Cinderella Series~ NRI's Cinderella ~~Last part @ 35 on 17-03-2017~ - Page 7

My babyyy 🤗 My heart says I should keep reading, but my mind is giving it some competition. ☺️ ❤️ I am finally posting a comment in this story, after blaming myself so much for not doing it earlier! 😭 I actually can't believe I have to keep a tissue box next to me simply because I'm just so damn happy I'm leaving a comment here 😭 😆 I hope people reading this thread aren't too shocked, but they don't know me so kinda obvious 😆 Well nvm, as long as it reaches to the right person ❤️
PLEASE, you must acknowledge I have my own part in your every thread. 😎 Haayyyee I think my modesty just sank in a draw well but ermmm 🤔 🤣 Okay, back to myself before I start acting pretty crazy right here. I'm going to comment on everything you wrote in this thread, not just the last part so you can finally have the much desired long comment, baby. 😆 Waise, don't you like the word "desire"? I find it so sMexy. 😉 ☺️ If this question bothers you, please ignore it. 😆 You know I'm random... 😉
Another thing I would like to add in this imtroduction is a lil'journey to my own inner thoughts, I mean, things like: "Gosh, she must be reading this and laugh at my stupidity", "She must be thinking: This is not how you do this, Ai baby", "She must blame herself for getting me here in her every thread: When will she get to the first sentence of the update? *yawn*" 🤣 🤔
Ainvayi I'm killing your time but ohhh you don't know how much I love killing it this way 🤣 ☺️ And if I get to the serious points, your know why I do this baby. 😳 ❤️ You deserve much more, love... And trust me, every time I can't manage to comment on an update my heart dies a thousand deaths 😭 Kindly accept my apologies, Miss.
Now, regarding your intro for this story, I'll write some points here. Even I am missing Dimensions ❤️ I remember I was so excited every time you updated that story 😆 I don't know why, I mean... I'm damn excited regarding any of your stories, but this one IDK why felt even more about it 😆 Thank God you started this new one, you don't wanna know whatever your Dimensions epilogue did to me 😡 And you should never find out, seriously 😡 😭 ❤️ Hopefully this one is gonna keep me away from another heartbreak. But O know stories need that too, so just do what you feel like doing, Imma follow you anyway 😆 ❤️
Awww. Why just when you're feeling frustrated? Hayyee, are you being very frustrated lately baby? ☺️ You can show it on me ❤️ 😆 😉
Okies, I should get to the important part aka your updates. 😆 I could easily never finish this intro but I care about your Sunday, love... 😉 😆 but you know right I love you endlessly 🤗 ❤️ And I'm feeling really blessed 😳 Genuinely saying you are simply the best person on this Earth and I love you in so many ways... ❤️ ☺️ And why am I devouring every word of your update? IDK why I'm getting so many feelings when you're around and I tell myself: "Giiirl, control your effin' self" 🤣 must be love, so much loveee...
Accha bas bas don't think I'm silly I'm getting to the point slowly... 😆
So now getting to the point. Which means the UPDATE. Gosh, please help me go through it without changing the topic randomly 😆 God, help me make this comment at least not too boring and if it is too much to ask then make her unable to read it if it happens to be crappy 😆 Waise my kinda "analysis" is not too serious or deep, I mean I can easily change my style and turn into a perfect analyser for you but I'm loving my current way of doing it, with instant reactions and love letters yummy 🤣 ❤️
I don't know how to say it but tell me, why are you so special 😭 I am being genuine here, please help me 😭 I feel like suffocating you with cuddles and loveee 🤗 ❤️ ☺️ Why??? Just why can't I get you out of my mind...
