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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Veil
Wow.

Just what I was in mood for today.

The concept is one of the topics very close to my heart. I have adored one shots with similar theme before and i adore this too.

Oh before I forget, please check out this story named Devil and the wallpaper

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1616565

Now coming back to the stort, We all have insecurities. We might be pretty and perfect in so many ways, yet the insecurities remain.

I was watching Modern family yesterday and Alex Dunphy, the little genius who is amazing at academics and Cello still sits in a dark room, wondering she has no friends. Because she according to her isn't popular enough.

That hit me hard. Somehow.

Anyway sorry for speaking all over the place.

I really like your Geet because what most people misunderstand is that the introverts and less popular people might be boring. No, sir. Look closer and you find the most funniest of people in introverts.

The moment she turned Yoda, it made me smile. So fresh.

But then our Hero seems to be a gem for he seems to be the popular Jock who is also kind.

Can't wait to read more dude. Honestly.

Love

Brat

Modern Family?

Damn!

I have to watch it.

My hands are full because of Narcos .

Thank you for plugging the story

Will definitely read it .

I m on WOL fight right now.

Hopefully will land on the latest chapter soon :p

Thank you for being here

It's total lame, gheesa peeta concept

But my guilty inner unrequited- love- alter ego refuse to back out! 😆

Aapki prashanshak

Cumber -

PS - I had to google Hindi word for fandom 😆

Because Fan directly translated into Bajaj pankha

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Veil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Thanks for the subtitles though

Otherwise i would have googled.it.

Yo watching you read and leave comments on WOL.akes.my day, these days

And the link i provided ... It isn't written by me

One of the well liked.stories in the forum with the theme

Of course, we all crave for that theme don't we?

Although highschool life is long left behind, sometimes I go back to movies and books with that theme because no matter how much we grow up, somethings that have influenced early on in our life, something that shaped us, the insecurities that are born in this phase are here to stay

Enough Bhashan for a month I think

Watch this song. I dedicate it to this story

http://youtu.be/MkElfR_NPBI

Edited by Veil - 8 years ago

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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Little mix!

Black Magic is so apt for this story .

I hope they come up with some more real' music

I guess Perrie is still nursing her broken heart:(

Where else Zayn Malik is busy with the Pillow talks :p

I love your bhashans' they are enriching to the core.

The story is not yours ?

I hope , I won't face One -D fandom here ,

My sister is enough for that :/

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mayyo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Hello. A random reader here who stumbled upon this piece of writing in an attempt to escape writing herself. 😆

Anyway, I enjoyed reading this. It has a fresh feeling to it, something I haven't read as of yet.

I especially liked your simplistic way of writing. Makes the scene play out in the mind very clearly. :)

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Thap thap thap

Pls updt this one

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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
Thap thap thap
Pls updt this one

😲

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lizzy84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Update?

Missed you Ben 🤗

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: MrsBenedict

😲

why shocked?😆

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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: mayyo
Hello. A random reader here who stumbled upon this piece of writing in an attempt to escape writing herself. 😆
Anyway, I enjoyed reading this. It has a fresh feeling to it, something I haven't read as of yet.

I especially liked your simplistic way of writing. Makes the scene play out in the mind very clearly. :)

Ah!

A writer :)

Wow! That's cool

I m officially providing refuge to the writer group here .

To hide out possibly :p

Thank you! for the kind words.

I am glad that your escape tactics were enjoyable.

Edited by MrsBenedict - 8 years ago