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Posted: 8 years ago
hello! when can we expect an update??
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nice teaser.. .waiting for next update 😊
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@part1
Lovely start dear
Loved it!!
Geet belongs to a lovable and knitted family , her family members loves her to the core.
Her family were feeling discompose and downcast as Geet was shifting thyself to Delhi to achieve her aim .
On other hand Maan was venting out his exasperation and wrath after knowing that his ex betrayed him and used him as a ladder for her success.He couldnt digest the fact that she cheated him.
Both Maan and geet are busy in their world of happiness and success.

@part2
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Geet got good opportunity to excel in her field and carrier as the physiotherapist for the Indian cricket team . She celebrated her happiness with her friend .
Maan was frustrated with the happenings and needed some lone time for thyself to sooth his aching heart and came across Geet , who was enjoying her time with her friend. His system was distrubed by Geet's image and thoughts . Loved Maaneet's first meet .

@part3
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Loved Maaneet first encounter filled with banter and kiss
Geet called Maan as frog !! That was hilarious and got glimpse of maan's passion for Geet.
Seems Maan has an unpleasant past , which makes him feel aloof from his family and outer world.

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@part4
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Maan's father is ill mannered and brash with his demeanor towards Maan
Maan's father weighs everything based on money & status rather that love and happiness . Dadima was feeling helpless seeing his son's attitude towards Maan.
Loved Maan's passionate & possessive side for Geet .
He is turning obsessive for Geet .
Geet refused to acknowledge her endurance and named her feelings for Maan as crush .
His passionate moments with Geet turned out to be his dream and his fascination was crashed within the limits of his pillows.
Hope Geet becomes light of Maan's gloomy life.

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Nice teaser dear
Looking forward to the update
Update soon !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 1 -3

Firstly Congratulations on your story
Concept is just fabulous

Maan had just broken off his relation with supermodel girlfriend but it also seems he did not like been
at his home he refers to it as some hotel will wait for those revealations
Geet is a Pyhsiotherapist now she has been appointed to be on the cricket team which Maan plays for
their first meeting for Maan at first he felt he is hallucinating but then realized this gorgeous girl is there before him he kisses her too as he hears its her first kiss and it seems somehow he is attracted to her already oh and Geet has just called him a frog wow

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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 4

Hell Maan's father is just so mean towards Maan just dictating to him and leaves
its almost as if he does not even care that Maan is his son all he is interested in is
business
Maan is getting possessive and attracted towards Geet and she is friendly with all the team players
and when she hugs the captain Maan for some reason didn't like that as he just wants Geet for himself
his dreams too are of Geet his passion and possessiveness with claim to her
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Posted: 8 years ago
Teaser

Its interesting Maan wants to do the car advert immediately
wondering what plans he has

looking forward to your next chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
any chance of an update?
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please do not leave this incomplete!
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Chapter 5
Sitting on bed, maan cursed himself. It has been only 2 days he has met the girl and he already started dreaming so exotic about her. 'This girl was already getting on his nerves!' Wanting to distract himself from her, he knew he needed to take decisions. Deciding firmly what he wanted to do, he picked his phone from the night stand dailling the first number from speed dial of his phone.

As the phone rang, disturbing the peaceful slumber of the person l, he groaned in irritation. Cursing the caller from the other side, he picked up the phone without checking the caller id. WHAT THE f**k YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING, ADI? CAN'T YOU PICK UP THE DAMN PHONE SOONER!!??' The voice boomed in the otherwise silent room. What the hell maan? Why are you calling me so early morning? He asked sitting in the bed rubbing his eyes. Aisa kya kam agaya tha u couldn't wait for me to meet at breakfast? turning to look at the clock on the side table which showed 2:45 am in morning! f**k! Hell, it's not even morning! It's damn 2.45 at night! Aisa konsa pa had tut pada ki u spoiled my sleep? Add didn't bother to hide the irritation in his tone.

Shut up adi. Prepone the shoot for the car commercial to tomorrow and have the responsible advertisment company informed. With this the line went dead.

Next morning geet reached the sessions with the thoughts of staying away from maan. If not to anyone, she admitted to herself that she haven't slept last night thinking of him. Reaching there, she came to know maan won't be present at the arnea for practice. She released a sigh of relief thanking her babaji for the generosity. But unconsciously throughout the day she missed his presence.
That evening she got a call from hospital to report their the next day for a special case, and continue working from their for the next 2 days. The day ended leaving geet tired.

On the other hand, when maan reached the sets for shoot early morning he was already irritated as he missed geets presence. It was difficult to believe that the girl he met just a couple of times has left his disturbed. But she was not any girl, but the one kissed so passionately in their 2nd meet. Someone who me he couldnt already see with someone else, be it a simple chat or conversation. These thoughts left him even more frustrated.

Analysing his mood the entire crew was on their toes and heels to keep everything perfect. The best choreographers in the country were their to make setup bt still it didn't pleased maan.
As they started to shoot, the female actress was being too clingy to him which left him irritated. It was twice he already jerked her but she didn't get the message so finally maan shouted at the director to change the model. Stomping his feet, he left to his vanity.

Finally when two hours later when the shoot was rearranged, adi went to maan's vanity to call him up. Seeing him resting in the couch, adi called him up. Maan, the setup is ready. Let's get down to shoot. We then need to leave for practice.
Maan: Adi, M in no mood to shoot. Pack up!
Adi's jaws touched the ground. It actually took everyone 2 hrs to call up a new model and set a new setup and here he's calling for a pack up.
Maan: Ask to driver to get the car out. M leaving for the mansion. Compensate the production for the day. Saying this he left to the washroom.

Guys,sorry!
I kno a sorry is not at all enough for the entire break I took. Bt I will compensate it with 1 part per week. I hope u all would forgive me soon.

Kind off small update.
Will try to give a longer update next time.
Love ya

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