Loving the Prologue. Trust me, when I first came to know about your stories, (Ai) had no idea about the usual IF writing words, things like "SS", "FF, "OS" etc 😆 But thanks to you got to know 'em ❤️ I just can't even tell you how much I love stalking youuu and caring for you and talking about you and loving you and playing with fire with you etc ❤️ ... 😆 Let's say a few things about MSK and MK. I just loved the way you introduced him to the story and it seems so damn interesting, it was awesome baby ❤️ You know, Maan seems to have so many... *Uhm, do I even have to say it?*... shades. He goes by two completely different personalities which is gonna make the story even better, I'm sure 😆 I also have more than one personality 🤣 Or should I call 'em mood swings? 😆 Take care of me naa ❤️
LOL, sorry but after writing that I have this silly instant reaction like: "Why did I start talking about Maan and ended up talking about me and begging you to care?" 😆 🤣 Gosh, I'm impossible. NEXT
I'm enjoying this type of personality and thanks a lot for bringing it into your stories, love Why? Because there is something so special in the way a person reacts or learns how to deal with life or chooses a specific way/path not just because he HAD to but because he wished to ;) We were all born with free will. So it's really interesting to see people's reactions or their own versions. The free will reminds me of Dimensions. It was absolutely beautifully portrayed there too ❤️
Unfortunately, there are times when people can't choose or don't even have a choice so they simply go by whatever fate decides which I think is just so wrong.
Maan keeping his life personal life private is such a nice point and concept <3 I personally loved your "going MK in his personal paradise and MSK in big business world" 😆 You rock, baby 😆 ❤️ Things are getting so amazing and I just read few words. 😆 God help me when cause I still have enough to say and my life has enough to read and reply 🤣
We all can sense his importance as MSK, the businessman. Your use of the word "majestic" clearly indicates his status in the society, even tho his inner self is totally different. *claps* *can't remember the claps emoji code on phone* You're getting it so good, baby, I'm so proud of you ❤️ You know that, right? 😳 🤗 I just wanna... ☺️ 😳 😆 He is a tycoon and I'm damn sure people admire him so much, he got to this stage due to his own efforts 😎 I think this says a lot about him as a person. Usually people change so much when they are becoming rich or start developing themselves. Don't know about man but he seems different... he also gets everything he wants. 😆 Beautiful part baby 😳 ❤️
Awww Geet's intro is so nice, I''m loving it so much ❤️ Guess why? 😳 😆 Ufff, just love the way you write, I can lose myself reading and reading and reading I especially loved the fact about her following or breaking the rules, I swear it was just so good ❤️ Geet seems to be such an awesome person, a smart girl with good values, she has a healthy way of thinking and she dislikes getting in an argument with her crazy step family. 😆 Go girl, don't give a damn to people who hurt you! They deserve no mercy
I'm damn excited about them Maaneet meeting each other and I'm sure you're gonna make it perfect, my love ❤️ 😉
Seriously, you asked so many questions. 😆 I don't know, I guess I don't like predicting things much, I just go with the flow/story 😆 Your beautiful creative mind knows what to do ❤️ And sure baby, just make it the way you want it to be... glad to know there's a happy ending. I need it after Dimensions 😭 I need you 😭 ❤️
Because I'm making three comments in a simple post, the beginning of my comment on the first part won't have an intro as I already wrote it earlier. 😆 You must be so happy thinking you won't have to bear much bakwaas 🤣 😆 Let me clear it for you, "bakwaas" just means my endless blabbering in my comments, not my love letters 😳 ❤️ I love writing them and make you FEEL my love

