Originally posted by: Aishuuu.
Part 1
WOW... *heart eyes* Lovely flashbacks. 😳😳😳 I love Maan's personality here! 😳 He is right about being angry after facing such situations... one cannot have that much patience... 😆 He must be so tired of all those girls who try to approach him because of his fame, money or looks and who think they can get the job with ONS and then destroy him. Love the fact about Maan's attitude... he is smart and knows his stuff, his needs are his needs and his business is his business - he is never mixing them. 😉 Usually, some business men are into this kind of things especially because their lives lack something called love or because the office preasure tends to get worse. Until they find it they are gonna kill their time jumping from one bed to another. But I find Maan so different... 😳 He is not taking their "requests" seriously and actually hates them. 😆 As I feel every story is incomplete without Adi, I'm glad we have him here too in the flashbacks and all... 😆 thanks for including him 🤗 his thoughts are gonna be my haven when I read about Maan and his wrong doings and things that make me go mad <3
As expected, Maan's world changes once again when he notices Geet is there. She must be such a different girl naa... different is what makes men crazy 😉 :P They love too much or hate too much... 😆 This whole part was all about his different shades (OMG, as soon as I typed "shades" the "I don't wanna live forever" song came up on my TV playlist, I can't focus 😆 the lyrics😭🥺 Okay... it's done so I can continue writing 😆)... the feelings about the marriage are so strong here, I must say ❤️ I love the whole idea of Maan taking care of Geet and I can totally understand his possessive side... I feel like patting him on the shoulder and tell him that everything is gonna be alright in the end. 😆 the thing about money is also very true... :) I think you managed to convey it with so much power that even the ones who don't usually agree to it will have to ☺️
Okay... keeping this short as I get it baby, okay? 😆😆 relax... 😳 This part covering Maan's guilt is so powerful and touching and you're so right, one would totally get to know Maan better after reading this part ❤️ The mixed feelings are so catchy, interesting and intense and him repenting is the only way to choose right now 💔 You did full justice to this part, oh My!! I feel like reading it again and again... I love how she is the only light in his life the pain and fear of losing her makes his unable to reveal his dark past ❤️ this must be the main reason. This would mean taking away the only light he has... Men's attitude is usually linked to their past or childhood and this reflects in their behaviour with the woman they love... :) would love to write more but not! :))
Wow 😲 Their conversation seems to help a lot in revealing precious information about the past... can't wait to find it out... IF YOU LET ME 😉😳 I need to keep my tissue paper next to me while reading updates baby... I shoud have taken it for this one too, I'm a fool...
Now give me my beloved PW for the second part... 🥺😆
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