*Raj is summoned in a room* *He knocks and walks in... * There's an old man sitting on a rocking chair he asks him to sit down and says... Raj bete... ab tum baap banne wale ho... bollywood gane chodo aur ye rhymes yaad karo kaam ayengi bete... kaam ayengi...
*Character's*
Raj - the Hooman
Old man - Mr. Ashok Kumar {Dadamoni (Mr. India wale)}
For this chapter... *Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho... Kya gum hai jisko chippa rahe hoo*
Geet asked Ana & Kabir to taste the cookies... Why didn't she do that on her own? She judged her Raj and Pooja's relationship and failed miserably, now she fears to be judgemental... As it distanced her from her dear ones... she is afraid of losing her new friends... It reflects in her personality that she is insecure, shaken, and need those *hugs* time and again...
Cookies were a flop show... but the events that followed left me in tears. She is lonely... Every morning waking up to this deafening silence. What has gone and done to endure such a life? I don't think there's anything that can fill a black hole... Please do something for her...
However, all praises to you girl... The way you have penned her loss, her pain, her grief so effortlessly without special mentions *Kudos*
How about his mom giving him *dhandi kheer*, it's not that ki a materiliastic thing can bring anyone back or can fill someone's place... but it can make a person feel that someone's there...
I can relate with Geet's happiness over that keyring... He observes everything around her so that he can hear the unsaid... understand...
P.S. I went through the prolong again... As if I lost the track of it... Now I can frame a picture and *mujhe ye picture bilkul pasand nahi ayi...* 😒
Thank you.
Edited by soch_ti - 8 years ago
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