~ Superstar's Cinderella ~ Part 8 @ 63 on 01/10/2017~ COMPLETED~

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IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

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Maan was a superstar and his each film was success followed by a party...he usually avoids media for his play boy image..
He drank until he losses his senses and adi took him to the room..but here comes surprise a girl with whom he spends the night he had fallen for her!!!!that's surprise!!???
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CRAZYCUTEE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

superb update

superstar mk i think he is egoist and thick head

when he spend night with girl with drunken state and adi is right here he always spend night with so many girl why he want search her poor adi he became sandwitch between mk and girl

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Awesome Just Fabulous start

According to my understanding of the Prologue Maan and Geet would have had a past as he became arrogant later and now I'm certain

as the girl was a virgin and that might be Geet

Maan knows well his films has high success and he throws parties everyone comes and congratulate him and making him drink congratulatory drinks making him more drunk

its normal for him to spend nights with women its his lifestyle but this time there is a difference as the girl left first this fact surely is a big blow to Maan women never leaves before him and this time too the girl is a virgin which means his anger is also justified because using a virgin just for one night might not be his way then the fact that though he was drunk there must be something about the girl that unknowingly he felt connected

waiting to see now what will Maan's actions be

Edited by taahir004 - 8 years ago

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

lovely update maan is a superstar a playboy who hates marriage topic coz of which he stays away from media he was all drunk and high adi his friend and pa knows him in and out put him bed even keep look out as he know maan might do soemthing in his state since he had thrown a party what he didnt anticipate was for a girl to enter his room and spend night with him maan was affected by her so much that he didnt stop making love to her even for a second but the moment he woke up not to find her he became mad and wanted to know who she was adi was shocked to see maan he knew the exist of the girl without maan knowing it was a big hurt to his pride bbut maan was going insane and wanted to find the girl at any cost as he seems to get addicted to her let me guess it was geet

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xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

:* :* <3

... unres for the most wonderful soul and person ever

OMG, I totally loved that! ☺️☺️

(note: this is the second time I'm writing this, the first time aaall the text got vanished 🤢 I feel like crying 😭😡 I haaate it 😆😭😭) - all my words vanished in a second. 🥺

Anyway...😆

What an amazing start, baby ❤️😳🤗 I totally enjoyed this update. Just the very needed dose of sanity after such a tiring and boring day... hate my life! 🤢😆 What a beautiful treat from you! ❤️ You know, I often check your stories (even the old ones) and your words are always like a balm for my very weak and sensitive soul... 😳😳 I am so much excited for this story, especially because Cinderella is such a beautiful fairytale and she is my favorite Disney princess. 😆 And of course, the fact that you are writing it is - well, as you can already guess, -driving me crazy 🤪 Just imagine when two things I love 😉😳 are being merged to create such a masterpiece... Just keep doing this, it makes not only you happy, but many other people including me. Okay... especially me. 😳😆 You know what? I tried writing even a few words for a story and I feel I'm failing miserably 🤢🤣 So - 👏👏👏 hats off to you my love, for your dedication and talent... I wish my words could convey the appreciation and love I feel for you and your story but they just can't 😳 they are actually never enough... 🤗❤️

I am gonna ask you a question. 🤣 and since you know me too well you already know I'm not gonna ask about the update directly but about the background and the brilliant mind behind it 😉😳 Is my dear lab (🤢 - note the excitement and the sarcasm) really that much inspiring? Cause... queen, you are setting everything on fire with your updates ☺️ 😆 and just when I think the stories couldn't get any better because you're already creating masterpieces you come up with something new and make me go speechless ❤️ keep it up with your brilliant work jaan... 🤗 I MISS YOU, you should know that. You know it, little teaser.

