankhiyon ke aas paas
Duur se dil ki bujhti rahe pyaas



Lost as she was in her misery, she did not hear Maan come in until he was right next to her.

He touched her shoulder and she noticed him.

She lowered her head and wiped away the tears but he had seen them.

Suddenly she found herself in his arms, her tears gushing forth like a river bursting its dam.


***

Her tears seared him.

She was crying all alone in his home.

He had done that to her.

The guilt overwhelmed all else.

He held her tightly to himself whispering sorry again and again.

***

For a split second she could not stop the dam from bursting.

Her tears flowed blinding her eyes.

When she heard his sorry she snapped out of the hug.

Why was he here again?

"Sorry? Why are you here Maan? To tell me you told me so? To tell me what you already knew? That I am unlovable. Chale jao Maan. Jao. I agree. Tum mahaan ho. Tum sab jaante ho. You are right and I am wrong. Ho gaya? Ab jao .. ", she said her voice firm but wobbly with the tears that would not stop though she swiped them away.

He stood a bit away because she had pushed him away again.

What was she talking about?

"Main toh bas tumhe sorry kehne aaya tha", he said in confusion, " .. tum ro kyu rahi ho Geet? Tum mat ro. Main bardasht nahi kar sakta"

Suddenly it fell into place.

She had found something out about Dev.

"Kya kiya Dev ne", he asked gripping her hands, " .. usne kuch kiya hai toh I will kill him Geet".

Her head came up in a flash, her eyes angry.

"Kyu? Kyu kuch karoge mere liye? Kyu? Aur mere aansoo tum kyu nahi dekh sakte? Main jiyu ya maru, tumhe kyu farq padta hai Maan".

The realization hit him like a lightning bolt.

"Kyun ki main tumse pyar karta hu".

He stood in shock at his realisation, the words drying on his mouth before he could utter them.

A/N: Zor ka jhatka zor se laga?

Since I left you a bit sad last time, I thought I will make it up.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
If I could, I would have fainted after reading the teaser!!
Comment for chapter is on its way.
Edited by mayyo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

phenomenal teaser 😲 update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
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Now that's called a teaser!!!!!
Nuked.
Kaboom!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
maan is jealous of.poor adi good good
poor geet heart broken to see dev tara love eachother n how they united maan confort her
nice uodate soon thnks for the pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Oh em gee what a teaser man.. 😉
Seriously Avi Mayyam is right I could faint right now 😆 😳

Update jaldi chahiye ab.. I hope it's not a dream or something else 😛

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