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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
Omg I can understand geet situation here poor fellow embarrassing moment for any girl or women if it's happened
Maan sense work
Pinky wow Kiya dare mara
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
Lovely update geet was making the little girl mahi give courage as she was suffering from illness but seeing their cute bonding maan had a smile on his face but alot of questions he was angry as she never express her feelings but still he loves her but wonders whether she ever lived him or not maan lost in thoughts how they gone to marine drive and geet got her first mc how embarrassing it was for both of them maan took care of her and even called doc but now he is standing all alone in the same place lonely without her
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
wonderful update
awww geet stuck in awkward situation
maan is angry on her that how can she be careless
but its her first time
maan arrange things for her
waiting for next
cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Awesome Chapter

Maan had followed Geet to the hospital now he wonders if the little girl is Geet's daughter but immediately he shruggs that thought
Maan goes to the sea side and remembers when the class had a trip to the very place and Geet's condition on that day
Maan was very concerned for her and helped her a lot too
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Posted: 7 years ago
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oh dear nice story i just got time today itself and read all part in one go . so sorry not able to get time and send reply on time
its nice story past and present together made story more curious . love the way you write mahi always and thanks for pm
waiting for next part pm me dont forgot
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Such a cute starting of this story
Curious to know how it took such a sad turn..

Loved it buddy😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
thanks 4 da pm! read and commented already! waiting 4 next
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
very nice story
love to read more and more
maan follow geet and saw little mahi in hospital
good count soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
Waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
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part 5


Past ...

Pinky who angry on maan now cool down with his work for geet and she say ..sir 1 glass of milk .ok for her .

Maan make Yuck face with name of milk and he reply on name of Milk yuck milk kon pita hai, is she really need milk he again ask pinky ...pinky roll her eyes on maan q ...Yes sir she like or say Love milk so please .

Maan nodded and went canteen side to ...arrange milk for her ...after half hour all reach to bus side where all waiting for them ...geet change into other spare school uniform itself so no one question them.

Maan once look to geet side she looking worn out ...she need rest now ..within half hour all reach to school premise ...maan ask to stop geet N pinky thou both girl denying ...but maan one glare and they shut their mouth after that incidence geet not once look maan eyes she feel extremely shy thou she first angry on him but after his care and all her anger get melt but now she feel embarrassed to meet his eyes. All student one by one went out from school premises now only maan and both girl are there.

Maan stop one auto ..and trio settle in auto pinky say the address which is near to school ...all is quite in traveling pinky is in between maaneet ..geet finger on her scarf her all nervousness facing that cloth where her scarf get twisted by her finger. Maan smile on her action but make serious face.

Pinky make stop near one old but beautiful bungalow ...maan amaze bungalow in city like Mumbai ... he don't come out from auto he don't want to anyone gossip on them he once look to geet he so much want that she once look to him.. but alas he is not luck for that day ...he turn to pinky and say TC we will meet on Monday both girl nodded and maan took auto to his ..friend house which is his thikana (house ) for two days. He have to search a room for him till Monday he going to spend weekend on this work only ..waise bhi tom Rakesh ( maan friend ) going to show him some place Let see .

After half hour taking dinner out self itself maan reach to rakesh house and bid GN to his friend and slip to his temporary room ..after fresh up he lie on bed and Miss handa face start to come in his closed eyes .

Till now he get that his heart lost in Miss Handa...she stole his heart jo uske collage ki girl nahi kar sakhi she done it in one moment .he take deep breath on today disaster he mummer hope so Monday she will look to me she don't look to me once after that disaster ...main bhi thoda jada harsh ho gaya but situation ashi thi I cannot stand on her insult koi dekh leta to uff ...all encounter with miss geet start to come in his mind like a Pitcher ...movie

A sleep run away from maan eyes ...he at last he seat on bed and took out his small transistor (radio) and start it with slow voice ...and with coincidence his fev song plying on it ...jo uske heart ke halat se match ho raha tha

Ajj Din Chadheya Lyrics

Ajj din chadheya

Tere rang varga

Ajj din chadheya

Tere rang varga

Phul sa hai khila aaj din

Rabba mere din yeh na dhale

Woh jo mujhe khwab mein mile

Use tu lagade ab gale

Tenu dil da vaasta

Maan remind geet I front of collage praying to god ...her innocent face with scare

Rabba aaya dar digaar ke

Sara jahan chod chaad ke

Mere sapne sawar de

Tenu dil da vasta

Ajj din chadheya

Tere rang varga

From that day she alwyes in my dream ...ful week she is coming my dream and jab bhi main usko gale lagne jata hu she become gaayab ...

Baksha gunaho ko

Sun ke duwao ko

Rabba pyaar hai

Tune sab ko hi de diya

Meri bhi aahon ko

Sun le duwao ko

Mujhko woh dila maine jisko hai dil diya

God how I am going to control my heart around her ...

Aasmaan pe aasmaan uske de itna bata

Woh jo mujhko dekh ke hase

Pana chahun raat din jise

Rabba mere naam kar use

Tenu dil da vasta

Did u send my massage to her ...that one heart beating for her one glimpse maan ask to sky maybe she also watching the sky this time .

Ajj din chadheya

Tere rang varga

(Maanga jo mera hai

Jaata kya tera hai

Maine kaun si tujhse jannat maang li

Kaisa khuda hai tu

Bas naam ka hai tu

Rabba jo teri itni si bhi na chali) 2

Rabba aaya dar digaar ke

Sara jahan chod chad ke

Mere sapne sawar de

Tenu dil da vasta

Ajj din chadheya

Tere rang varga

Ajj din chadheya

Tere rang vargaaa...

Ajj din chadheya

Tere rang vargaaa..

Din chadheyaaa..

Maan eyes closed after its get tired ...early morning maan wake up with alarm sound ...he wake up and mummer ...main usko dekh sakhunga but when his eyes land on calendar his face turn dull today is holiday for collage cahlo maan beta there no chance to meet her today apko ghar dhoondna hai ajj so u can shift there . he took bath and come out there rahul also ready after taking BF rahul and he went to see a room for him ...

Till noon they don't get any proper place kahi pe pani ka proble to kahi not good locality he need room near collage. Both friend seat for lunch ...

Maan - kya rahul tumara itna bada shehr(city) hai and no one room for me ...

Rahul - ha ha MSK main to ye city kharidi hui hai na jo tuze jath se room available kar de ...

And both laugh on their talk ...

Maan - but now what ..kya karna hai ...

Rahul chalo ye last wala dekh lete ...than stop karte kal dekh lage ,,,maan nodded and after finishing food both start to travel to that property and after 10 min maan heart start ...beat in full speed they are on way of handa house ...

Maan - ye kaha jaa rahe hai hum rahul

Rahul look to page and say koi Handa villa hai ...maan dekh lete hai. Maan feel like do bhangda on that moment but he somehow control his emotions ..and make blank face so rahul don't get any doubt...

Both come to handa villa where they get welcome by one old lady she is looking strick maan heart making noise anything poor boy scared kisne sun liya to and his eyes searching only that face ... One glimpse of that face

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