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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Fabulous update. Maan rescued Geet and brought her to his home. He introduced him as her brother but still Geet is unable to trust him. Her abusers need to be punished. It seems Dev loves Geet. It's difficult to imagine Maan and Geet as brother and sister. Superb. Will wait for next.

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: payal.gupta177
Fabulous update. Maan rescued Geet and brought her to his home. He introduced him as her brother but still Geet is unable to trust him. Her abusers need to be punished. It seems Dev loves Geet. It's difficult to imagine Maan and Geet as brother and sister. Superb. Will wait for next.

Hehe then don't imagine 😆😉

Thank u fr liking it hehe

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC
Amazing Update.. sorry but still I can't believe they are brother and sister 😆 😳
Anyway clear my confusion please.. are they biological siblings or adopted one? Is me chance hai 😆
Geet's foster family is such a creepy one.. they abused a teenager girl then expected her to stay with them.. 😡
I'm so glad Maan took her with him.. How will he see her bruises on her body 😳
Waiting for next..

Thank u fr liking it hehe sab pata chal jayega Patience :P 😛😉

hehe yehi bata diya to story mein bacha kya😆

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Congratulations on new story dear

Loved the title

Intriguing and different Story line

Awesome character sketch!!

Maan in search of his lost sister and geet is waiting to find ones way back to her lost familyand to reconcile with her brother!!

Looking forward to the story

Edited by anu5 - 8 years ago

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

@ part 1&2

NYC start dear

Loved both the updates

Geet is the victim of violence

Her family members used her and abusing her too

On other hand maan was in search of his lost sister and was determined to find her

Maan got to know whereabouts of his sister

Yash and Adi helped him to find his sister

Co incidentally maan met geet but couldn't recognize her but felt weird seeing geet's demeanor

Dev likes Geet and loves her gesture too

Glad that maan took geet with him and geet to supported thyself to raise voice against her abusing family

Maan tried to be cordial with geet and wanted to make her feel comfortable

Geet is having nightmare abt her past happenings and memories

NYC precap

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Part 2...

Awesome... Interesting...

Thanks for update

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Thanks for pm...

Continue soon...

Maan reached geet n took her away with him...

She is relieved to get out of that hell but yet not able to trust anyone...

Maan has a inkling that something bad has happened with her n wishes to know it soon...

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

nice part

geet takes some time

but she is save now

thanks for pm

if you shifted this story

plz pm me

cont soon

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umaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

wonderful update...with the trick to send adi behind man to find out geet's address maan came to her house where she was mishandled by her so called family but geet was cleverly left from there... maan took geet to mansion where she was shocked to see the big building...he showed his photo with dad & she showed her photo with mom... when he told her to call him bhai but she needed time ...she just laid down on couch & was sleeping woke up with screaming bhai no... when maan asked anything wrong done by him she told to leave her alone...after dinner she went to her room & locked it as she couldn't trust anyone as her bitter experience... maan could not sleep to think about sis happy...sad precap...excited for next... thanks for pm...!!