Knight on Ninety Horses-Short Story-Note Pg 102 Dec 1, 2017

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: dqno1
I have an update ready but it is not going up till you give me my chole bhature 😔

Ae lo Ye Kia baat hui 😲

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Posted: 8 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Ae lo Ye Kia baat hui 😲

😭 update nahi de rahi hai

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#663

Chaar tareek se nau tareek ho gaya...

5 days gap

Ab update time :*

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#664

Sorry for being super late!

Res :)

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 8 years ago

#665

Part 9

lovely update..like Geet's home, Maan's Nanaji's home and the people there again gave that homely feeling.
Nanima is adorable..affectionate and young at heart.
so, soon there would be one more inclusion in the match making history of the house !!
Maan unintentionally spoke about it and though Geet is yet to understand it, but Nanima with her mind-sight sensed the bond between Maaneet and their future too..

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#666

Oh my what a story!!

It feels more like a journey of nostalgia for those from the 90s !! Movies, songs, clothes and even food!! everything is of that untouchable era!

From the word get go..This Geet has been a whirpool of unabashed fun and laughter!!

And Can I say I really can't decide who I love more because Maan is that youthful boy with a flare of simple innocence which is hard to find in the generation after!!

Love this duo.. their 'Jabber' talk is the most fun thing to read!! and You write them so well! Woman you are a remarkable writer!!

I laughed so hard at her Bombay duck joke and even harder at the inclusion of Doordarshan to melody chocs!!

And now finally the latest chapter that I just read: The house with a spirit.. hehee.. Shaadi karane waala bhoot hehee

Dulha seems to be ready.. Dulhan has no clue but no worries the house and its owner is all set to match make everything in between 😆

You brought the city to life from its narrative ... have you ever been or may I ask, if you are actually from there?

Its always really nice to read the background of the story, whatever the city it is... makes it more complete and relatable.

Also loving the title!! I almost imagined Baazigar SRK but goody version😆

waiting for the next ji😳

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Susegad

@Susegad

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: dqno1
I have an update ready but it is not going up till you give me my chole bhature 😔

😲

Tab toh ho gaya😆

Band bajte reh jaayega, no bajaa baraat.

Been busy for the past few days, will update soon. Aaj nahi toh kaal. Pakka😉

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: ---nishu---
Koi Laut ke aaya hai

Oye teri. Meri naamshakal😆

Aap kaha se aa tapki.

Badi muddaton baad. Welcome Nishu ji welcome😃

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893213

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Posted: 8 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: Susegad

😲

Tab tohho gaya😆
Band bajte rehjaayega, no bajaabaraat.
Been busy for the past few days, will update soon. Aaj nahi tohkaal. Pakka😉

gandi baat 😡