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Posted: 8 years ago
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Entertaining update. Geet got her dream job as the physiotherapist of Cricket team where Maan is the star player. Their encounter was funny and Geet calling him a frog was even hilarious. Maan seems to be a lonely person and it seems he lost his heart to Geet at the first instance of seeing her. Superb.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Teaser

Maan was having his lunch with d team bt all his attention was on Geet. How she made faces on having those bland n green healthy food, being forced by his team mates as her pizza haven't arrived! The way she smiled, increasing depth of her dimples even more. The way her pink lips moved n her tongue rolled over them. Gosh!! All he wanted to do was to take her with him n ravish those pink soft lips.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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terrific teaser! cannot wait 4 update😊 thanks 4 posting teaser! hope u r well
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's such a tease update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice geet read about him he is egoist person and about his gf
maan lost in hr beauty
read all pts
and now tsr maan intention was on hr
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 4

Maan turned bak n walked towards the figure standing in middle of hall. There stood Yashwant Khurana MSK's father in a formal suit with his hands in his pocket, a man in late 50's. Maan stood before him bt didn't looked in his eyes and kept looking at the floor.
Yash: Ur performance in last two matches has been consistently poor. Do u even have any idea how it effects on our company shares n reputation. Years before I have already told u to join business, bt nahi! U choose this stupid game as ur career. Not only u have proved urself as a worst son anyone can have bt also a worst business man. N now ur so called passion fr cricket has also started vanishing! U dnt have a reputation of ur own bt think about mine! Samje! Dnt forget I have raised u, spent a fortune on raising u up! Cant u even b greatful? I so wish, I would have put u in ur old grandma's care where u would have kept struggling fr ur basic needs, then mayb u would have respected me!
Saying that he turned bak n walked out of d mansion. Maan on d other hand clenched his fingers in a fist to avoid showing any emotion to anyone. Bt anyways the hall was empty fr masn as he haven't seen his dadima shedding tears behind d pillar.
Maan entered in his room n dashed into shower trying to calm his nerves. A hazy memory flashed in front of his eyes making him more restless. He punched d wall beside him to calm him anger. Later on, he went in his gym exhausting himself to sleep.

Next morning he woke up early, well he has hardly slept bcoz of his nightmares. As he was getting ready for practice, he remembered Geet n a smile touched his lips! He looked forward fr d day.
As he reached d stadium, few of his team mates were already practicing. He soon joined them looking fr geet. Later on when Geet arrived they didn't had any interaction. During d time everyone was having lunch, Geet was waiting fr her food. As per her habit, she woke up late n haven't got a lunch fr herself n now was waiting fr her pizza which she has ordered. Captain n few other players dragged her to join them, bt Geet actually couldn't make herself eat it. It was all healthy vegetables devoid of taste. N Geet Handa could compromise with anything bt nt her taste buds. She loved her food d most. Whereas, the team kept wondering how could a doctor eat these things.
Maan was having his lunch with d team bt all his attention was on Geet. How she made faces on having those bland n green healthy food, being forced by his team mates as her pizza haven't arrived! The way she smiled, increasing depth of her dimples even more. The way her pink lips moved n her tongue rolled over them. Gosh!! All he wanted to do was to take her with him n ravish those pink soft lips. Maan simply shook his head feeling himself behaving like a caveman. As if feeling his gaze, geet's eyes turned towards him n she gave him a smile making his heart flutter a bit. Maan quickly turned his gaze. Hence not noticing the red colour on her cheeks.

Later by evening, two players got into an argument regarding the comparison b/w their performance n influence of luck in it. None of them was ready to put down their guns n hence this called fr a match. The tiredness was completely overshadowed by need to prove other wrong. The rest of the players enjoyed. Whereas, Geet wasn't much fond of cricket n was bored n kept yawning. She walked towards captain whispering something in his ears which none noticed as everyone else was busy enjoying the show in front except Maan. He wandered what she said to captain. Seconds later captain b/w the two players n asked them to compete in Ludo. All were shocked at his suggestion.
Bt thn Geet got her tablet, n the game started. In the beginning, others found it utterly stupid bt as it went on, everyone was interested. As d first game finished, everyone joined in fr d nxt one. Later on everyone lost count of number of games they all played. Everyone played as if playing most important game of their of lives. They cheered on winning n cursed on loosing. Ludo was something that refreshed them at they moment.

