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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhu18


di dramas mein nahi dheke par agar Dona dar gayi
please you dont write sad one

twisted and sad
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhu18


you both are scaring me BIG TIME

then mere bare me socho kuhu dramas ka 1st hand experience hai
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Posted: 8 years ago



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Edited by singh24 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago


Suddh Desi Love


"Some Old- Fashioned things like Fresh Air & Sunshine are hard to beat ."

Introduction ..

It's a very common tendency that ppl from big city or who moves in high society doesn't think nd look good at villagers nd small town ppl ,, they treat them low nd backward as compare to them , though they r more rooted nd simple heart than city ppl ,, what'll happen if a rich nd arrogant boy from Delhi forced to marry a simple village girl ...

Small town girls have big hearts with small town values . They are forever loyal to their family , friends nd roots . Small town girls keep their feet planted firmly on the ground no matter where they end up .
cute & Country


Note...

This Is a fiction , inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF





Part - 67



Part - 68

Maan decided not to bother him nd her with arguments but he wd act ,, with arguments he cdn't make her understand ,that only irked her nd create distance , so he made his mind to go on silent efforts.

When he was on his way to KC he msg her ..

GM Geet , take temp after BF nd msg me if u want to avoid my call .

Geet checked d msg nd sighed ,, she understood why he took her phone number .

She did that nd msg him back ,, she knew his stubbornness so think to avoid calls.

That happened in lunchtime too ,, she got another msg about her meal nd meds nd she replied in one word.. Done.

Then again in eve about temp .. she irked but replied having no option .

There Maan was happy that he was getting replies nd status about her health directly ,, though he called DM too nd asked about her nd Geet's health ,, he was very busy whole day but Geet didn't leave his mind .

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At night he did d same ,, quietly visit OH, saw her from distance nd came back ,, then at night nd again in mrng ,, his msgs wr going on nd on nd she was quietly replying him to avoid direct talk ,, in that way a Silent Convo started between them .

Days started passing ,, Geet was cured nd started going to her college ,, her FM schedule shifted to Sunday only,, spending most of her time in study ,, she was realizing that Maan keeping distance but having an eye on her all d time ,, DM insisted her to use her car nd driver to save time nd energy in travelling pub transport , but it was Maan behind all that .. he bought a new car for DM nd his driver shifted to that car ,, there was peace in lives nd all wr busy in their respective lives .

Maan started talking to all Handas now nd then when any of them called him ,, they postponed their HP visit bcoz of his work pressure nd Geet's study,, His tours to Hbad increased bcoz construction work had started at 2 sites ,, V look after KC work in his absence.

Maan again went to Hbad for a week ,, Geet came to know through DM about his visit , but she was getting his msg daily , if she didn't reply he sent her again , so lastly she had to reply .

It was his 3rd day in Hbad ,, Geet didn't get his msg from night nd then next mrng ,, she checked her phone few times but no msg from his side ,, she was in college nd her phone was on silent ,, there was no call from DM too after mrn talk ,, she called DM once but that come unreachable ,, Geet tried 2-3 times after her next class but result was same ,, she got worried nd called at KM number ,nd d reply from servant shook her entirely ...

DM nd V left in hurry for Hbad bcoz chotey sab was admitted in Hsptl there .

She at once called to Maan but he to didn't reply ,, then to V , but he too didn't ,, Geet's whole energy drained from her body ,, she was not getting what to do to get any reply from anyone ? What had happened to him all of sudden that DM nd V left in hurry ,, unknowing she looked up nd prayed to her Babaji to keep Maan well .

This was d depth of that relation which they we sharing ,, that scattered relation too have its existence ,, d thread which tied them once , tied forever ,, they cd broke that thread , denied their relation ,, rejected each other ,, part away but cdn't erase their past which joined their names forever .

It was eve when geet got reply from DM ,, she was sounding weak nd tired nd gave d reason of their sudden departure ,, Maan's cab met with an accident nd he was hurt nd hospitalized ,, Geet shuddered with d news ,, no matter what she had a sore relation with Maan but he was precious for all sply for DM nd khurana family ,, geet asked about his well being nd got that he had some injury on forehead nd his arm had broken ,, which got plaster,, his driver too was injured .

That became a police case bcoz it was all driver's mistakes who was in d effect of alcohol ,, D cab was provided by hotel where Maan was staying nd it was night when Maan was returning from site visit which was away from main city ,, driver lost his control nd hit d divider very hard saving a biker , though d biker too was hurt nd he complaint to police ,, it was police who admitted Maan in hsptl nd then hotel mngr came nd handle d situation ,, Maan informed them in d mrng nd they left at once taking d earliest flight .

DM nd V wr very tensed so didn't inform her nd then in flight their phone was off ,, Geet asked about their return nd DM hinted that they cd come next day , depends upon Maan .

Geet urged to see nd to talk Maan but didn't get courage to call him again,, he didn't reply her prev call , but she thought to sent a msg , after a long Kashamkash she send a msg ... How r u ?

She didn't get reply nd disappointed she slept after talking to DM at night nd insisting her to take care of her health too ,, she talked to V too nd req him to take care of DM as well .

