Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 69

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 53

Riveting update.... eloquently written

Geet's turmoil is understandable....

the house brings back all the bitter memories and suffering she endured

glad that Maan is with her

Mohinder is shocked seeing Maan there and that Geet and Maan are friends

of cos Geet intervened

well Mohinder wanted to speak to Geet alone

great that Geet insisted that Maan accompany her as he is support

She showed Mohinder the mirror

Geet had valid points

its indeed one difficult convo

sad that Mohinder was never there for Geet when she needed him

he was never a father to Geet

hate how her mom treated her

oh Mohinder tries to explain Rano's behavior

nothing justifies what she did to Geet

Mohinder is also to blame

at least he acknowledged this

Geet's question to Mohinder is reasonable

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 54

Heart wrenching update.... eloquently written

Geet's outburst was expected

of cos Mohinder has no answers

not only Geet, but Yash and Brij also suffered as well Mohinder's inactions

Loved that Geet's brothers were her always there for her

they were her father............

glad that Maan consoled and calms Geet

hate that Mohindner was too absorbed in his career and failed to take care of his family

he has indeed selfish

he conceded he was wrong but Geet was correct that its too late....

Yash has died and Brij sacrificed his love.....

well Mohinder is now alone

of cos its difficult to speak about herself

can understand that Geet cannot forgive her dad

its not easy as she has gone through so much

at least she is willing to try

Geet wants to be alone with Maan

the song was so apt

loved that is a pillar of strength and support for Geet

not surprised that he wipes her tears

she feels loved and cared for

Maan realises how Geet suffered at that house

glad that he told her to let go, he is there for her and she is safe with him

she cries her heart out

Geet wants to forget everything.... and wants to get intimate with Maan

he was right that its now the correct way to deal with things

so he wants their next time to be when she loves him as well

sad that Geet feels she does not have the capability to love

Maan's thoughts are reasonable

if she rejected her, she would be shattered

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 55

Pleasant update.... wonderfully written

Maan indeed cares and loves Geet so much

his actions and his words reflect that

he does not want this to get ruin their friendship

of cos she assures him

despite this, Maan asks tell she can stop him anytime

liked that he then yet again asks if she is sure

Geet wants to be in control

Maan allows her.....

passionate moments

Maan's thoughts well poytrayed

well his soul was not in what happened as they did not make love

for Geet it was an escape

there was no love from her side as she does not love him

Maan was unhappy but Geet was absorbed in her pain to notice this

Adore the bond between Geet and Pari

insightful convo

at least Geet has realised that her past has shaped her and her thinking

she is indeed taking baby steps to let go

as expected she confronts Pari about Rehaan

seems like Pari does not wants to accept that Rehaan loves her

Geet was correct that a person can change

loved her advice to Pari

hope Pari heeds it

Geet feels she and Maan are on the same page about relationship

but are they?

waiting the day that Geet realises she is falling in love with Maan

Pari's comment about communication is understandable


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Geet father first not comfortable talking Geet in presence of Maan but Geet insist so he start telling her about rano background her life with her parents y she hate her actually she was jealous from her own daughter she was mentally sick but Geet is right it's not excuse she forgive him being not their for her y not he protect her or take care of her y he put burden on his son's they too not have normal child hood after Geet came in their life

Geet left from their with Maan and want to forget her pain she made Maan to love her she used him to distract her self from pain but she didn't realize she hurt Maan he can't deny her but he want this relationship when both fall in love

He knows in this situation if he deny her she feel as insult or rejection and he not ready to sacrifice his friendship

Hope Geet realize her mistake soon hope pari guide her

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Posted: 3 years ago

Welcome back! I hope you’re feeling better now 🤗

I am loving Maan more and more with each passing update but I am disliking Geet right now. She’s just using him and taking him for granted at this point which is quite selfish of her 😔

She can’t just expect him to be there forever whereas she isn’t putting in anything into their relationship!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for updating


Part 53


Emotional


Maan standing firm as a pillar for Geet

and I think she truly needed him this time as she

wants answers and gets to know her past with her mother's past

though I feel her mother was wrong but then again she needed help

while Geet's father concentrated on his career instead of finding out the root prolem

in his family

at some point I can understand Rano treating Geet bad because that is what she was taught

in her own father's house that daughters has no value

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 54


Emotional and Fantastic


Maan and Geet at his Penthouse

and she is totally broken at the same time been emotional wrecked

she is just looking for some kind of comfort

she want to get intimate again with Maan

but I'm hoping that she does not regret this time

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 55


Emotional and Sizzling


Maan is in love with Geet but he kinds of understand her

that she cannot be in s serious relation right now without facing her past demons

Maan wants love he is at the age to settle again

yet Geet in her pain did not realize she is treating Maan like he is a one night stand object

this time been with Geet brought on some kind of pain for him

for he knew it was not love neither was it attraction

it was just a deviation of pain for Geet

she tells Pari that both she and Maan communicate well and have lots of communication

between them

but this time I feel Geet failed to realize , whatever happened was just been forced

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hello Aditi
hope that you are fine

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Aditi

hope you are fine

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