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Posted: 7 years ago
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very intrrsted syory
but sady sady
thanx for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hello, thanks 4 da pm! but read n commented already!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Waiting now for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great one
Maan Geet meet and Geet will work with Maan
Meera care for Maan
Who is the girl.
Update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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my guess geet married due to mahi .?
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part 4


A thought come to maan mind is she geet daughter no no next moment he shuu that thought...

Geet - apni choti ma se itni khapa ho kya mahi...and next moment that girl hug geet and cry ...they again cut my hair , u know I love my hair than why they cut my hair choti ma ...she sobbed in geet hug .

Geet called mahi beta look at me ...but mahi denied ..geet say u r my brave girl na than look at me...mahi somehow look to geet ...

Geet first clean her tear than kiss on forehead and say You are my brave fighter girl ...tumko thik hona hai na poori tarha se so we have to fight with this illness beta ...thodi din more than all going to well ..mahi. than hum log bahot baal badenge tumre like Rupnazal .

Mahi once look to geet with teary eyes and innocently ask sachi ...

Geet pinch her nose and say muchi ...

Mahi make irritating face with geet pinch she don't like anyone touch her nose and geet know about it geet again pinch her nose ...

Mahi cried Miss Singh don't or ...I will make u ...with that she forward her hand to geet side and poor geet reply in hurry and fear no no .. geet is so sensitive for Tickle.

And next moment feel with open laugh of mahi and after making pout full face geet also joined her in laugh...

A soft smile appear on maan who lesion all things with standing near door of ward he have so many thought and q in his mind about geet and this small girl...mahi which big puzzle for him.

Thou he is angry and hurt with geet silence she never express her feeling to him ..is she really love him or it's his assumption. He is one who love her madly and she don't have any feeling for her ...he feel like his brain burst any moment ...he once look to both girl and take slow step outside of hospital.

Maan come out from hospital and his legs took him to his fev place of Mumbai Marin drive ...jo hamesha uske dil ko sukoon deta tha jo uski sabsi pyaari yaade ...sanjyo hua tha ...

Maan come near wall around sea he stand on it and look big wave of sea ...which is coming with force and lash on shore ...edge ..some drops falling on maan face ..which calming maan heart kuch bunde working as medicine on his heart...same time sky start hide maan tear which is falling from his eyes ...uske sare zakham fhir se hare ho gaye they uske wappas anne ke baad ...pata nahi ye zakham kabhi thik hoge bhi ya nahi...his heart and eyes both not lessoning to him and crying on agony and helpless of life ...

Maan heart start to went in past ...

Second day of collage and his class ( geet class ) have visit to marine drive ...and maan with them on that visit. Maan with 30 student all enjoying it like trip but don't know why geet is restless so pinky both girl are away from all other student ...with tense face...

Maan feel something odd on both girl. They are just 17 age of girl not so mature ..maan want to erased that fear on geet face.

Maan make other student busy with other work and he come near pinky and geet ...

Maan - hu why u both away from class ,we are in public place u both have to be with class ..

Pinky try to say something to maan but geet hold her hand and pinky turn quite.

Maan get that geet don't want to share with him..but geet tear making him restless ...

Maan - please miss handa u can share your problem with me ..we will serch any way for it...

Geet nodded in no ...just than someone call pinky and pinky ask geet with eyes and geet nodded than pinky went to that student side ..

Maan get confused with all happening...why she reacting like this its puzzle for him. he want to help her but she is not ready to took help.

Geet with bending head crushing her duppata with her finger.

Maan till now get one things its something girly things and she is shy to express it ..just than maan phone start to ring and he went little bit away from geet now both have their back to each other.

Maan finish his call and turn to geet side ...he saw geet back side and he found something red on her dress and his eyes winded in shock ...

He feel so tense ...he mummer what the hell how she could be so careless..girls to alert rahati hai ye issue main than how she..maan drench in sweat with mere thought what if anyone saw her like this. He feel shy as well embarrass also now its struck him why she is not sharing her problem with him. He caressed his forehead with his finger ,what should he do now ...how could he will tackle such situation without hurting her .

Other side geet is verge of crying now ...she get her First Mc like this usko aana hi nahi chiye tha yaha ..Babaji some tear fall on her cheek...

Just than maan saw some student start to come geet side geet leg get jam on their itself she feel like she will die with shame itself . she do anything wrong and before they approached to her maan stand between them and say I have some work with miss Handa n miss manchanda ...so all of you go and seat in bus . all nodded with maan order.

Pinky took deep breath when all went from there but Sir is still there she once look to geet side and found crying and shaking geet there itself.

Maan also turn same time when he heard cry of geet ...he lost his patience now and scold geet in slow yet firm voice.

Miss Handa how could be u r so careless don't you have s ense ,protection lene ka smajtha nahi kya u are not small girl . geet once give teary gaze to maan she get hurt with maan word ..

Geet hurt gaze make maan guilty why he scold her like this .. he want to say something but next moment pinky cut him

Pinky - no sir she is not small girl but it's her first time that's why stuck in such problem else my friend is not CARELESS person . thou pinky feel embarrassed to say such things to sir but when something come with geet she cannot be tolerated that.

Maan eyes turn big with shock .he mummer sorry ...he took deep breath and softly ask ...do u have any I mean spare dress and ...he ask it while looking to other side ...

I brought all that things only we need place to change it ..

Maan think for than remove his coat and give to geet so she properly cover herself ...and he took both girl to ...rest room side which occupied for teaching staff ..now there is no one so they use that place .

After 20 min both girl come out from rest room geet looking now ok but her eyes so swollen with continued cry and face dull with all event and pain. She is not looking to maan side.

Till than maan called doctor lady doctor of institution...lady doctor talk with geet in alone ..maan is restless outside ...when doc come out he once look to doc its not easy for him ..also and he don't want that anyone pointed to geet in any sense.

Doc get impress with maan sense of situation he us quite young as teache but he is mature person

Doc say she is ok ...bas thoda kamjori hai but its natural she can continued this trip ...bas thodi seham gai with sudden things .

Maan took deep breath n say bye to doc and call both girl outside .

He ask to pinky is she need anything for eat ..

Pinky who angry on maan now cool down with his work for geet and she say ..sir 1 glass of milk .ok for her .

Maan make Yuck face with name of milk and he reply Milk yuck .

Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update di
Loved it!!
Mahi was sad that she lost her beautiful hairs due to cancer but Geet encouraged her and turned gloomy atmosphere into light one by distracting Mahi. Maan was admiring Geet and mahi's bond and at same time had his own queries related to them , which was muddling up his thoughts.
Maan reached his favorite place to console his heart and thoughts. He was reminiscing his past . Geet and pinky were tensed and on maan's approach Geet gestured pinky to hide the situation from Maan. Maan got to know abt geet's situation and yelled at geet for her carelessness but pinky cleared air about the matter. Maaneet were embrassed in whole fiasco but Maan being matured person helped Geet out in her problem.
Nice pics :))
Thanks for the pm di !
Will be waiting for the next update
:))

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Emotional update dear, who is mahi how she is related to geet 😕
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely emotional update! well written! Geet assures Mahi! Maan watches them! so Maan gets 2 know about Geet n confronts her! update soon

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