Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
Part 30
the phone convo was superb and realistic..Maan in much awkward, nervous and a little defensive situation considering the overprotective family of Geet...hahaha Tito..had it been in his hands, Tito would have jumped through the phone and threatened Maan by pulling his collar, asking what Maan did to his sister that she has fallen ill.
Maan is of caring nature by birth, and so after knowing her family's concern, he again went back to a guilt trip feeling ashamed of not taking her care property...but then Pammi acted wisely uplifting his spirits too..hope Geet knows and remebers how he was worried and had taken care of her during the illness..
Thank you for the vote of realism, i know this stroy; actually to be frank most of my stories are a bit out there. So sounding realistic is a nice change. Tito as a little fighter😆
Few you think the same, i was reading chapter 9 the other day and he didn't come across like that and then I read the next chapter, and I was in a frenzy thinking he'll make no sense coz it wasn't making sense to me either, as in the change in his persona that is. Hoping he comes across well, a little stupid maybe but good natured.
Geet remembering, I'll note that down
Thank Flame (you know i love your analysis ❤️)
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