Broken Mirror-Love That Make You INSANE-Pt 8/CS-Pg 44/49, 1/6/2017 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Strong geet in this story
I think its going different now
Waiting for next update dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Nice update
Waiting for next update. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2




Maan rushed to hospital after giving her punishment that she deserved he thought...



In Reception




Maan : Where is my Sister



Receptionist : Sir your name ?


Maan : Maan Singh Khurana... God damn it ...which ward in Anvesha Khurana
he bark at receptionist, who is now scared to see him in so much anger. She told him that direction he rushed.


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Maan : Dadi Annie kaise hai Dadi ?
His voice is broken



Dadi saw him broken, wiped her tears she turn again to that ward where doctors is treating her ,,,seeing her through the glasses. Maan also look at his baby sister who is surrounded with machine, doctors trying hard to back her life but atlast she slipped into coma make Maan & Dadi broke down completely... he hugged Dadi sideway where she is weeping continuously so as he . His muscle clinched whenever he remember for whom his baby sister is here in this condition




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Maan's farmhouse




Geet come conscious, after his devilish torture she turned unconscious, looking here and there didn't traces that Devil so slowly tried to stood up on her legs but fall down instantly because of her soreness between her legs, somehow she stoot up and come out from his dark farmhouse(it's only for her dark house where she lost everything)



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In Handa Mansion




Slap ...Slap ...Slap





Kept slapping his own daughter not caring her condition...her whole body is trembling with pain but seems no one cares, she stood there like a statue where he slapped her not once but 3 times that make her lips cut and also left his finger Mark's on her soft cheeks



Grabbed her hairs in his tight fist pulled that behind




Mohindar : Kaha thi ...kiske sath muhh kala kar rahi thi ?




But she helplessly nodded no , then turn to look at her mother who is also turning her head like she is also questing her where she is whole night.




Mohindar : Aur kitna ehsaan karegi humpe ...bolll.
still she is standing like a numb state of mind didn't feel like to telling or reply to anyone ,anything...Grabbed her hand Pushed her in one of dark room and locked the door...




Mohindar : Khabardar agar kisine bhi yeh darwaja khola , toh mujhse buda koi nahi hoga
warned everyone he left from there. Ranu Handa , and Arjun Handa looking at the closed door sometime then they also left from there




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It's Dark room




Geet sitting on the ground and laughing hysterically like mocking herself...




Geet : Dekha Geet sabpe ankh band karke bhorosa karne ka natija kya hota hai...aab bhugat... waise I was wondering kis GUNAAH ki itni badi SAAZA mill rahi hai mujhe...Apne paribaar se pyar karne ki ya Maan se dill lagane ki...
then again laughing hysterically, if anyone see her in this condition they will surely think she turn mad.




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After 3years



Khurana Mansion



Maan : Please Mishti thoda sa khaa lo...apne Maan k hatho se
he forward one bites front of her lips nodded his head if saying accept that , but she staring at him like seeing him for the first time...then divert her gaza from Maan to her doll with whom she was playing, combing that doll hair where Maan eyes filled with tears seeing his destruction that he did with his own hands...



MG
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Amazing concept. Looks like Arjun Handa is the reason for Anvesha' state and Maan is taking revenge on Geet. But the next chapter shows he came to know about Geet' innosence and is take care of her but she has lost her mental stability
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
hi thanks 4 da pm n 4 reposting! superb banner! wonderful updates, well written! Maan used Geet! she is livid! Maan took revenge! Geet's dad angry n locks her up! Annie is serious! years later Maan regrets wt he did! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
both update are awsm... in first update... i thought maan ditch geet like wanted to take revenge... after some time... maan fir geet ko lkr aata hai... or usse punish karta hai... why??? or geet v yr so bold... i love her character...
... geet ki family kaisi hai??? usski conditions dekhkar v... usse pehle thappad marr dia... or geet v pagalpnti dikha rhi hai... maan ki behen ko kya hua????
or last geet hai kya woh? jo baby jaisa behave kar rhi hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Fabulous one
I think Arjun ki wajah se Anvesha hospital mein hai
Maan taking revenge from Geet
Geet lost her mental stability

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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
part 1 superb
yes this geet very strong

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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Nice update
Maan did this bec
He think Annie condition is bec of Arjun
Is this fool is Geet whom Maan is making her eat
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Thanks for pm. But i m confused u were writting something else now what is this. Same title but different story. Do it has some connection with last one or it is season two.

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