Part 1
I read this update in word, in a beautiful handwriting text... it feels
surreal, ethereal, unbelieably beautiful! :) Are you worrying about the time periods' quick change? Cause Gosh, that was absolutely beautiful and I loved the way you switched from past to present baby. You succeeded in finding a fluid and smooth movement through past and present and making me connect with the characters more and more! ❤️
The fact that Handas and Khuranas were not each other's enemies did go very well with me. While reading, I was actually surprised they are not, but then I remembered - Haila, it is my baby's story, of course it has to be beautiful and unique ya! 😆 - kind of reaction. The trust between the families and the way they always wanted and really helped people made me smile. 😳 A surprise which actually lasted (😆) was finding out about Rano belonging to Khurana family and Priya belonging to Handa family, which is something so cool and I couldn't have thought about it myself! 😆
You genius ☺️😳 So their world changed and reached its true meaning when Maan Singh Khurana was born, as he has the ability to make the royalty last in future too (That makes sense, tch tch! 😉) I couldn't have thought about including a scene where he holds baby Handa in his arms because I'm an idiot but hey - you did it and I felt so surprised because it was so amazing and different! 😳😳😆 Totally got the feelings you wanted to convey here, and it indeed reminds me of royalty and their specific attitude towards every life event, even if I am against their habit of deciding the future of their kids just because that is what
following-the-royal-tradition trend requires. 😉 Makes me so proud of you (Like I wasn't already 😳😆) the fact that you didn't make Maan behave like an totally in love person at a very young age, like it usually and suddenly happens in some shows or stories, the devtas and destiny blah blah dialogues 🥱😆 Instead of that, you actually spoke my mind when you added that they were checking their age every time they thought about his being attracted to her. 🤣 I swear I was laughing my ass off.. that line was everything!! 😆 He started catching some certain feelings for her after his parents engaged him in taking care of her, which is a natural reaction most of the times. 😳 Geet is evolving into a beautiful and submissive
(oh, that's a wrong word right here! 😲 I should have used another one! nooot😆) girl who acknowledges his love, care and thoughts about her. Seems like her mother, on purpose or not, managed to make her accept it since childhood, because she knew what fate holds in store for her. Oh, poor fellows, they got engaged at such an young age and that affected their maturity time, making them take life too seriously even as children! Slowly, she is having more and more space in Maan's heart and he starts thinking she is his for life which is sweet but it won't be an easy journey, my dear. 😳 I have mixed feelings about this but I totally loved the part when Geet goes gaga about the food 😆 I was like You gooo girl, that's the thing you need to focus on while joining such events 🤣 Cause I do the same... 😆😆 I go from laugh to cry, because Maan has to leave in order to become stronger to manage all the businesses and his Geet is crying, cause she is losing her only friend. 🥺 It is so hard for her to accept all these. The forehead kiss was love and got the feels ❤️ "If I don't go, I won't come back"... precious! 😭 Inder's death took not only one but two people away from her cause her mother left too. That is heartbreaking In such situations, usually people don't react that well, Priya was a sweeheart and took care of Geet, but even that has to have some consequences as Geet had several restrictions to deal with. An unpleasant situation has been created when Maan couldn't visit Geet for like two years after her father's death. He did it to focus on his career and Geet started thinking that he doesn't care for her at all. 🥺 The pain of knowing you have no place in someone's life and acknowledging that no matter what you do, they'll never give you their attention hurts 🥺 and she is aware of it! All these made Geet change her behaviour or perspectives about life, she stopped being engaged in pleasing others by bowing to their demands, I loved that. 😳😈 Maan also changed, growing up to be an intelligent young and handsome man (yeah man, Maan, you can be happy now! 😆) Although he was successful, he had too much preasure on his shoulders as every family business had to be handled by him... So he decided to exercise control in all things
including her freedom. He gets calls even from her bodyguards providing him information about whatever she does. Well, Mr Maan Singh Khurana, one person's freedom ends where another person's freedom begins - so don't mess with that. But you won't listen to me 😉 I guess she has all reasons to react like that or pay back Geet's dance part was hot, loved it... you have your own way with words my baby 😳 Alcohol rules, though don't drink too much baby, I need you too naa... 😆😆 That
"sack of potato" part is epic, you rock 🤣🤣 Waiting for the next part which is already up so... the only thing I want is to receive it...
Where's my pw love? 😆
Edited by Aishuuu. - 8 years ago
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