Awwwie, you started it in such a great way, I'm impressed ❤️ Not that I don't know you're magical 😆 😉 But really love my instant reactions and have to express them. As I mentioned earlier, Geet is just awesome! I'm loving her personality, the way she handles sheeet in her life, I guess she's made of steel 😆 Woman, how do you manage to life with such people? I may be kind and calm but don't you dare release the real storm out of me... Geet seems different and she possesses a lot of patience 😆 You know, there are such people. Actually there are so many different people. See, Geet is fighting her own emotions and has to deal with her crazy step family made of idiot members whi just love using her for their own benefits and she still has a lot of patience to deal with them. And here I am, my own definition of patience means having to wait for you to update your stories or wait for a new episode for a drama. You see, serious stuff 😆
I love how she's still that bubbly person and she didn't lose herself just because of other people's negative influence on her life. They literally use her and treat her like hell, I hope she gets some justice because I already hate her family 😆 It is so important to continue being positive, it is the only way we can get through our problems without bowing to them and their silly reasons. I see, I see, you highlighted the word "step", omg I love you so much baby, completelyy 😆 ❤️
I knew they are gonna ignore the fact that she's studying abroad if that still implies her giving them money. What a bunch of idiots! Thank you for making me hate them, it's your writing power 😆 ❤️ And I simply adore her determination, she just took that damn flight without even letting them know and I was cheering for her while reading it 😳 🤣
Maan's story turns out to be so interesting. 😆 Waiting for the moment he'll beg for her attention 😉 Till then he can enjoy his own personality as much as we all do 😎 🤣 The parallel is simply brilliant... 😆 "Din mein bhaiyya raat mein saiyan" 🤣 🤣
I love your: "And the list goes on"... hayyee, you seem so calm 'bout it 😆 I just wanna spend my lifetime loving you! ❤️
What a way to describe him! I'm loving the way you choose to describe your characters, I'm in awe and love and... can I hug the hell outta you? Cause dammit, you make me begin 😆 Well, thinking about Maan's situation, I'm finding his life pretty messed up. He is such a hero, I tell you! :/ I can't even handle my own boring life with just watching shows and getting angry if I don't get my pizza on time 🤣 Just don't mess with my pizza OKAY
And... what the... yes, yes 🤣 Shades... just write shades and you know I'm in love with the story forever No, like fifty shades darker. 😳
And tbh Same here, can't count the shades 😆 We have too many... I'm in love with your shades baby ❤️ And much more in love with you... 😳 No you, no shades naa? I'm sorry to disappoint everyone who falls in love with you, I know it's too hard to resist, but they shouldn't even dare to touch what's mine! You're just MINE ❤️ and everyone else can admire you in silence... 🤔 got no time to stop them! 🤣 I'm too busy loving you ❤️ 🤗
Now we're getting into statistics too 😆 Can you stop being so sexily adorable every single time? Please :|
And I read "settle" as "Seattle" 🤣 Too much FSOG... but Seattle... 😳 I'm so happy Geet reached her destination. 😳 Hope helps people insuch situations... love the way you described the farewell scenes 🤣 Had so much fun imagining... and what kind of alcohol does she drink? Soju? 😆 What a sexy way of writing a chapter ☺️ Bas karo ☺️
Waiting for Geet to perform like that in front of Maan... but privat mein 🤣
LOL, Maan, LOL man. 😆 Now please don't break Grey's record naa... let him be. 20 is the last number till you meet Geet! And then bye bye to such harkatein 🤣 Waise, "these six months of span(k)", you mean 😆 🤣 Oh yeah, the following sentences are making me so happy. Glad to know he is changing a bit and he is tired of all these, finally... time to appreciate the right person 😎 "nothing different oops!!!" was such a cute and funny part, why are you so damn adorable? 😆 ❤️ baby... Don't mind me calling Your Majesty adorable, you know in which way 😉
Holyyy! This is getting fantabulous with the truth or dare game 🤣 I'm loving the idea... bring it on 🤣 And tell Maan he shouldn't find his life boring anymore after meeting her 😎
Hawww IF 🤬 that word, why?? ☺️☺️😆 I really love her friends, they are leading her to a very good direction. 😉 I guess we just have to wait and watch... oh sorry, read 😆❤️ I love the fact that you chose to make her search for her "prey" and he was just standing there wondering why is she walking towards him 🤣 And TRUST ME, I can feel the... ahem ahem... tension 😳😳❤️ btw them... how do you manage to convey it through words? 🤪EUREKA 🤣🤣" failing miserably he looked how her waist was swaying, how the material was moving along with her body... she came really close to him as to kiss him but stopped keeping just a mere inch distance..." ☺️☺️😳 Hayyyee, what a part!!! I think you just wanna kill me baby 😳😭😆
GOSH you just killed me 🤣🤣 I am already DM whenever I talk to you even about a flower or something, now reading that effin' hot part in your what do you think it does to me? 🤪☺️🤣 Love it sooo sooo much 😈😈 I can't describe that part, but you know me... i loved it to the core and everything just gets better and better 🤣🤣 Seriously her words 😳😳 you don't have to be so good baby it makes me weak in my knees 😆❤️
You made my day babyyy 😆😆 ❤️And uhmmm nobody could see them 😳😳 a part of me wanted everyone to see 😳😆😈
Of course Geet got the much deserved appreciation for her performance. I am also so glad she's such a brave girl. She gives zero f*cks 🤣 I just love the way you finished this update... ☺️ Thank you so much, now I don't think Maan is the only one turned on 🤔 Don't ask PLEASE 🤣
But I guess I need a hug baby... 😳😳 would you? please?? And your famous reply "Aww you need more than hugs ☺️" 😆 I love this update so much... SO so much 🤗❤️ To answer your valuable questions, don't you dare ask how this update was. 😆 How could you think of even asking? I effin' love it like hell 😳😳❤️ You are just so brilliant and I am so lucky. it was like a cherry on top... 😆❤️

