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Heyooo my baby 😳 ❤️
And so so sorry for unresing this now, I'm so late... 😭
Thanks for the comment, but you are the most beautiful! 😳 ❤️
I love your idea of writing an OS after that contest ❤️ It's amazing how many wonderful things you can do when you are bored baby... ☺️ 😆 And of course the fact that I found about it firsttt You know I always go mad thinking about this... 😆 my rights ☺️ 😆 😳 Your OS is not just suitable, it is absolutely fabulous and perfect, just like you 🤗 I kept re-reading it even if I didn't unres... 😆 This is how I keep you with me even when you are busy ❤️ I need you and want you every time... 😳 So reading your stories always makes me happy and hopeful whenever I miss you (always ❤️)... I feel like reading your thoughts and ideas are like talking to you... though you know I love it the most when it happens live 🤣 I guess I need to get used to only re-read your stories in the following months, given the fact that you'll not be here... 😭 **Pheew Aishu stay strong**
But baby you are always in my ❤️ ... 🤗 🤗
Okie, coming to the story... you already know I'm gonna start pouring my repetitive thoughts over here... 😆 Kya hai naa... my already short vocabulary becomes shorter in your presence 🤣 I love the entire OS, it was just so so perfect... 😳
I really can't go and study before unresing here, the thoughts are gonna haunt me and I'll not be able to study 😆
Okieeezzz **silly me** **gets back to the story**
Maan's ringtone is absolutely adorable 😆 even in this gesture I find him being very much in love with her and caring for her... the way you always introduce this kind of details in your stories... you know it always gets me ❤️ And poor him, after bearing her demanding attitude, he is still trying to keep calm and follows her words instantly, without even questioning about 'em 😆 Sometimes some people can be very demanding and irritating... hai naa 😳 But they have the right 😆 😉 Love how you made him run like a puppy towards her and fulfilling her every wish... yummm 🤗
And OMG I absolutely love this part 🤣 Maan becoming Geet and Geet becoming Maan... these kinda games are so needed and I'm sure they'll never get tired of it 😉 😆 And I know deep inside his... soul... Maan knows it and loves her bossy side 🤣 ☺️ Okay I'm getting into something else without even realising... 😆 I guess because I'm replying to you... 😳 I blame you baby 😆
Geet is so badass here, she got enough atitude to make him speechless and ready to give her everything she wants. 😎 Damn I'm gonna miss this so much these months 🥺 Cause you are the only one who can convey these feelings to me... 😳 ❤️ Youuu and your work will be badly missed! [->] Imma move on the story again before disappearing into a puddle of tears... 😭
The display of emotions, their attitude, the way they choose the react are some of the most amazing things ❤️ I absolutely adore how easily you can make me go through all these emotions and still have enough courage to comment on your stories... 😆 😳 This is HUGE for me! Can't thank you enough my love ☺️
Their play got me like ❤️ __ ❤️ so hooked! Loving this attitude of him accepting her play and totally getting into it 😳 both sweet and sMexy at the same time, you can feel their attraction to each other just reading these lines... how do you even manage to depict 'em with such intensity? Omg I am dying at the fact that they really got into their roles like ROFL you are killing meee!!!🤣 😆 I am already imagining all these stuff... borrowing each other's attitude is too hot to handle 😳 😉 And not even just here in this game, when in love people do start using each other's words or common expressions and you don't even know when did you start using 'em so much... it's like you accepted that person with everything she has and you start behaving like her ❤️ 😆 Maybe you remember something reading this about using each other's words... 😳 lalaaa ❤️
Yuuup so finally the file comes in the way 😉 😆 I am so loving this part ❤️ I am loving the description and the power your words give to the whole story ❤️ ☺️ And the fact that the file has love quotes and promises... in two word Love Letters... is just choo cute 😳 😆 "The deal is yours"... so many feelsss 😳 I guess I am a bit too excited re-reading this and commenting 😆 This whole scene is absolute PERFECTION! ❤️ I am totally overwhelmed... it makes my heart jump with joy... 😳 after being broken into million pieces 🥺 You did it again... 🤗 I don't even know how did you write this masterpiece while getting bored, love? Hadd hai 😆 Then please keep getting bored cause damn, you just nailed everything completely! ❤️ I love you so much...
The table strikers again 🤣 😉 I don't know why, but it keeps getting better and better You are just so talented... and this story totally proves it ❤️ ❤️ I am in aweee...
This dining scene is absolutely adorable, my baby... 😳 This proves he is ready to accept everything for her and also the fact that Geet won't let him suffer for long 😳 She knows when she should end this pain... 😉 😆 I am having a big big smile on my face right now jaan... 🤗 thank you so much for everything 😳 ❤️
Geet's words towards him are so touching and true ❤️
And what theee *__* are you planning to kill me or something?? Just read this part... I am dying ☺️ It's just too perfect - so perfect that imagining it feels like spoiling it actually 😆 Too magical ❤️ Awww totally overwhelmed due to the way you chose to write Geet's POV... ☺️ This is totally your touch on every single word she says... 😆 ❤️ And I can't stop smiling... 😳 😳 😳 cuteness overload... I am totally lovin' it ❤️ your balloon and hug idea... I am still in my dreamland... You love, come here 😳 😆 🤗 Your magic wand keeps touching my heart with every single line you post... 😳 ILYSM ❤️
Pheewww and I thought that was the hottest part ☺️ ☺️ I was so wrong dammit 🤣 You're driving me crazy with this upcoming kiss scene... :| I am speechless... ☺️ But you know I'm blushing and that means a lot 😳 😆 There's something so powerful and intense in the way you described this scene ❤️ I can see the sparks btw them... and of course you and me... can you feel them too? <3
And the following lines toh I can't even describe... ☺️ ☺️ looove looove looove it esp cause they always feel it is the first time 😉 😆 My heart simply skipped a beat... and you are the reason thanks for killing me... yet again, love 😳 😳
I don't know if I should cry or laugh... 😆 you surely don't want me to cry too much naa 😭 Love how they got back into themselves... Such a beautiful, poignant, sweet, playful story. You call this childish, I call it hot and adorable... such a playful mind 😳
Suspense till the end of the OS... my heart feels genuine appreciation for this masterpiece and you! <3 🤗 I don't know if you're gonna read this comment... :) but thank you sooo much for this baby! A bit emotional right now... got really attached to this OS... wished it never came to an end 😭 Please continue getting bored, love 😳 I feel like cuddling you to no end right now ☺️ 😆 🤗 And sorry if I ever disturb your creative beautiful mind ❤️ Love you ttmab baby...
Edited by Aishuuu. - 8 years ago
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