MG FF- Someone Like You THREAD #6 - Page 9

Hi, nice update but I think you hav started making your thoughts clear about separating Maan and Geet and this is the first step, her interviewing outside...yes it is very painful for both of them to think about separating physically, where they are almost all day together in his office or at his house...yes she may not be able to visit them too often once she starts her work elsewhere, but yes the gap is a must I guess, to bring the two together, to make them realize and yearn for each other, to be able to confess their feelings towards each other, especially Geet who knows he more than a friend but what beyond that...is she ready to again accept some one in her life and give him that special place in her heart, he knows his heart is already with Geet...him feeling angry thinking about her leaving him, he feeling irritated seeing someone else dancing with his Geet...and he feeing awed by her beauty, poise and maturity now...

At he end you asked, did we like it?


Words are enough to describe the feeling this time. On the 9th cloud reading your beautiful writing and description of the story. How do you do it?


You need to continue soon dude. Not aure if Maan will dance, but he will surely discover the source of the chimes/ sound that has been crossing his path today.

Please please continue soon

This theead was updated on 4th may...

May the 4th be with you!

Oh and congrats fornthe new thread.

Please don't end these 7 days very soon. Please please write a lot more happening during these precious days... the prologue will come someday but until then please let us live these days.

Yeah 7 din main 7 janam tak nahi bhoolna chahti Maan. Please make them bery special for Geet.

And Dance to banta hai... maybe not agressive but move submissive.

He is drunk too. Please use hat excuse for Maan to het close and Geet to ignore since she knows he is drunk so she won't take it seriously.

Waise, Marium ne Aishwarya ko kyon mara? 👎🏼

Originally posted by: indiegirl

Hi, nice update but I think you hav started making your thoughts clear about separating Maan and Geet and this is the first step, her interviewing outside...yes it is very painful for both of them to think about separating physically, where they are almost all day together in his office or at his house...yes she may not be able to visit them too often once she starts her work elsewhere, but yes the gap is a must I guess, to bring the two together, to make them realize and yearn for each other, to be able to confess their feelings towards each other, especially Geet who knows he more than a friend but what beyond that...is she ready to again accept some one in her life and give him that special place in her heart, he knows his heart is already with Geet...him feeling angry thinking about her leaving him, he feeling irritated seeing someone else dancing with his Geet...and he feeing awed by her beauty, poise and maturity now...

His care and affections have surfaced many times for her...it is her who needs to understand him now...

Thnx for the kind words on my comments...

Beautiful banner by Marium...

Though I've felt the same thing while reading but could not bring out things so beautifully like you ...Your comments are so beautifull and how well you caught the flow of one story that make you special that is why it get necessary to use kind words for you... Just like updates I always look forward for your comment in stories ...🤗

Stay always blessed girl writers toh hain hi reader bhi tumhare comment ke pagal 😆

Originally posted by: TaranaGeet

Waise, Marium ne Aishwarya ko kyon mara? 👎🏼

If Miss.Kawaii don't plan any dance for this two just after that I'm gonna kill her 🤣 but seems like she'll die happily in my hand but phir bhi will not plan dance sequence or kya kehti hain I'm not raising hope just asking Angel me ...kitna Sara jhoot Miss.Writer Jo hi kabhi angel na thi logo ko pareshan karna unka favourite kam but My Miss.Kawaii my sweet behna what should I say about her she's amazing 🤗 But I don't trust this writer kuch bhi kar sakti hain 😆

U already sowed the hopes dear...how easily u made us to follow up the story. I think u can write some best novel in the world too. I'm ready to publish