Hope PFbiA is not angry with me, got really busy these days😭😭
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Read part 2 too.😳😆
You are playing with my feelings, this is just so not done. ☺️

Maan is finally replying to her in his own way. I guessed this would happen cause he usually can't stay away from all these, upar se Geet has her own charm and she is gonna make him do whatever she wants. 😆 Hayyee, your dialogues rule and I'm melting here! 😳 😳 How can you write this? Like how? Don't you have mercy on me? 😆 This was literally so PERFECT! And even if my comments are mostly the same 😆 your story is different. The way you write every of it is different, the way you play with words is different, the way you portray is different etc. ❤️ Like I can't even find the right words for your updates and here you are writing masterpieces 😆 ❤️ Stop conveying their feelings so well. Cause it reminds me about many things you know, and I have to stay strong and it's pretty hard given the fact that you are doing wonders with your magic wand. 🤣
Phew! ☺️ The kissing part... I genuinely feel you wanna kill me 🤣 If you make me faint you can play the doc and do the CPR for me... 😳 😳
Loved their eye contact! Speaks volumes about those feelings ;) Maan is such a bad boy. Are they the bad boy and the bad girl? Cause she just seduced him and now she's so scared... 😆 I mean, girl... you wanted it 😳 I shouldn't even talk about the lines, the words used, everything was just too hot to handle. I love it so much, it is hard to believe I can love it so damn much Hopefully I'll be alive and play with you 😔 😆
Oh, yeah... forgot it was a dare. 😆 But what to do now? He is completely lost in her and craving for her attention, I think they'll make beautiful babies 🤣 BYE
Oh the begging stuff and all... ☺️ I apologise for loving this so much... 😳 😳 I beg for more, baby... please 😭 Update soon 😭 Nahi toh I'll punish you 🤔 But this is a bad idea as we love punishments so you won't write it faster 😔 🤣
What the hell!?! That whole lamb part was brilliant. :o Sounds like SleepX. 😆 I'm loving that tension btw them, you are conveying everything so well... 😉 Like always, I find myself in awe with the updates. 😆 Gosh, you are a gem! ❤️ Woh bhi mine He kissed her again, and to be honest I just love the alcohol taste part! I know it... it is such a brilliant feeling especially when she drinks Soju :P ☺️ 🤣 The warning was so powerful, poignant, intense, sMexy and everything. You are making everything look so perfect, baby... ❤️
I personally love Geet's reaction to the whole thing, the way she looks so damn affected by everything, the flames literally consuming her. 😳 Hmm, Geet don't wish such things your worlds would be ONE soon 😔 😆 I am feeling sad for her. You know... sometimes you meet someone just for few seconds, maybe a stranger and it changes your life. Be it a man, woman, child or even elders. Sometimes you feel you don't have a good connection with people you know so well, so many years. But you can feel it in those few seconds waiting for the train, or in the airport when your eyes meet for a still, or when you daily pick the same spot in the bus and there's always that lady who chooses to stay in front of you, watching you. And you go like this for days and you wanna ask her why and when you finally do this she tells you that your smile is beautiful and it makes her day better or you reminds her of a dear one. These all are just small things but haunt us forever, even makes you feel a past connection. I think this happens when you just meet a person and you feel that sudden attraction or connection, this happened to both Maan and Geet but why am I even saying that? LOL 😆 Coming back to the update, Maan thinking about Geet part was so ☺️ ☺️ Stop it, just stop it... 😆 Good dialogues 😳 Haahahah the indian girl whi wears modern clothes 🤣 Damn awesome and adorable. So sad those men neglected it, what a lost chance. Geet saying goodbye to her friends was so cute and emotional ❤️
I'm feeling so sad for this girl. Well, any wonder lasts just a bit... I was damn sure they are gonna treat her worse once she comes back. Well, after all, it's Cinderella 😆 And I'm feeling worst about her thinking they started appreciating her, giving her false hopes and making the wounds hurt more. Gosh, they are all so horrible! 🤔
Hmm, loved the update so much ❤️ but you ended it at that point 😭 Though I understand why but still I want more 😆 😭 But I trust you, you'll make it purrrfect ❤️
Thanks for writing these baby! 🤗 Just loveee all these parts and waiting for the next one ❤️ I still think you are a superwoman... 😳 Managing to write, work, have fun, take rest too etc. and you are just mine 🤗 ❤️
Keep up the wonderful work and I'm so glad you are keeping it short for a while... 😆 I'm also tryinng to keep it short so this is not a very big comment for two parts 😆 you need proper rest baby, don't stress too much, eat well, have fun, take care of you (nooo, this is actually what I should do, my love ❤️)
Love you so much baby 🤗 ❤️

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Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

Hope PFbiA is not angry with me, got really busy these days😭😭
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yes... very busy 😭😭😭 but i need to work to come closer to you... saat samunder bahut durr ho gaya naa 🤗

Originally posted by: Soju.

yes... very busy 😭😭😭 but i need to work to come closer to you... saat samunder bahut durr ho gaya naa 🤗

Awww, I was talking about you being angry with me cause I'm busy and couldn't comment 😳😆🤗 about you toh I already know you're very busy b(a)ee 😆

you need to work and I- I just ne... need... 😡🥺😆

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

Awww, I was talking about you being angry with me cause I'm busy and couldn't comment 😳😆🤗 about you toh I already know you're very busy b(a)ee 😆

you need to work and I- I just ne... need... 😡🥺😆

iss baar ulta kaise ho gaya 😆

Originally posted by: Soju.

iss baar ulta kaise ho gaya 😆

Kabhi kabhi I accept defeat 😉😆

Don't understand why she live with them
She has a job then why bearing insult
Well msk came to India for hunt his lamb
Did he found about her

How maan will find
her
It's getting really interesting
Thanks for pw