Coming to the update, before I start writing a full love letter here 😆 I'm gonna start by telling you how much I love the shades you add in your stories and the variety of personalities joined for one single story! ❤️ They are always so different, even the side characters can make a difference in your stories and your way with words makes it so complex and intense. Even Maan, this one big superstar, is just so different when we get to know him. The mention of the Oberoi's got me 😉😳🤣 I'm a bit biased about it so I'm loving the mention! <3 You know what? You are just brilliant, I would have thought about everyone but Sallu bhai saying those words 🤣🤣 Even here you prove yourself to be such a genius. ☺️ And here I was banging my head against the wall trying to guess who he is. 😆 Now if I think deeper, the biryani mention should have made things clear, but I guess I was not much hungry that time 😆 Maan's success and talent is undeniable, even those big stars made it clear and stated how much they love his work, which is so nice. 😳

And like you added in your story, I just love how different Maan is and I totally understand the need he has to escape the world he is living in even for a little bit. The life celebrities live must be exciting, but they have no privacy most of the time. Being in the spotlight every single time is slowly driving them insane. Even the biggest VIPs usually wish for a simple and eventless day, far away for the tiring world they share. Even Maan must have felt that and he demands some time alone, to clear his thoughts a bit. I absolutely love the equation btw Maan and Adi, so adorable and I truly enjoyed the fact that you mentioned why their bonding is so strong. 😳😳 I love the fact that he is not treating him like he is inferior to him. There are so many examples of people who became just too arogant at the very first sight of attention being drawn to them. Maan is just so different! And if we think about it, no one gets it easily - he won his appreciation by always being by his side and here is another lesson being attached to this story - trust. He trusts him, therefore treating him the way he does. And Adi is also respecting his need to be alone, which is just fab... The dialogues: "tumhari baahon me aaj raat guzarni hai", "khabardaar, agar mere pyaar ki nilaami ki toh, "aaj me tumhe apna banake rahunga chahe tum ha karo ya naa", ufff just loved them ☺️☺️ and you know why I mentioned them in the comment... you can get my secret baatein babyyy! 😉😆
You almost killed me with the love making session ☺️🤢 - almost because I have to be alive to read the next parts of the story naa 😉😆 And ermmm just imagine - you,hot words, shades - and the effects on me??? :P 😳 What a wonderful description of the events, I was like Damnnn why does she have to nail everything she writes?? ☺️ You know right (wrote "tight" before😆 ) my mind can't handle reading without thinking about you know what and you... 🤢😆😳 just on fire, so well writteeen...

I am pretty much sure that girl must be Geet. A modern Cinderella who lost - not sure if her shoe too but her virginity for sure :P 😆 🤣 Gosh, you're creating such amazing parallels here, I just can't baby 🤣 Why do I think is it pretty obvious she is Geet? Because our heroine has to be first of all: DIFFERENT from the other girls, she has to be the reason for hero's sudden change in halaat and harkatein 🤪:P 😆 ** Logiiic AniRu wali ** 🤣 Like Cinderella's prince, he has to start looking for her everywhere. And he has already fallen for her. Well - here Adi is the one who actually gets the order to find her but well he can't be the hero so 🤪😆 And that scene when he makes Adi look at the marks on his body is just mindblowing, I love ittt sooo much... <3 😆 The power your words hold is just unbelievable ❤️

What a fabulous piece *claps claps* Love you my baby 😳❤️ can't wait for the next part love 🤗you completely made me fangirl with this update, oh I wish you were here... 😆😈

Edited by Aishuuu. - 8 years ago

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Superb update
Now maan is desperate to find who he spend night with but why geet slept with maan

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Haya1022bmw

@Haya1022bmw

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

I really loved it

Maan is so big..superstar

Now he had to find that girl

That would be hard to find

Waiting for more

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Haya1022bmw

@Haya1022bmw

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

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Maan is a big superstar

Know hunt for cindrela start as she is unseen

Waiting for more

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

wow lovely superb rocking update..te way my maan ki entry was rocking damaka, he was superstar wow in real too im waiting for tat day..te way my maan was over drunk and adi his friend cum pa took him to room and his worry for him, adi is indeed a real friend..opps my maan was loving a girl who was virgin and te way she made him crazy and left him, omg now my maan is angry thinking some girl hit his ego..i love te update so much yar