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Posted: 8 years ago

PART-65


Maan eagerly turned the next pages..but..nothing was written , his hands went on the other pages..at the same time his cell phone rang,

He want to ignore that call, but seeing the display of dadi no he took the call,

Maan beta where are you, it is almost 11 , still now you did not come to house,

Seeing her concern,

ha dadima I am coming ..do not worry..just stuck up in important work ..

When maan entered the hall he saw dadi still waiting for him,..

Why you are waiting for me, it is not good for your health dadi..

I am worried for you beta,

Better you sleep ..dadi, please do not stress too much yourself. Where is Vicky ..

When he entered the vicky room, he saw , he was studying some thing..

Vicky ...

Vicky at once got scared seeing maan like this in his room

Uncle ..app..

At once maan felt shattered when he called him like this, but he is reason for all this...what ever he is like this , because of him..he has to blame himself for all these, he has taken away his mother love..which made him to go into shell, now he has gone so far, that, looking so impossible to bring him back from his shell

Vicky why you have not slept till now,

Exams are there , so reading ,

He saw he was reading physics,

He sat on the bed, trying to converse

Do you need any help

Hmm..no need..thank you

He saw Vicky immersed himself in the book.

He do not know when he slept like that,when he woke up he saw Vicky was sleeping on the table on the book, still the light was on ..he saw the time it was almost 2 ..

He quietly took Vicky into his arms, without disturbing, and laid down on the bed, covering with duvet, he too laid down beside him, his hands were on his head patting, he too slowly drifted into sleep

When dadima entered the next day in Vicky room she was surprised seeing maan on the bed, and Vicky legs were on maan legs, and his hands were protectively hugging maan stomach.she quietly left the room with out making the noise .

When maan opened his eyes he saw ..he was in different room, and Vicky was sleeping holding him.a smile crept on his face ,I promise you Vicky I will bring back your mother, I was the one who separated you from your mother.. and I will rectify my mistake..Thinking about geet his thoughts went on the last encounter with her...suddenly he remembered about manasi, she hugging geet, and guy and the other girl..oh god..he was feeling so weird, what relation they are sharing ,

Is geet move ahead in her life, in that case I will never come across into her path if she is happy in her life, but that guy was dancing with other women . Oh god..i have to get these answers...

Maan is that necessary that you have to go Bangalore again,

Yes dadima I have to go, they are some unfinished works, and to know some answers for ...

Maan are you alright .

Ha dadima every thing is fine, if not I will make it,dadi take care

He went into Vicky room, he saw he was as usual with his books

Vicky how much you read, why cannot you go out and spend time with your friends...

Vicky at once was surprised and shocked seeing maan in his room..Yesterday when he came here,I tried to ignore and started to study ,I saw how he slept on my bed..but when I woke up from my bed bed , I realized that he only made me comfortably laid on the bed, but I am not able to understand , why he is doing all these things..

Vicky I am going to Bangalore ...do not how many days it will take , iwant you take care of badi dadi when I am not there...he patted his cheeks .

Hmm..a slight whisper came out from his mouth...

What happened to uncle ..all of a sudden he talking with me like this .

when maan entered the office premises , he saw geet was was getting into adi car , seeing adi..yes adi was the one who was instrumental in geet recruitment here, he will be knowing everything ..

he quietly followed the car, it is not that, he was stalking them but he want to catch hold of adi..he quietly followed their car...

bhai..why you want to take this much pain to drop me to house ..it is not like that geet , so many days over, I want to meet uncle and aunty and I how can I miss manasi.. When you told that she won so many prizes I want to congratulate personally..

Maan was waiting for adi outside..it was almost one hour still there is not sign of adi..oh god what he is doing inside ...at the same time he saw adi was coming out of the house, he was carrying pari in his hands and was talking to manasi..

Adi loves and respect raam and priya a lot, when he came to know that how they supported geet and manasi, at the door step he saw yash was coming from the hospital , along with him was assistant pinky..

Adi even knows yash ..and who is that girl ..he remembered , her the same girl who was there with them on that day in the mall, calling geet as maa,

His eyes went on the manasi, she is studyting in 6 th class..that day principal words echoed in his ears, even she is 10 years, she is very brilliant and got double promotion , this march it will 11 years completing, yes how can he forget ,the day when they separated..

That means...he felt as if earth was slipping from his legs, and he was downing deep inside it..oh god..no I do not want to think like this


Next part -66

Edited by rsusmita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unres

Now its time for maan to med his mistakes ..
For the first he behave nicely eith vicky which shocked vicky alot ..
ND now realizing that maansi is his daughter he felt shattered ..
He felt horrible with the thought how he throw geet out when she was carrying with their baby..
Eager to read how will he rectify his mistakes..
Edited by deepa111 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice
maan talked nicely with Vicky even slept with him
Vicky was confused seeing his uncle's changed
behaviour toward him
maan saw geet going with adi web he went his Bangalore
office he followed them but something struck him that mansi
is going to b 11 in march and he thinking that the time he separated from geet he don't want to think on it but it's reality which he going to face very soon
eagerly
waiting fr next pt
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da terrific update! well written! Maan behaves nice with Vicky! Vicky surprised! Maan sees Geet wid Adi! Maan thinks abt Maansi's age n doesn't want 2 think further! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome!! very nice cant wait to see them together.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update.
Things are becoming clear to Maan and he is regretting his past actions. He is talking nicely with Vicky. Maan is again at Banglore. He realised that Maansi is ten years old. He realised Mansi is his daughter.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yea finally maan is taking steps to find out about the past. And he is starting to realize who mansi is. Yay. Glad he is taking steps towards Vicky too. Poor kid is so confused.
Sad so many lost years with his wife child and Vicky all becau he did not bother to listen to geet. Did not give her one chance to explain


How will she accept him now
Edited by Alamelu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
very nice update at last maan realize Maansi is his daughter.
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Posted: 8 years ago
So finally he knew the truth...vicky was confused with maan..hmm
Wilb waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Vicky is shocked to see Maan this behaviour
Maan want his answer
Can't wait to see them together
Update soon

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