Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 65

Originally posted by: cooljigu

Amazing updates.

It good that pari had a talk with Rey n I think its make her lighter..

Arjun need someone to whom he can share n that was his Arohi n she explained to him that he was wrong with annie.

I think now new pair is going to come Ajrun n Arohi.

Brij n Sam n Pari n Rey..

Mrs sood was very rude with geet.

Like d way geet gave ans to Mrs sood.

Brij doesn't want sam to kwn abt maan moving on with his sis geet.

All r happy that annie n vicky make a good pair.

Now she is not thinking anything abt ppl or wht they will talk or think abt her.

Wow wht grt rappo of maan n geet ...

Geet need to understand herself n see in depth abt herself wht is have feeling with maan.

Wanna to see maan geet n muskaan scene.

Thank you dear! I am glad you enjoyed it.😊

Everyone should have a best friend who can tell us when we are wrong and correct us. I brought Arohi to pair up with Arjun but who knows where my writing will take me.

Geet is slowly being more self confident and I am sure you will enjoy her growth in the coming updates. I am not yet sure of Brij and Sam but the story seems to be heading there. Who knows?

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Thank you for updating

Part 49

Fascinating update...... brilliantly written

agree that Geet and Maan look right together.

they indeed bring out the in each other.....

they were destined to be together

can understand Pari's tension

I am sure that Maan will never hurt Geet

sad seeing the change in Pari.....

hope she starts enjoying life again

at least she Rehaan introduced her to Vicky

well Rehan knows Pari so well

at least she was able to confide in Rehaan

of cos Arjun drowns himself in work

Arohi was correct.....

Arjun and Arohi are friends and can become more.......

Thank you dear! I am glad you enjoyed it.

I think Pari knows deep down Maan is the right one for Geet but she doesn't want Geet to get hurt. Plus there is Muskaan to think of as well. I am sure Pari will find her way to live life again. Let's see where the story takes them.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 50

tremendous update..... awesomely written

can understand that Geet needed a breather

hate this Mrs Sood!

she is so disgusting.....

loved how Geet responded to her

proud of Geet.....

well Geet is indeed amused with Mrs Sood

great that Maan heard everything

as expected Mrs Sood is scared of Maan

of cos Maan is angry with Mrs Sood

terrific moments

Maan will never let Geet fall

Adore his sweet gestures

liked that Maan will kiss her when she loves him too....

Geet's thoughts well portrayed

so Sameera was invited to the party!
I feel Sameera and Brij are also perfect for each other
they know and understand each other so well

can understand Sameera's curiosity regarding Maan

at least she wants Maan to be happy

when will she get to know that the lady that Maan is with is Geet?

surprised that Brij is dancing

update soon

Thank you dear! I am glad you enjoyed it.

I think everyone has meet someone obnoxious like Mrs. Sood poking her nose somewhere it didn't belong. I am glad you enjoyed Maaneet moments. I am still not sure of Brij and Sam but i will let my story guide me and see what comes out. Sameera and Maan are still in touch and she had a very close relationship with Annie so she was invited.

Originally posted by: pallavimn

Superb dear...

Maaneet and sam and brij will understand their feeling soon.

Update soon dear.

Take care.

Thank you dear! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: aparna3011

49 n 50

rehan trying his best to make pari normal as her self

maan defend geet when mrs sood geet's mother's friend bad mouth to her

brij trying not to hurt sam sharing with whom maan is moving on in his life

Thank you dear! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: taahir004

Thanks for Updating

Part 49

Its rather sad that Pari holds on to a bitter memory

one of anger and bitterness with her husband

but that is just life ,

Pari must have started changing during the cause of her marriage

and perhaps she never noticed it

it was Yash that had to deal with her new self

but now he is no more so Pari needs to slowly stop been so

overtly cautious

otherwise her life will pass her by without any joys

before Pari can actually want to move on she needs to forgive herself

and let her past go

as for Arjun its rather late now that he realizes his mistake but its also

good that he realizes it and learns from it

when ever he is ready again for another relationship he will first be able

to respect his partner and share important matters with her

it seems Arohi is someone that can be a good friend to Arjun

especially in these sadden dampen days

Thank you dear! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Sometimes we are last one to notice the changes in us. If it was any other day, most probably they would have kissed and made up and it would have just been another fight between couples. i think the problem is that Pari didn't get the chance to say sorry to Yash. Maybe now with Rey's help she will be able to forgive herself.

Realizing our mistakes is the first step towards being a better person and learning from it. Arohi can be a good listener for Arjun.

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 50

Beautiful Update

Oh Geet is finally freeing herself of her past burdens

and demons she has finally stood up for herself

and that is amazing

while Maan too telling Mrs Sood he is aware of her talk

with Geet was indeed showing his presence standing strong

and in support of Geet .

oh how beautiful both Maan and Geet got close and wow

he telling Geet he wants her to kiss him only when she loves him

but it also seems like Geet's feelings are slowly changing towards Maan

though she now has to truly decide and realize her true feelings

I believe Sam still loves Maan and never thought that he would get

into a serious relation so soon

I guess Sam will be shocked to know that Maan is in love with Geet

but I do hope her friendship with Brij does not get effected

Thank you dear! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Geet is slowly getting stronger and standing up for herself is a small part of that. I am sure you will enjoy the coming updates as well.

Sameera is a complicated character. She has her own issues and demons to fight. I think a part of Sameera still loves Maan. what her reaction would be when she comes to know about Maaneet is for me to write and you to read about.😉

Originally posted by: MA1970

Nice update. When Yash died he was angry not clear on this. At the party so different Geet who stood by and gave back the woman who was trying to insult her. On the other side Brij is happy for Geet as he feels Maan is right for. Sameera too enters the party as she is invited by Annie and sees Maan dancing with someone Brij wants to distract her. Maan tells Geet that they will come close only when she loves him waw that was one kind of incorrect confession. Waiting for the next update.

Thank you dear! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Maan had indirectly confessed but I am sure he will confess once he is assured Geet is ready to listen to his confession.

Originally posted by: sanum23

Awesome

Arjun was wrong when he left Annie without sharing problem Ari is right she's khurran's and they do have security

Arohi is friend of him and giving right suggestion

Pari is concern about Geet and rehaan try to make enjoy the time he intro Vicky to her

Mrs Sood didn't like MSK giving importance to Geet she have another motive and she just like Geet mother she try to insult Geet so she back off from Maan but Geet gave her back to back answers and Maan too was their and heard their conversation Mr's Sood didn't want to come in bad book of Maan so she left

Maan is happy thay Geet changed and get strong to face society Geet too feel free not afraid of what ppl talk about her

Maan get close to her and she feel safe like before his presences make her feel comfortable and secure he confessed his feelings by telling her he only kiss her when she in love with him she didn't said anything just hug him

Sam met brij and her topic were Maan is she still didn't over him brij try to distract her by offering her dance

Brij thought she might feel hurt to know Maan get over her that soon and the woman is his sister whom Maan prefer over Sam

Thank you dear! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Geet has grown stronger and more self assured. I am glad you are enjoying her journey. Love works in strange ways.

Arohi is being a good friend to Arjun and I think it can be a foundation for a strong relationship. Brij and Sam each have their own set of demons they need to conquer.

Originally posted by: janu2006

Beautiful concept

Came across your story

Maaneet’s relationship progressing slowly

Guess brij also feels for Sam

Cont soon

Thank you dear! I am glad you enjoyed it.