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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Congrats for become newly mom
Don't stress yourself
Glad you back

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priyankadwivedi

@priyankadwivedi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Amazing... Welcome back... Maaneet met at the club first time... Maan is getting possessed with her... Any teenage girl will get scared when any strangers take so much advances in the first meet... He guessed her age nd made her blurt out the truth very quickly... Geet got the devil om her back now.. she has the intuition of it...

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shimmer0398

@shimmer0398

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Hey there!!
Prologue was Superb!!
Seems like maan kidnapped Geet! N she knows him already!! So is it fr revenge,,or may b he's obsessed with her! Quite possible!! Right??
Any ways, plz continue soon n accept my buddy request!!
N congratulations for your baby girl!!
Tc!!

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shimmer0398

@shimmer0398

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Part 1
So here it comes,,maan d devil!! I LOVED IT!! Geet was intimidated by his presence!;
Now something that is funny is she came fr YASH n he's nowhere in her thoughts! Bt no worries,,she has her very own MSK!
Plz update nxt part soon!!
Tc!!
P.S: Could u plz update d index

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SillySoni

@SillySoni

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Awesome update
Geet meet maan and she start to fear him.
Update soon

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Lovely update geet and meta are best friends like sisters just not by birth both had exams but now over so decided to go to night club using fake IDs geet though apprehensive but agreed where she bumped into a man who is mesmerize by her but geet is hell scared but she got terrified when he touched her without her permission like he owned her geet could see he was staring at her she got scared and left with Meera

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Nice part..
Geet and meera club gaya hai age chupa ka..
Geet maan sa darr rahi hai uska behaviour sa vi..
Waiting for next part..
Maina ya wala story kuch parts read kia hai sayad