Dear Heart! New OS 07/04/17

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Thanks for lovely work..
U just changed few lines 😭
I was waiting for next part 😳
Koi chances hai 😃

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Heartbreaking yet positive
👏 good job dear apple

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Very nicely written. Hearts's diff emotions with diff situations. Both maan & geet have suffered in their marriage and had bad past. Maan's little baby brigs both together. beautifully written. I liked it ended with a hope for peaceful & happy life for 3 most suffering persons.

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

IST SIO HEART TOUCHING

ISSE CONTINUE KR NA

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

An amazing os dear... Though their hearts broke silently u made them heard to us in ur wonderful words. A painful story where the people deserved a better life. And it's right to have eachother at the end. 👏

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Kalpana

@maaneetfavo

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

fantastic os..i already read in anniversary thread.and commented on ghsp anni thread...if possible plz make to ss..this is my request dear

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Beautiful OS dear

Loved it!!

Apt title " Dear heart"

Loved the monologue of both the individuals dear

The pain and agony the respective heart was carrying

the respective person were betrayed and hurt by their dear and beloved ones

So much is hidden behind a single beat and rhythm of heart

Muskaan came as angel and Ray of Hope for the leads to make their heart beat again which was once's stopped beating aftermath of their past

Loved the soliloquy at the end dear

Nyc ending

Thanks for the pm !!

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Wonderful os.

So emotional. Maan and Geet both are in pain. One for his ailing daughter and other for loosing her baby. Both of their spouses are monsters. Finally Muskaan calling Geet as MAMA brought solace to their broken hearts.