Looking outside, they found it dark n then realised it was already night. As no one wanted to leave, the sat down fr d final match. Geet, Maan, Captain and one another player joined them. In b/w the games, maan n Geet would bicker at each other to distract the other one, n the fun continued. Finally the game concluded with captain as d winner and Geet as runner-up. N Maan lost d game.
Geet jumped in happiness hugging captain which didn't went well with maan. He knew it was friendly hug, bt he didn't like anyone near her. He wanted her all fr himself. Maan said a bit loudly, gaining Geet's attention: Ppl around weren't even this happy when we won d world cup. He mocked Geet. The rest of d team stood silently as they were aware of Maan's temper n thought him to b angry fr loosing d game. Bt in real he wanted Geet's attention.
Geet: I have never seen robots answer until they r asked fr! It was a moment of silence. Everyone was stunned to some one answering bak to maan.
Maan looked surprised at her guts. Bt as he realised she called him robot,, he took a step towards her. Maan: Did u just called me a ROBOT? He moved towards her n Geet turned from a lioness to a kitten seeing him angry. Seeing Geet's expressions captain walked b/w them asking them to change n leave fr d day as it was already time. A player held Geet's hand dragging her to pack. Everyone hurried bak b4 the volcano blasts.

Driving bak home, all Geet would think was of Maan. She remembered their first meet, how maan kissed her, her cheeks heated up. She admitted she couldn't slept all night thinking of it. Infact, she haven't told anything about it to kanak, who knew her every secret from big to small, everything. Maybe she liked him,,or had a crush on him,, or mayb she was falling for him..no,,NO! NO WAYS!! She couldn't love maan. How could she? She didn't want to get hurt. He was a celebrity and ppl all over d world loved him. So he wont love her bak. Mayb a crush on him was oaky! So, its decided. She has a crush on him! She smiled to herslef satisfied with her conclusion.

On d way to home, she stopped at a supermarket. She needed to get something's to keep calm. She bought tubs of ice cream, coffee, cheries, chocolates n waffers. At the billing counter, the sales girl looked at her awkwardly. But Geet was a absent minded to notice, she was still busy thinking about Maan.

Maan on d other hand walked out of d stadium, his driver awaited fr him. Getting into d car, all he had in his mind was Geet. He never felt an inch of "whatever" he feels fr Geet anyone. Whatever relationships he had were due to his stardom. Those models n actresses meant nothing to him bt as a source physical satisfaction. He was never so possessive of anyone as much as he's fr Geet. He sighed keeping his head on d headrest of his room. He remembered her happiness when she won d game of LUDO against him. A smile tugged his lips. Taking his iPad, he downloaded Lodo n kept playing till he fall asleep.

Late at night, maan woke up n walked out of his mansion. He drove towards geet's apartment.He didn't knew about anything else.He wanted to see her at the moment. Knocking at her door fr a couple of times, Geet finally opened d door. He walked in her apartment as if it was his own n pinned her to nearest wall closing d door behind him with his legs. She stood before him in black coloured shorts n a white coloured slip. Maan was sure she haven't worn anything inside that piece of cotton. His one hand rested on her waist n other covered her mouth so she wont shout.
He moved his lips towards her ear n whispered in her ears: I wont hurt u, I promise, nibbling her earlobes. He removed his hand from her mouth pulling her closer by her waist. Maan leaned forward kissing n hitting her neck gently. Her skin was soft as butter n he could get enough of it. He sucked on it making a love bite. Geet haven't said a word but kept breathing heavily. Maan looked into her eyes, the dim lights of d hall made her look heavenly.
Not having enough patience to wait, he carried her to her room n placing her on d bed n nxt moment he was on top of her. He looks into her eyes passionately, the intensity scared Geet. She tried to wriggle free from his hold but maan held her tighter. He didn't liked her resistance a bit. Maan: Shh..i said I wont harm u. But u cant stop me, Ur Mine. Looking into her eyes he kissed her, Geet slowly closed her eyes. She didn't kissed him bak bt didn't resisted either. Maan went down kissing her neck until he find d barrier between his lips n her skin. Looking in to eyes, he slid down d belts of her slip, slowly. Geet forcefully released her hand from his grasp n trying to stop maan placing her hand on top of his. Maan held her more firlmy, sliding down the straps from her shoulders baring her breasts to him. Geet closed her eyes n her face turned pink! He placed his lips on her skin, sucking n biting it to his heart's content. He whispered against her skin: Never try to stop me Geet, ur mine! Only mine! Geet closed her eyes in pleasure.
She tasted as soft as silk,, satin. Yes, her skin was as smooth as satin n even tasted d same! Wait, What!! Satin!! Maan abruptly opened his eyes, n saw himself kissing his pillow.


Nxt part guys!! Sorry to keep u waiting! Was confused what to write,,hence finally concluded to write about His Passion fr her.
Hope u enjoy it!
I want feedback!
Waiting for your reply! Tc!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Damn Maan is like obsessed and thank god Captain got in between Maan and Geet before he bursted on her. Poor Maan all negativitycoming from his father of course will harbor anger in him!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
what kind of father is he ...poor maan
hmm maan so jealous
even geet falling for him
loved his passionate dream
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

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Updated!! 😛 sry no pms!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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maan is really angry young man... poor geet also scared of it..
maan falling for geet and he s dreaming all xxx of geet...

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