Next day was full of restlessness for Geet ,, Geet asked to Kamla about A nd got a reply that she was fine nd went her college,, geet to left for college nd then gave a short visit to NGO to check d work then she was back to OH ,, DM informed her that they wd come d next day bcoz V went to attend d meetings in place of Maan nd Maan was discharged from hsptl ,, Geet got a sigh of relief ,, she was worried for DM too so insisting her take care of her as well ,, again she cdn't voice out to have a talk with Maan .

Maan was very well aware about Geet's restlessness he saw her missed call of prv day nd msg too but didn't reply ,, most of d time he was sleeping bcoz of painkillers nd rest with d talks with V nd DM ,, attened few of his calls nd adjusted his meetings ,, he req V to attend few meetings nd rest postponed for few days ,, d KC staff of that place got about his accident nd many ppl wr coming to visit him ,, he didn't get privacy to call back Geet ,, he didn't get her glimpse from 4-5 days nd becoming restless to see her ,, he knew that she was worrying for him nd DM nd that was satisfying his heart.

Actually from when he started silent convo they became cautious for each other ,, he saw her from distance ,, Geet too noticed that, many times their eyes met nd stirred their hearts,, Geet was noticing that though he stopped talking to her directly but his every gesture was showing his care nd concern for her ,, both think nd do efforts for each other but wrapped in avoidance ,, this distance nd fidgety emitted an effect on both .

Next mrng when they reached in KM they find Geet waiting in driveway ,, lil away from KM's threshold ,, A nd V came out 1st nd went at Maan's side to help him ,, then DM stepped out from other side ,, Geet slowly went near DM though her eyes wr observing Maan, who was coming out from car, Geet wished DM nd both hugged each other .

A was besides Maan nd V started taking out Maan nd his office bag from car ,, driver too was taking out their luggage , Nakul nd Satish rushed to take d bags ,, Geet was quietly standing next to DM nd twisting dupatta's corner ,, her eyes wr at Maan who slowly moved towards door ,, he looked at her nd their eyes met ,, there was a lot to ask in each other eyes ,, Maan cd see d pain in Geet's eyes seeing his sling arm ,, Geet chewed her lower lip from inside to suppress her urge to talk nd help him ,, he silently crossed her nd went in KM ,, he longed to talk her nd to have her besides him ,, his heart thumped fast when saw Geet chewing her lip ,, that distanced pricked him .

After talking to DM nd V , Geet went back to OH halfheartedly ,, it was Sun nd she had an exam nd her prog , so went out ,, A nd V settled Maan in his room nd remained with him ,, A was taking all details nd ,, they had their BF nd then V nd DM decided to consult their known Ortho Dr with Maan's reports bcoz rest of treatment had to take here ,, V nd Maan got busy with their business talks nd DM went to check about lunch ,, V helped Maan in change nd then in taking bath after 2 days ,, with one hand nd newly plastered sling hand Maan was facing hard time ,, he became dependent ,, before lunch he got some privacy nd made a call from intercom to talk Geet ,, but she didn't pick , then he called from his phone , ring was going but she didn't reply ,, disappointed he settled in bed, cursed that helplessness.

Geet reached home in AN nd called DM again ,, asked about her nd Maan's health ,, she sent back kamla to KM bcoz there work pressure had increased .

At eve all gathered in Maan's room again nd spent time with him ,, he wanted to go out for a small walk but all denied nd req to take rest in bed to give rest to his hand ,, his heart was restless nd aching to get a glimpse of Geet or to listen her voice for once.

At night V wished to stay with him but Maan strongly denied nd sent him back to sleep in his room ,, sleep was far away from Maan's eyes ,, he checked d time nd quietly sneaked out from his room using his phone torch ,, he went at OH door nd opened that ,, slowly went in nd then dragged him to Geet's room ,, d night lamp was on nd she was sitting in rocking chair near window nd staring out lost in her thoughts ,, Maan observed her for few sec nd then slowly called her name .. .. G e e t .

With a jerk she turned her face nd her eyes widened in shock seeing him there at that hr nd in that condition ,, she almost jumped up from chair nd a whisper came out from her lips in disbelief ... M a a n .


Precap --- Maaneet heartily talk ...



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. sorry for mistakes ...

Edited by singh24 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
i have fear of unknown


di suparpower is ok good but no sad sad no please
you are our good di na ❤️⭐️


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆 right now Mind id struggling ..
title bhi nahi sujh raha, nd want some poems , quotes too...
abhi sab khichdi bana hua hei..🥱

😲😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆 yes ,, tum Bhool Bhulaiya dekhi Vidya balan ki..

di aapko bada maza aaraha hai na?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆 yes ,, tum Bhool Bhulaiya dekhi Vidya balan ki..


i am never scared of any movie
english or hindi
but talks of both of you is scaring me

bhoot se dar nahi lagta
sad story se lagta hai
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhu18

i have fear of unknown


di suparpower is ok good but no sad sad no please
you are our good di na ❤️⭐️


di ise dekho how happy he is aur apna sad concept bhul jao
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhu18


i am never scared of any movie
english or hindi
but talks of both of you is scaring me

bhoot se dar nahi lagta
sad story se lagta hai

🤣

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