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alekhika

@alekhika20

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Superb part,cont soon
Geet comes to know that the mystery man is maan but he hadn't seen geet face.
Waiting 4 nxt part.

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Liked the update. Loved Rano scolding her daugthers. Whats the unknown connection that is working here. Geet not able to stop herself from followingher and Maan looking into her eyes finding them familiar. waiting for next.

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#153

superb update n very emotionally

maan has bad past

hate his father how could his do this to maan

good that mohan brought him here

feeling bad for him

so much pain n agony

what has happen to him that made him like this

who is maan waiting for

continue plz

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#154

superb update

maan ask geet not to stalk any stranger in deserted place

geet feel safe around him n think how will she help him

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Awesome update
Geet reached home aur usse apni mom se apni carelessness ki wajah se daat padti hai her sister is enjoying her plight
Loved the family's bonding
Geet next day phir maan ka picha karti hai but maan ko pata chal jaata hai ki koi uska picha kar raha hai and he caught her he gave her advice ki iss tarah se usse kisi ajnabi ka picha nahi karna chahiye aur wo usse road tak drop karke aata hai
But geet is determined ki abb wo uski iss halat ki wajah ka pata jarur laga kar rahegi
Beautifully written
Loved it

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#156

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! well written! Geet's mom speaks 2 her! Geet wants 2 b independent! Geet follows Maan! they speak! he advises n helps her! she gets 2 knw his name! bt he didn't see her face!

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Geet is feeling some unknown connection with stranger...

she is so much engrossed in stranger's thoughts that she don't even realize she reached her home...then also she is not behaving normal and her father sensed her aloofness...

next day again she went to the shop to search for him and he was there...she followed him and he sensed somebody following him and he caught her...

but her eyes are giving him sense of deja-vu...

hope Geet is the girl whom Maan is searching...but Geet don't remember him...were they known each other in childhood or not... if yes then Geet must have forgot him in all these years...may be she don't know that there is one deewana of hers because he just oogled her from far only...

very interesting...

thanx for pm...

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sonu22

@sonu22

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#158

geet got good lecture from rano and after that raaji also got one. geet is in her own world and everybody is seeing it. geet follows maan in bushes and maan caught her and tormented by her eyes. geet doesntreveal her identity. maan behaved like a gentleman. lets see what geet do next...