~ Superstar's Cinderella ~ Part 8 @ 63 on 01/10/2017~ COMPLETED~

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IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Nice part
Thanks for pm
Maan heated geet voice and felt something...
He took her forcefully in the chamber...
Aditi was worried for geet...
Maan kissed her...
He got an idea geet was the one whom he is searching...
Wilb waiting for next...

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Risingsun626

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Thanks for pm. Short but lovely update n u stopped at cliffhanger. Devil trapped the damsel in his web n she is in daze of moments. Dont know what she will feel when she came back to senses. As adi mentioned she is not the one figurewise then why maan took her. This point is scartching my head. Waiting for next.

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Haya1022bmw

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

don't know what to say
liked it
But story is too fast
was that girl was geet
if it was she..how can she reached that room
waiting for more
thanks for pw

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

superb update, wonderfully written! thanks 4 da pm! hmm Maan stops Geet! her voice seems familiar! she tries 2 leave bt is cornered by his guards! Aditi worried abt Geet! Geet angry! Maan tries 2 kiss her n she lets him! Y???? update soon

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yasmeen singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

read part 3 ... short but true to point ...so Maan checking if Geet is that girl...looking forward to read more

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zariya1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Awesome

Maan realised its geet that day

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

wow lovely superb wow update..te way my man felt his geet's presence why not where ever his geet is he will find with her breath, but geet ki fear and trying to run away but my maan know how to get her and his mens brought his geet..now my maan ki confrontation with his geet, omg so geet is te girl my maan searching and my maan know how mend his sherni..geet can never deny my maan even though her heart wants too..i love te update so much yar

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annie03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Great stories. Really enjoyed reading them. Can you please add me to ur pm list

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annie03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

So maan found her finally. Looking forward to read geets response to him. Probably a zor ka thaparh

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Maan seeing the two girls leave ordered them to stop but they still continued when Geet replied Maan its as if he knew she is the one he is searching for and made his guards forcefully drag her to his chamber
in the chamber Geet was angry breaking stuff but the moment Maan started asking her questions she started getting nervous now he wants to know if its really the same girl so he decides to kiss her I'm sure after the kiss he will make his decision